Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-32052 Neonatal endotoxin stimulation was associated with long-term innate immune markers and an anti-allergic response in bronchiolar epithelium even after allergen challenge PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Luciana Noemi Garcia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by September 13, 2020. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please discuss relevant published literature and explain why such dose of LPS was selected. 6. 0.1 ml of OVA grade VI does not give us exact allergen concentration. Clarify. 7. Reference previously described lung morphology analysis accordingly. Similar for AB-PAS stain. 8. Were samples equalized for a protein level before Western blot? 9. Specify a software used for statistical analysis. 10. Please explain why LPS treatment increases IFNgamma but does not affect IL-4 levels in BAL. 11. Figure 2. Specify where cytokine levels were measured (BAL, serum, cell culture supernatants, etc.). Although it is stated in a title, first sentence in figure legend is missing this point. Panel d. It looks like OVA treatment induces Treg cells in BAL. Strongly. Now over 24% of CD4+ T cells co-express CD25 and Foxp3. Show a panel with absolute numbers of Treg cells for all experimental conditions. Should you focus on Foxp3+IL-10+ cells in this figure? 12. Figure 5, panel a. Incorporate arrows to point on where to look for described results. Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. Thank you for including your ethics statement: "Animal care and experiments were conducted following the recommendations of the International Guiding Principles for Biomedical Research Involving Animals and by the local CICUAL Ethical Committee. The experiments were conducted following the recommendations of Helsinki convention, and anaesthetic agents were provided during the different procedures. During airway challenge, animals were lightly anesthetized by inhaled isoflurane before the delivery dropwise to the nares of the volume using a pipetman; wich allows a quicker recovery time. Meanwhile for Bronchoalveolar lavage and lung collection mice were anesthetized (i.p.) with a mixture of ketamine (60 mg/kg) and xylazine (15 mg/kg) and immediately sacrificed by exsanguination." a. Please amend your current ethics statement to confirm that your named ethics committee specifically approved this study. b. Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”). For additional information about PLOS ONE submissions requirements for ethics oversight of animal work, please refer to http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-animal-research 3. 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For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study presents an asthma preventive effect later in life of neonatal application of LPS in mice. The study shows that neonatal LPS exposure reduced the severity of the disease by a reduction of inflammatory cells in BALs, a breathing score, cytokines, increased regulatory T cells and by several effects on epithelial cells. The study is accurately made, well analyzed and certainly of interest because it adds another piece to the understanding of how LPS might protect from the development of allergic diseases. A limitation is the missing of data about airway hyperresponsiveness to methacholine. Comments: 1. Lines 114-115: Please rephrase 2. Lines 118-120: Please rephrase 3. Lines 305-306: 4-6 weeks old mice are not really adult mice. Please adapt that in the whole text. 4. Line 307: there is a ‘t’ missing in the word ‘first’. 5. Figure legends: Please indicate the number of experiments and the number of animals used in each experiment. 6. Figures: Please don’t show bar graphs. Dot blots would be more suitable. And please indicate the significance between specific groups in the graph not only in the legend. 7. Figure 1b: It would increase the readability of graph if the cell types of the different groups would be next to each other. Like this, the difference in eosinophils between PBS/OVA and LPS/OVA is difficult to observe. And please don’t show discontinuous axes. 8. Lines 316: It should be Fig 1b. 9. Figure 1: It would be interesting to see if there is a difference in cytokines like IL-5, IL-13, IFN-gamma or IL-10. 10. Line 332: the term ‘airway’s milieu’ should be specified clearer. 11. Lines 337-341: This part should be explained a bit deeper. Where the cells only stained for IL-10 or IL-10 plus Foxp-3/CD25? Why was the ratio between IL-10 and CD4 cells was calculated? 12. Line 357-358: The mentioned ‘specific pro-inflammatory mediators’ should be specified more clearly. At the end of the sentence, there is a comma instead of a point. 13. Figure 3. It would be nice to see the quantification not only for the AB-PAS staining but also for TSLP and pEGFR. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Remo Frei, Department for BioMedical Research, University of Bern, Switzerland [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-32052R1 Neonatal endotoxin stimulation is associated with a long-term bronchiolar epithelial expression of innate immune and anti-allergic markers that attenuates the allergic response PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Noemi Garcia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR:
============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by 05/14/2020. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Svetlana P. Chapoval Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Respond to the following comments and revise manuscript accordingly: 1. Airway challenge in puberty and adulthood? Is this an appropriate statement for mice? 2. Line 232. Mouse anti-b-actin expression is actually a mouse b-actin detection with anti-b-actin Ab 3. Are website links to the protocol used acceptable for the journal? Like shown in lines 143, 177, 202, 215, 243, 271, and 276? 4. IFNg, PCR, and many others are standard abbreviations for the journal. No full definition is needed. TSLP ROS, PE, and PerCP probably too. Please correct. Note, that upon their first mentioning in the manuscript text, which is in the abstract, no full definition is provided. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Neonatal endotoxin stimulation is associated with a long-term bronchiolar epithelial expression of innate immune and anti-allergic markers that attenuates the allergic response PONE-D-19-32052R2 Dear Dr. Luciana Noemi Garcia, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Svetlana P. Chapoval Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-19-32052R2 Neonatal endotoxin stimulation is associated with a long-term bronchiolar epithelial expression of innate immune and anti-allergic markers that attenuates the allergic response Dear Dr. García: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Svetlana P. Chapoval Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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