Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 4, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-30739 Individual housing of male C57BL/6J mice after weaning impairs growth and predisposes for obesity PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schipper, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 17 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall this study successfully demonstrated the effects of individual housing of male mice on body weight and composition during adolescence and further in adulthood with standard or increased caloric intake diets. This is an important aspect of the current interest in obesity and in particular the use of rodent models. Since individual housing is a common approach for rodent studies the current findings are very pertinent to this, and other, area(s) of research using mice. Despite this, the authors have not made any comment on their decision to use pairs of mice as the social housing comparison. Mice are very commonly housed in larger groups, or even as trios, as has been the case in a number of the studies referenced in this manuscript. Certainly the authors demonstrated significant differences between the two groups of differently housed mice, however, it would have more applicability and relevance if the “control” group where a more common grouping. The general cage temperature is likely to be even higher in multiply-housed mice than when in pairs, indicating that housing mice in pairs may also be a form of chronic stress. 1. Abstract The abstract lacks any sortt of introduction and starts with the results which provides no context for conducting the study. This is partly resolved by the last sentence of the introduction, which should probably be the first sentence. 2. Results Most of the results are clearly and concisely presented, however there were a few that need further or alternate explanation. For example, it is unclear why, in Figure 1A the results are expressed as absolute body weight while in Figure 1B they are weight gain. This diminishes the effect of reduced weight gain in days PN21-42 in the IND mice and leads one to believe that at the start of the different diets the mice were all the same weight. It also means the reader cannot see at what age the IND mice become heavier that the SOC mice. In Figures 2 and 3 the authors have used different y-axis scales for the same parameter for the adolescent and adult mice and in some instances have not started at zero. This approach certainly highlights the differences between groups within each individual figure but makes comparisons between figures difficult. Since most differences are statistically significant there is no reason to “inflate” the results by manipulating the figures to emphasize statistical differences. In Table 2 for absolute body weights the authors have included a superscript for a “trend” according to the legend for Table 3 which does not appear in the Table 2 legend. Further, the text (line 106) states that the body weight was greater but not statistically for IND mice regardless of diet, yet the table implies otherwise. So it is unclear what the statistical significance of the difference in these groups of mice really is. Tables 3 and 4 which present the same data for adolescent and adult mice but otherwise differ in that for the adolescent mice the energy expenditure is expressed as both kJ/g body weight and kJ/g lean body mass. There is no explanation for this and the only apparent reason is that it provides another “significant” result at the p<0.05 level when otherwise it would only show a "trend". 3. Methods For the most part the methods are clearly written although some aspects are lacking in details, making replication of the experiments difficult to achieve. For instance, it is unclear whether the caging used was individually-ventilated or open. The technique used for the indirect calorimetry is especially vague in regard which equipment was used and from which manufacturer it was purchased. There is indication whether the plasma hormone analyses were done in either duplicate or triplicate, which presumably they were. Reviewer #2: The study investigate metabolic performance of mice in response to individual or collective housing. The work is rigorous, well conducted and data are presented clearly. The paper is very well written and pleasant to read. Criticisms: the paper seems to be incremental only and originality does not clearly appear in regards to previous works on the topic. Please indicate previous findings in last paragraphs of the introduction and indicate the interest of this new study. Also include additional references in the discussion to compare with these findings. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Individual housing of male C57BL/6J mice after weaning impairs growth and predisposes for obesity PONE-D-19-30739R1 Dear Dr. Schipper, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. I only noted one minor wording matter in the abstract, which I recommend to change: The term "confounder" does not seem to fit here. To my understanding, this would be a factor that confounds a difference between two study conditions. Here, I feel that something like "... housing conditions could influence ... the outcomes" would be preferable. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. 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Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Clemens Fürnsinn, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I noted one minor wording matter in the abstract, which I recommend to change: The term "confounder" does not seem to fit here. To my understanding, this would be a factor that confounds a difference observed between two study conditions. Here, I feel that something like "... housing conditions could influence ... the outcomes" would be preferable. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Alexandre Benani |
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PONE-D-19-30739R1 Individual housing of male C57BL/6J mice after weaning impairs growth and predisposes for obesity Dear Dr. Schipper: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Clemens Fürnsinn Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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