Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-24762 Novel Imaging Biomarkers for Mapping the Impact of Mild Mitochondrial Uncoupling in the Outer Retina In Vivo PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Berkowitz (Bruce), Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please include light adapted retinas in your study, and consider the impact of ATP depletion as a consequence of dinitrophenol treatment. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript under review by Bruce Berkowitz and collaborators describes potentially useful MRI and OCT determinations to evaluate the effects of systemic administration of an oxidative phosphorylation uncoupler on the retina. The article is clearly written and the data is well presented and carefully analyzed. However, the experimental design and interpretation of the data need to be reassessed in view of the following considerations: 1) Only dark adapted retinas were analyzed. The justification for this is based on the accepted view (refs. 23-25) that oxidative phosphorylation in the retina is more active in the dark than under light because of a faster ATP turnover. However, this implies that mitochondrial reserve capacity is reduced in the dark, that is, basal respiration will be closer to its maximal possible rate in the dark than under light adapted conditions. This limits the effect of uncoupling by administration of agents such as DNP, given that respiration rate is almost completely maxed out even in the absence of endogenous uncoupler. Inclusion in the study of light adapted retinas should render the effects of uncoupling much more evident, while still showing strain-specific quantitative differences. 2) Ex-vivo basal and maximal respiration (used to calculate mitochondrial reserve capacity) comparing S6 and B6 retinas has only been assessed under light adapted conditions (ref. 4), but not after dark adaptation. Water content and retinal thickness was found to be different between the two strains only under light (but not dark) adaptation (ref. 4). This also highlights the need to perform the reported experiments under light adapted conditions. 3) Mild uncoupling should not be considered to simply decrease oxygen concentration and acidity by virtue of an increased mitochondrial oxygen consumption and CO2 generation; its more important (and undesirable) effect is likely the decrease in the rate of ATP synthesis by dissipating the protonmotive force across the mitochondrial membrane, especially in photoreceptors (and more critically in the dark because of a higher ATP demand), where little mitochondrial reserve capacity exists. Is the content of high energy phosphates (i.e. creatine phosphate and ATP) changing upon addition of DNP? These have been monitored in other tissues by NMR (see Balaban, RS et al. (1986) Science 232:1121-3), or could also be quantified by mass spectrometry (metabolomics approach) or even by biochemical methods (although less reliably). If ATP/creatine phosphate content does change, is the energy compromise the real cause of the change in water mobility? Uncoupled mitochondria are usually targeted for degradation by quality control mechanisms such as mitophagy (see Georgakopoulos ND et al. (2017) Nat Chem Biol 13:136-146, for example). Is this happening in dark adapted photoreceptors at the DNP concentrations used? What would be the consequences of such changes on the imaging biomarkers presented in this paper? Even if the DNP concentrations used in this paper have been validated as non-toxic for the brain (ref. 10), it could well be that cells with much lower reserve capacity than brain neurons, such as photoreceptors, are being subjected to a damaging energetic limitation. Therefore, experiments showing that the so-called "mild" uncoupling employed in the present study is not compromising the energetic status of the retina should be included. 4) As stated by the authors, the MRI R1 is sensitive to both oxygen and ROS concentrations. These do not necessarily go in the same direction (see for instance Quarrie R et al. (2014) Am J Physiol Heart Circ Physiol. 307:H996-H1004). Which molecules contribute more to the R1 signal? Can they be distinguished by other methods? Related to this, NADPH is important for detoxifying ROS in mitochondria (see Francisco A et al. (2018) J Neurochem. 2018 147:663-677). Is the B6 strain used in the present study the same as the C57BL/6J strain that has a truncated version of the Nnt gene that codes for mitochondrial nicotinamide nucleotide transhydrogenase? If so, could this be the reason in the different patterns reported between the S6 and B6 strain? Reviewer #2: This is an important study from a group that has developed unique MRI-based methods and used them together with OCT to quantify and characterize distributions of O2, free radicals and water in mouse eyes. This study focuses on the effects of dinitrophenol on these distributions. Previous studies from this lab showed metabolic differences between two mouse strains so this report also includes a comparison of the effects of DNP on retinas from those two mouse strains. The study showed that DNP causes thinning and lowering of O2 levels in specific parts of the retinas and that this effect occurs to a greater extent in the S6 strain than in the B6 strain. The molecular interpretation of the findings is not yet definitive, but the authors do show how the methodology is fairly robust and that it can be used to report effects of metabolic perturbations. Specific comments/suggestions: 1. line 84 - "...oxygen consumption rates are greater in S6 mice than in B6 mice..." Is this correct? - my reading of Fig. 1 in ref 4 was that O2 consumption is faster in B6 than in S6. Please correct or clarify. 2. This study reports effects only on dark-adapted animals whereas other reports from this group also included effects of light adaptation. Mitochondria from dark-adapted animals may be more active because of the increased demand for ATP synthesis in darkness than in light. Based on that, I would predict that effects of DNP might be more pronounced in light than they would be in darkness. Based on previous reports there could a greater fold increase in O2 consumption induced by DNP in light compared to darkness, there also could be a greater fold increase in water production induced by DNP in light compared to dark. Also, the authors reported previously that there is a hyporeflective band in OCT in light that is not present in darkness, so it I think it would be very relevant in this report to determine if there are effects of DNP on that feature. Such an experiment may help to define whether the hyporeflective band arises from a functional effect such as phototransduction of if instead it is caused by a metabolic effect (mitochondria may become more active with DNP, which would simulate their increased activity in darkness. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Raul Covian Reviewer #2: Yes: James Bryant Hurley [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Novel Imaging Biomarkers for Mapping the Impact of Mild Mitochondrial Uncoupling in the Outer Retina In Vivo PONE-D-19-24762R1 Dear Dr. Berkowitz (Bruce), We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Al Lewin, Ph.D. Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: James B Hurley |
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PONE-D-19-24762R1 Novel Imaging Biomarkers for Mapping the Impact of Mild Mitochondrial Uncoupling in the Outer Retina In Vivo Dear Dr. Berkowitz: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Alfred S Lewin Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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