Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-16349 Does caching strategy vary with microclimate in endangered Mt. Graham red squirrels? PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pereira Mendes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We have received comments from two reviewers and both of these reviewers have recommended minor revisions to the manuscript before it can be considered for publication. I agree with both of the reviewers' comments and in particular those of reviewer 2 that suggest that further justification and discussion is needed for a multifactorial analysis with your small sample size. I recommend that you address this and the other comments carefully in your revision to the manuscript. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 05 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript explores a highly fascinating behaviour 'caching variation in response to environmental and individual factors (gender)' in an endangered tree squirrel that inhabits a mountain range at the edge of the species distributional range. The latter is critical as these populations are subject to different evolutionary drivers than populations at the core of the distribution and therefore of particular interest when it comes to understanding behaviours and adaptions in a changing world. The manuscript is exceedingly well written and a very interesting read. My only comment is that given the aim of the authors, this manuscript establishes a baseline and as a concluding thought I would encourage the research group to repeat this study in the future once climate change effects have progressed to see how this is affecting caching decisions and conclusions drawn to date. This would also show if squirrels respond to extreme temperature events. In this context a control study area at the core of the distribution not subject to extreme temperature fluctuations would be helpful for comparison. Specific comments 1. Line 55: the statement about distance here lacks context. Is it really distance per se or more an increase in predation risk which makes retrieving this item for other individuals not familiar with the precise location of the valuable item more risky? 2. Line 57: From a European perspective it would perhaps be helpful here at first mention of this species (as opposed to Mt Graham red squirrel above) to at least once in addition to the scientific name to say the North American red or pine squirrel (Tamiasciurus hudsonicus) to avoid confusion for general readers. 3. Line 64: should be 'depend' 4. Lines 68 and 71 - you have given Waite and Strickland 2006 here as full text when all other references are given as numbers - in your list it is at 42 and this should be changed. 5. Line 111 - I wonder if these "absolute" predictions need to be modified or set into context? I assume it is a given that predictions 1 and 2 (lines 107-110) are also subject to local cone (mushroom) availability per se (your variable of density of trees in midden vicinity? 6. Line 196 'varied' should be 'vary' 7. Lines 196 to 199 - as aspect is a critical factor in your later findings, did you include aspect as a variable here - did/would the sample of 73 trees allow this? One underlying assumption in your study is that all trees within midden vicinity are equal in terms of food availability and their density serves as a proxy. One might in principle expect aspect to matter in terms of cone production and this should be checked. Reviewer #2: This paper describes an important evolutionary adaptation: behavioural variability in the amount of food cached by the endangered Mount Graham red squirrel (Tamiasciurus fremonti grahamensis). Authors tested the variation in cache size in response to microclimate variation, based on the following parameters: relief, vegetation (tree stand density), food availability and squirrel sex. Based on assumptions and predictions obtained from previous studies scientists expected that squirrels should locate bigger caches in areas: 1. Where the conditions to cone preservation are better and spoilage is expected to be reduced (colder areas). 2. With colder microclimates: in higher elevations and in slopes facing the northeast. 3. With higher cone availability. To verify these hypothesis authors selected 40 middens occupied by squirrels distributed along different altitudes, relief, and mountain aspect. They visited each selected midden six times between the fall and winter of 2015. Results of the study show, that much more pits were excavated in the northeast facing slopes. Surprisingly, the density of trees negatively affects the cache volume on southwest slopes only. The sex of the squirrel also affects the number of pits in the squirrel midden, males excavating more pits than females. Additionally, both sexes presented different responses to the mountain slope aspect (females excavating more pits on northeastern slopes, whereas male cache size did not vary with the slope aspect). Contrary to authors’ predictions the squirrel’s caching behaviour did not vary in response to midden microclimate variation. However, although both the idea and conducted study are very interesting and worth publication, there are some aspects which require further explanation. First of all, in my opinion (and as the authors mentioned in the discussion), the sample size may be not big enough for such multifactorial analysis. The second question is a type of distribution of studied middens – does it cover all habitat variability? For me, the relationship between altitude, microclimate and the number of pits in the squirrel’s midden is the most important and missing information which may help us understand behavioural adaptation to the climate change. Authors should expect differences in caching squirrels’ behaviour in regard to differences in elevation gradient. In my opinion this aspect should be deeply analysed and discussed. Maybe squirrels territories were located at the same elevation – it should be disclosed. I am also wondering why authors analyzed differences between squirrels’ sexes? Did they expect any sex-related differences in catching behaviour and if so, there should be an explanation. It would be good to introduce potential readers for studied species biology and describe briefly the subject of the study, including sexual differences, body mass and social system. When you try to consider what causes could lead to the obtained results – the lack of behavioural reaction on micro-climate variability – the good way is to analyze the used methodology. It is possible that daily air temperature, which was measured in the meteorological station differs slightly from the daily air temperature in other places, like middens. The same could be applied to soil temperature monitored by data-logger between one (the same) place and other places (e.g. middens). Other explanation which the author discussed in the manuscript is that the most important for catching behaviour was the maximum, not the average air temperature. Abstract P2 L22 - …” in response to climate”… - should be “in response microclimate” Materials and Methods P6 L131 – 134 “We visited each midden 6 times between the fall and winter of 2015 to measure variables of weather, relief, plant structure and estimate the volume of cones stored by the resident squirrels (response variable). During the visits, we also record the sex of the resident squirrels.” Could you please explain how did you record the sex of the resident squirrels? It’s unclear – Did you measure all of these variables during each of the six visits? If not please add the information when did you measure each variable. As I understood the temperature in all middens was measured on the same day. How did you choose three pits from one midden for temperature monitoring? How accurate was your equipment for the weather variables (handheld weather meter Kestrel 3000) and a digital soil thermometer (HANNA HI45-30), it’s possible that low accuracy can mask differences in temperature and humidity. Discussion In this part of the manuscript, there is no explanation of why sex should generate differences in squirrel’s catching behaviour. Additionally, the authors’ hypothesis about different levels in predation risk between places with high and low tree steam density as an explanation in differences in squirrels’ catching behaviour seems to be unconvincing. First of all, it is hard to believe that predation risk can vary between different mountain slope aspects. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Peter Lurz Reviewer #2: Yes: Zbigniew Borowski [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-19-16349R1 Does caching strategy vary with microclimate in endangered Mt. Graham red squirrels? PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pereira Mendes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jesus E. Maldonado, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I have gone over the response to the reviewer's comments and agree that the manuscript is much improved and that the authors have successfully addressed their concerns. However, I still noticed several editorial and grammatical errors that I made directly onto the revised version of the text in the attached pdf file. I suggest that the authors read and edit the manuscript carefully for grammatical and stylistic errors. This should be easy and quick to address.
[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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Does caching strategy vary with microclimate in endangered Mt. Graham red squirrels? PONE-D-19-16349R2 Dear Dr. Pereira Mendes, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Jesus E. Maldonado, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-16349R2 Does caching strategy vary with microclimate in endangered Mt. Graham red squirrels? Dear Dr. Pereira Mendes: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jesus E. Maldonado Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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