Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 25, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-17881 Upregulation of ERK phosphorylation in rat dorsal root ganglion neurons contributes to oxaliplatin-induced chronic neuropathic pain PLOS ONE Dear Dr. MARUTA, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the reviewers' points, especially those criticizing the statistical analyses. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 06 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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At this time, we request that you please report additional details in your Methods section regarding animal care, as per our editorial guidelines: a) Please describe any steps taken to minimize animal suffering and distress, such as by administering analgesics, b) Please include the method of sacrifice and c) Please describe the post-operative care received by the animals, including the frequency of monitoring and the criteria used to assess animal health and well-being. Thank you for your attention to these requests. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the current manuscript, the authors investigate the factors underlying the neuropathy development following oxaliplatin treatment in rats. This phenotype is seen after 3-4 weeks of treatment. The authors propose that upregulation of ERK phosphorylation in rat DRG neurons is responsible for generating this pain phenotype. They use ERK inhibition in combination with the evaluation of mechanical pain and western blot analysis to show that this mechanism may be responsible for the oxaliplatin-induced neuropathic pain. The data are conciseness and supportive, the study is well written and the conclusions are broadly reasonable. To improve the paper the authors should consider the following points: 1. The authors need to increase the sample size to ascertain that this time course of the incidence of mechanical allodynia in oxaliplatin group respect to vehicle group is not related to the small sample size -i.e. n=5 per group. The control group show a high variability These results will provide crucial information to the interpretation of the current data set (Fig1). 2. The authors should include more information that clarifies and justifies their statistical analyses. Specify the statistical methods performed in the figure legends and include the significance values in manuscript text. Please also provide all vehicle group values (mean +/- SD) which are used to relative the oxaliplatin group values, and F and P-values for each individual factor for all statistic performed. 3. For the ERK inhibition experiments on oxaliplatin-induced neuropathic pain, important further controls include sham rats that receive vehicle and ERK inhibitor in behavioral test and western blot. While this represents significant additional experiments, it would help interpret the existing main findings. 4. There have been previous reports of acute oxaliplatin administration already contributes to mechanical hyperalgesia (peripheral neuropathic pain) in DRG involving different mechanisms (Huang et al., 2018; Illias et al., 2018) - perhaps this should be integrated in their discussion. Reviewer #2: This paper studied the factors contributing to the induction of chemotherapy-induced peripheral neuropathy (CIPN), using the platinum based chemotherapeutic agent, oxaliplatin. The authors used a rat model of oxaliplatin-induced neuropathic pain to evaluate the role of different mitogen-activated protein kinase (MAPK) pathways in the dorsal root ganglia of the lumbar spinal cord segment. The authors were specifically interested in studying the expression of ERK in the DRG, and the effect oxaliplatin treatment had on ERK phosphorylation in relation to the onset of mechanical allodynia. The results from these experiments report that oxaliplatin induces phosphorylation of EDK, and that delivering an ERK inhibitor inhibited oxaliplatin-induced ERK phosphorylation and blocked the onset of mechanical allodynia. This paper provides great insight on the pathology underlying the development of cancer induced neuropathic pain. A lot of research in the pain field has focused on other models of chronic pain, such as diabetic neuropathy and peripheral nerve injury, but mechanisms underlying cancer therapeutic induced neuropathic pain are still not understood. I believe that these findings would contribute to furthering our knowledge on the pathology driving chronic pain caused by anti-cancer agents. There are questions and comments that should be addressed, before moving forward. Abstract/Introduction: • Lines 29-30: The statement "we aimed to understand the factors involved in the development and maintenance of chronic neuropathy elicited by oxaliplatin treatment" is misleading. The pathology underlying, both, the development and maintenance of chronic pain is a complex, multi-phase process involving changes in peripheral and central nervous system. The design of this study focused on the mechanism driving the onset of mechanical allodynia in relation to the effect oxaliplatin treatment had on the expression of p-ERK within the DRG, rather than the process of transitioning from acute to chronic pain. Clarifying the aim will strengthen the conclusions made by the authors, and help readers better interpret the data presented in each experiment. This statement is also made again in lines 68-70. • Lines 49-60: Background information is introduced only on sodium ion channels and TRP channels, indicating their role in temperature hypersensitivity. A brief overview of current literature on mechanoreceptors in pain models should be introduced to reinforce that the author's are specifically studying mechanical allodynia because it's pathophysiology is poorly understood in this model of chronic pain. Methods: • Lines 87-112: Why was there a difference in duration of treatment between experiments 1 and 2? Do you have data comparing p-ERK/ERK expression in animals receiving treatment for 3 weeks versus animals receiving treatment for 4 weeks? • Lines 107-108: The sham procedure is unclear. Did sham animals receive any i.p. or i.t. treatment, or were they naïve? Results: • The figure legends indicate values are expressed as mean +/- SD, but the values aren't reported in the results sections, figure legends, or on the graphs. • The number of animals assigned to each treatment group should be reported on all the graphs. • Lines 228-241: The mechanical allodynia measurements from the sham group need to be included in Figure 6 and incorporated into the statistical analysis. The sham behavioral data should be presented in this figure in order compare all three groups in Figure 7. Discussion: • Lines 285-289: The authors expand on the findings from previous studies concerning the involvement of voltage dependent sodium channel subtypes in the pathophysiology of oxaliplatin-induced neuropathy. The author's findings from the experiments on Na1.7, Na1.8, and Na1.9 expression in the DRG are consistent with the literature, but recent studies have reported that Na1.6 expression in the DRG contributes to the onset of oxaplatin induced neuropathic pain. The reports characterize Na1.6 in the DRG for its role in pain behavior as well as having abnormal spontaneous neuronal activity following nerve injury. Evidence from these studies show that directly targeting Na1.6 in the DRG alleviates oxaplatin induced mechanical allodynia and cold hypersensitivity. These studies should be reviewed and interpreted in the context of this study in the final paragraph of the discussion. Overall, I thought this was a very well executed study that will contribute to the CIPN research community. After these points are addressed, I believe the manuscript will be ready to move forward in the review process as it satisfies the PLOS ONE criteria for publication. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-19-17881R1 Upregulation of ERK phosphorylation in rat dorsal root ganglion neurons contributes to oxaliplatin-induced chronic neuropathic pain PLOS ONE Dear Dr. MARUTA, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the statistical analysis issues raised by reviewer#1. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Ferenc Gallyas, Jr., Ph.D., D.Sc. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to authors: In the revised manuscript, the authors have adequately revised the manuscript and addressed important questions regarding the experimental results and analysis. But if possible, I would still like to address some point that were raised in the review: 1) In the behavioral experiments, in the comparisons between time points of the hind paw data is recommendable to perform a repeated measures ANOVA. 2) In western blot experiments, I agree with the authors that calculating data as percentages of control blot density (expressed as 100%) is a common way of representation. What I pointed out in the previous review is to express somehow the variance within the control group, since although it is considered 100%, it is an average of measures with SD. The protein density data quantified in ImageJ for experimental and control groups would support the levels of significance expressed in the figures (above suggested supplementary table). Also, because I understand that the statistical analysis has been carried out with these data. According to the authors, I consider that methodologically the most adequate quantification has not been performed due to the absence of internal standard. However, if it is possible to normalize the density of protein blots of each membrane with respect to the background of each of them. Have you been considered in the analysis? Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Zach LaMacchia [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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PONE-D-19-17881R2 Upregulation of ERK phosphorylation in rat dorsal root ganglion neurons contributes to oxaliplatin-induced chronic neuropathic pain Dear Dr. MARUTA: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ferenc Gallyas, Jr. Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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