Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-16003 Trust Development as an Expectancy-learning Process Testing Contingency Effects PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bosmans, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I was able to receive the input of two reviewers for this manuscript and I thank them for their careful attention to their work. I have also read the manuscript carefully and, like the reviewers, have mixed feelings about the work. The experimental paradigm is quite strong. The work is moving forward on the hypothesis that learning contingencies influences the development, emergence, or changes in trust. This kind of learning work has been becoming more frequently studied with regard to human computer interaction (e.g., https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/22046724). Reviewer 1 identifies several related lines of work that were not described in the manuscript. The results also challenge the framing of the work within an attachment context. Based on the paradigm used and the very modest effect sizes noted between the attachment measure and behaviorally assessed trust, this framing is very tenuous. Reviewer 2 identifies several instances where interpretations along these lines goes beyond the data. Both Reviewers offered comments about the magnitude of effects and I will press on them further. The correlation estimates are very modest and, based on the sample sizes, the studies were underpowered to detect these associations. There are other analytic decisions that are challenging to reconcile. Given the study design, it was not clear why analyses did primarily rely on the RM-ANOVAs and the post-hoc tests from that model. There were multiple t-tests conducted that would be enveloped within the larger RM-ANOVA model. Because of these conceptual and empirical challenges, the conclusions go beyond what the data indicate. Thus, I cannot recommend a favorable disposition for your manuscript at this time. I offer you the opportunity to significantly revise your manuscript that I know will be very effortful. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Aug 26 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please note that according to our submission guidelines (http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines), outmoded terms and potentially stigmatizing labels should be changed to more current, acceptable terminology. For example: “Caucasian” should be changed to “white” or “of [Western] European descent” (as appropriate). 4. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. Please ensure that the description of each of the experiments performed includes a description of the consent procedures. In the Methods section(s), please ensure that you have specified (1) whether consent was informed and (2) what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal). Please state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians for all studies including minors. 5. Please amend either the title on the online submission form (via Edit Submission) or the title in the manuscript so that they are identical. 6. Please include a title for tables 1-3. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall this is an excellent set of studies that build on each other and present an important methodological approach to applying learning theory to trust development. The data are convincing and the methods are sound. I have a few requests: 1) The authors should probably refrain from referring to "marginally significant" results as this is technically a violation of frequentist statistical approaches from most points of view, although this is an admittedly minor issue. 2) 2)More importantly, it would be useful for the authors to provide both confidence intervals on point estimates and effect size information. This type of information is critical for determining the soundness of the results and understanding the degree of uncertainty with which the effects are estimated. The results are in line with previous findings and theory, but offer important advances in methodology and a first guess as to what "responsiveness" or "good enough" really means. This type of work is critical for advancing the field's knowledge regarding attachment learning and trust development. Overall this manuscript is very well written and provides compelling evidence for the theoretical ideas therein. A final note, similar work in the adult attachment literature has found similar evidence for the same learning theory based approach. The authors may be interested in these articles given the similarity in theory and approach. Beckes, L. Simons, K., Lewis, D., Le, A., & Edwards, W. L. (2017). Desperately seeking support: Negative reinforcement schedules in the formation of adult attachment associations. Social Psychological and Personality Science, 8, 229-238. Beckes, L., & Coan, J. A. (2015). The distress-relief dynamic in attachment bonds. In C. Hazan & V. Zayas (Eds.), Bases of Adult Attachment: Linking Brain, Mind, and Behavior (pp. 11-33). New York, NY, US: Springer Science + Business Media. Beckes, L., Coan, J. A., & Morris, J. P. (2013). Implicit conditioning of faces via the social regulation of emotion: ERP evidence of early attentional biases for security conditioned faces. Psychophysiology, 50, 734-742. Beckes, L., Simpson, J. A, & Erickson, A. B. (2010). Of snakes and succor: Learning secure attachment associations with novel faces via negative stimulus pairings. Psychological Science, 21, 721 – 728. Reviewer #2: The authors use a learning theory approach, seeking to illuminate the processes by which child-caregiver trust and help seeking develop. Using a task in which adults and children learn reward schedules from a "caregiver" the authors measured trust as a function of caregivers who are likely to provide the correct answer at different rates. The study is an interesting possible analogue to these processes and the learning theory account is welcome. I agree with the authors that such a framework is likely to yield specific hypotheses. At the same time, I have feedback the authors may consider: 1. One concern I have with the paper is that the authors say they are seeking to illuminate the "underlying developmental mechanism" of trust and help seeking with caregivers. However, their study can speak very little to these processes. It is unclear whether the results are consistent with reward learning in close relationships, or, alternatively, the authors would have found the exact same results if participants were told they were playing with a computer. The authors seek to capture a process, but only show that trust increases with certain rates of reward and not others, and help seeking is higher in some conditions than others. It is not clear, however, whether what they describe is consistent with the processes of developing trust or seeking help in attachment contexts. Just as much as these data could describe a process somewhat similar to developing trust in close relationships, it could just as easily describe adults and children learning reward rates in a laboratory task. 2. Similarly, it is possible that learning rates of reward explains these developmental processes, but this ignores the extensive evidence of an attachment system that predisposes children to maintain proximity and use caregivers as a source soothing. I wonder how the authors might reconcile findings from attachment theory with their own approach? 