PONE-D-19-23451

Amiselimod (MT-1303), a novel sphingosine 1-phosphate receptor-1 functional antagonist, inhibits progress of chronic colitis induced by transfer of CD4+CD45RBhigh T cells

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Reviewer #1: Kyoko Shimano wrote the paper MT1303 S1PR1 antagonist ameliorated experimental colitis model. Previously many papers reported S1PR1 antagonist ameliorated colitis and S1PR1 antagonists are started to use in IBD patient (Clinical trial).

The experiment model was almost enough to support MT1303 suppress the colitis. However I would like to ask some questions below.

First of all, authors need to add the physiological condition. After orally administrated MT1303 to the B6 or Balbc mice, authors need to show the number of Th1/Th17/Treg cells in LP, mesenteric lymph node. Authors also need to add the cell number under the long term administration at least 28days. Show the macro picture of colon and mesenteric lymph node.

Second, in figure3 and 4 authors showed the MT1303 antagonist ameliorated colitis. I would ask the number of Tregs in these experiments, because Tregs are also essential to protect experimental colitis model (Mottet C. JI 2003.).

Finally, I would ask whether MT1303 cure the colitis. To solve the problem, I would ask colitis is ameliorated when MT1303 antagonist is administrated from day 1 to day 14 and observe until day 35 in experimental colitis model.

Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, Shimano et al demonstrated a novel S1P1R antagonist MT-1303 effectively inhibited the development of colitis to prevent infiltrating pathogenic Th1 and Th17 cells into colonic lamina propria. Although it is quite interesting, I have several comments as below.

1. Other than Th1 and Th17 cells, Foxp3+ regulatory T cells (Tregs) are also induced in this colitis model. How Tregs are affected by MT-1303 treatment?

2. A previous publication of the authors (Chiba K et al, Int Immunopharmacol (2003)) showed that the ratio of both Th1 and Th17 in local site (spinal cord) was lower but that in lymph node was higher by FTY720 treatment in EAE model. However, in the colitis model, it seems curious because indeed absolute number of infiltrating T cells was lower, no significant change of the ratio was observed in the intestine. Please explain this discrepancy.

3. It is well known that IL-10 has a regulatory role of immune responses of the intestine. The authors should check whether IL-10 expression in T cells are affected by MT-1303 treatment.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Tomohisa Sujino

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PONE-D-19-23451R1

Amiselimod (MT-1303), a novel sphingosine 1-phosphate receptor-1 functional antagonist, inhibits progress of chronic colitis induced by transfer of CD4+CD45RBhigh T cells

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Both reviewers asked the effect of MT-1303 on Treg cells in the colitis model. However authors did not provide any evidence concerning this point. Unfortunately, no additional experimental data was provided. It is very hard to accept this paper without any additional information. Please perform at least one experiment.

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Amiselimod (MT-1303), a novel sphingosine 1-phosphate receptor-1 functional antagonist, inhibits progress of chronic colitis induced by transfer of CD4+CD45RBhigh T cells

PONE-D-19-23451R2

Dear Dr. Sugahara,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements.

Authors performed experiments showing the effect of MT-1303 on Treg migration. The data are clear and raise a new possibility of the involvement of Tregs in the effect of MT-1303 on anti-inflammatory effects. This paper is now acceptable for publication, but the editor hope that authors further study the effect of this interesting compound on Treg-related long term tolerance in the future.

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