Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-25609 Prediction of overt hepatic encephalopathy by the continuous reaction time method and the portosystemic encephalopathy syndrome test in clinically mentally unimpaired patients with cirrhosis PLOS ONE Dear Ms Wernberg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see, both reviewers evaluated your study as interesting and carefully performed, however, suggested additional information to be added/additional analyses to be performed. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 18 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In the Methods, please cite the original references describing the development of the PSE and CRT tests, or describe how others may gain access to them. If the PSE test was published under a copyright no more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy as Supporting Information. 3. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified whether consent was informed." Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Wernberg et al. investigated the predictive ability of CRT and PHES regarding the development of OHE in patients with liver cirrhosis. This study represents a lot of hard work that is carefully done. I have only a few comments: 1. Since medical files were reviewed retrospectively, how did you exclude that patients were hospitalized with OHE in different hospitals? 2. For how long did patients have to stop drinking before being included into the study? 3. Did you include patients with HCC? 4. Is it correct that no patient was lost to follow-up? 5. Is it correct that no patient required liver transplantation? 6. Currently, you are not dealing with competing events like death or liver transplantation in your analyses. I would recommend adding cumulative incidence plots for every testing strategy. Here death and liver transplantation can be considered as competing events for OHE. Additionally, please provide a table with the hazard ratios and confidence intervals of your multivariable analyses. 7. Some studies already investigated the predictive ability of PHES regarding development of OHE. Additionally, a recent study by Duarte-Rojo et al. tested the utility of single versus combined testing (Duarte-Rojo et al, Metab Brain Dis 2019). Here, the authors conclude that combined testing is not superior to single testing to predict OHE. This is somehow in contrast to your conclusion. Can the authors comment on this? 8. Line 25: “The negative predictive value of the CRT alone was 79%”. In figure 1 it is 78%. Please correct this. 9. Line 249:”of three fourths excellent”; Line 262 “showed excellent prediction”. A sensitivity of three fourths cannot be declared as excellent. Please tone these sentences down. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript Wernberg et al. assessed the predictive value of the continuous reaction time method (CRT) and the portosystemic encephalopathy syndrome (PSE) test for episodes of overt hepatic encephalopathy in patients with liver cirrhosis. They assessed 130 patients with liver cirrhosis with both tests and followed them for an average of 38.5 months. Of the 74 patients with an abnormal CRT 23 patients developed an overt HE and of the 47 patients with an abnormal PSE test 14 patients developed overt HE. When one or both tests were abnormal the prediction sensitivity was 77%. The authors conclude that the CRT alone but especially the combination of CRT and PSE test are clinically useful to identify patients who are at risk to develop overt HE. The authors suggest that all patients with liver cirrhosis should be tested psychometrically and if pathological, preventive treatment should be initiated. This manuscript addresses an important topic and I congratulate the authors for performing this follow-up study. Testing patients with liver cirrhosis psychometrically is important and has clinical impact. Comments: In general: - The authors should provide references for statements where applicable. - Please add “%” after all patient numbers throughout the manuscript where applicable. Abstract: - Please revise the first sentence. I suggest that the authors delete the word “unpleasant” and replace it with “impairment of health related quality of life” and “cognitive impairment”. - Please correct “Porto Systemic Encephalopathy Test (PSE)” to “portosystemic encephalopathy (PSE) syndrome test” and use this spelling throughout the manuscript. - Please provide a hypothesis. - Lines 30/31: The description of the PSE is wrong, please correct it. (The PSE does not only measure time, e.g. digit symbol test, line tracing test) Introduction: - Line 47: Please revise as described above - Lines 52-55: Please revise this sentence. - Please provide a hypothesis at the end of the introduction Patients and methods: - Line 78: Please define “no clinically detectable cognitive deficit”. Did the authors use a test? - The inclusion and exclusion criteria should be described - Lines 89/90: This sentence is hard to understand, please revise it. - Lines 92-97: move this paragraph further up. Delete “which none met at the time of inclusion” as it is self-explanatory. - Line 101: spelling error - Line 107: please revise this sentence - Line 115: I am surprised that the CRT is not influenced by age as it is well known that age influences reaction time in general. Can the authors please specify their comment? - A reference for the PSE test is missing - Please correct the description of the PSE test - Why did the authors use norm data of the German population and not those of the Danish population? - Lines 146/147: Could you please make the names of the different groups easier to understand e.g. “CRT/PSE normal”, “CRT abnormal/PSE normal” etc. Results: - Table 1: Can you please provide the pairwise analysis for the significant p-values - Line 178: The title of table 2 is misunderstanding. Had all patients 38 months follow up? - Lines 186/187/201/205: Please choose a clearer title. For example “Prediction of OHE using only CRT test” etc. - Please provide the measured mean values of the CRT and PHES. Discussion: - I recommend to provide a short introduction at the beginning of the discussion - Lines 234-237: Please revise this paragraph as it is hard to understand - Line 246: Reference is missing - Line 250: Please discuss the results of the paper in more detail. Especially why the PHES alone was “not meaningful”. This result contradicts that of other papers and should be discussed. - Line 253: please describe the problem - Did patients with recurrent episodes of OHE have worse psychometric test results than those with only one episode? - The authors should list limitations of the study. - In general: Please critically discuss the results of this study in detail and place them in the context of previous literature. Conclusions: - Lines 262/263: Please revise this sentence. - The last sentence (line 265) contradicts the results and should be revised: “in those with two abnormal tests…” In the results section these patients only have a predictive value of 29%. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Christian Labenz Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Prediction of overt hepatic encephalopathy by the continuous reaction time method and the portosystemic encephalopathy syndrome test in clinically mentally unimpaired patients with cirrhosis PONE-D-19-25609R1 Dear Dr. Wernberg, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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With kind regards, Pavel Strnad Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper has been further improved and my points were addressed accordingly. Congratulations on this fine piece of work! Reviewer #2: Thank you very much for addressing all comments! The authors have done an excellent job responding to the questions. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Christian Labenz, MD Reviewer #2: Yes: Henning Pflugrad, MD |
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PONE-D-19-25609R1 Prediction of overt hepatic encephalopathy by the continuous reaction time method and the portosystemic encephalopathy syndrome test in clinically mentally unimpaired patients with cirrhosis Dear Dr. Wernberg: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pavel Strnad Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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