3. There are times when the discussion (which appears frequently in the results section) seems to get too far from the data and the limitations of the approach. The following two sentences are examples, but not the only instances: "So, this was the first evidence suggesting that good enough mothering requires at least 80% contingent care”. "These results suggest that negative care-related experiences outweigh prior positive learning experiences.” The framework is simply not strong enough to support these claims. Similarly, the authors found that trust in one's caregiver was related to baseline trust in a "novel caregiver", though the correlations were low (r = .24 and r = .16) with only one truly significant. These data are not overwhelmingly convincing - I think if we posited the hypothesis that trust within these two contexts was different, we'd find ourselves with some evidence to suggest that they are. Could the authors provide a more constrained reporting of the meaning of these results? 4. The authors start the paper seeking to justify their experimental approach. While I understand their desire to point out the limitations of previous research, I wonder if they may go too far with sentences like “Clinically, broadband correlational studies are difficult to translate into concrete therapeutic strategies.” I’m not sure that they are, and there are treatments that have been developed based on this research. The authors may want to find another way to introduce their study, particularly because the major limitation of the current study is that ecological validity is decreased by the experimental approach with “new caregivers”, which may make it quite difficult to translate these findings into the clinical realm. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-19-16003R1 Trust Development as an Expectancy-learning Process: Testing Contingency Effects. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bosmans, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please see the comments below from the Academic Editor. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Thomas M. Olino Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I have received feedback from both of the original reviewers. You will see that Reviewer 1 is fully satisfied with the revision, but Reviewer 2 continues to have some significant reservations. I concur with the sentiment that the work of integrating learning into attachment research is important. At the same time, there are comments in the manuscript that go beyond the data. Reviewer 2 is very specific in the types of comments for which this is a significant concern. Please also carefully review the percentage of contingencies through the sections on Study 3. There seem to be inaccuracies in 50 vs. 70 vs. 100 compared to the test contingencies of 20 vs. 80. vs. 100. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall I think this is a very important contribution to the attachment literature. Attachment theory needs to be integrated with learning theory. Whereas Bowlby created a compelling overall model of attachment and how it develops, given the paucity of data on neurobiology at the time it inadequately addresses the fundamental mechanisms underlying attachment learning. Although one may argue that the underlying mechanism of attachment is an innate behavioral system, and therefore no standard learning mechanisms can explain attachment dynamics, I believe this is a fundamental error in both reading Bowlby and for the future of attachment theory writ large. Bowlby argues for a goal corrected behavioral system. This implies learning. The mechanisms he uses to explain such learning are based in a perspective of homeostasis that no longer comports with our understanding of physiological regulation. It is clear that learning processes are subserved by general purpose neural systems that function in a manner well characterized by learning theory, and that those systems are critical for the regulation of physiological and psychological needs. Bowlby was working in a time when behaviorists were too narrow minded about the breadth of basic rewards and punishments. They completely ignored the possibility that social contact was a very real need in the same vein as food and water. Moreover, their blank slate view of all animals was unsustainable. As such theorists like Bowlby filled that vacuum with models that did not rely on learning theory based mechanisms. Unfortunately for the field it has taken far too long to reconcile and integrate Bowlby's critical contributions with those of the behaviorists and cognitive learning theorists that followed. This is an important step in that direction and I applaud the authors for their creativity and boldness in furthering this integration. Reviewer #2: The authors have made some major revisions to their manuscript which I think improve the overall product. At the same time, I still think their conclusions go well beyond the bounds of their research design in places and could be further qualified. I have specific feedback below: Point 2. The authors make a valiant effort to discuss and resolve the tension between the role of learning theory in attachment and attachment as an innate biological system. I personally think there is a distinction between the processes of the attachment system, which seem to be innate, and attachment styles that are likely (at least partly) shaped by learning. It may be worthwhile to differentiate their discussion in this way, as they have started in their added text, to some degree. Attachment theorists often propose a model akin to learning theory to explain the development of anxious, avoidant or secure attachment styles, while at the same time noting Bowlby’s regard for attachment processes (meaning proximity seeking, secure base, etc.) as primary needs. Researchers often discuss, for instance, that secondary attachment styles are still ways to maintain attachment (e.g., proximity to caregiver) in non-ideal contexts (e.g., parent is rejecting of attachment needs). Delineating what is/can be learned may be more innate is an important discussion for this paper. 3. I still feel like these phrases are too much for the research method to support. There may quite a bit different about interacting with a real attachment figure during a critical timepoint in life that makes a lower percentage of contingent care necessary, for instance. I would advice deleting this claim, and all others like it. The authors show a proof of concept, which is interesting, but I would not try to push for the idea that we are really seeing attachment-like processes unfolding. The data don't seem to support that either (see 4). 4. The authors now note that their lack of a significant finding of a correlation between trust in a “novel caregiver” and trust in the mother may be due to reduced power. However, the effect size is simply extremely small in the case of study 2. Even if this were significant, given the author’s claims that they are measuring attachment processes is problematic when there is such a small relationship between these measures. I would omit the mention of reduced power being the fault and more clearly state that these data may argue against the same process being measured in both instances. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Trust Development as an Expectancy-learning Process: Testing Contingency Effects. PONE-D-19-16003R2 Dear Dr. Bosmans, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Thomas M. Olino Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for your careful attention to the comments of Reviewer 2. They provide a tempered evaluation of the results that provides promise for future work. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-16003R2 Trust Development as an Expectancy-learning Process: Testing Contingency Effects. Dear Dr. Bosmans: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Thomas M. Olino Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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