Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 19, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-20447 Cooperation with Autonomous Machines Through Culture and Emotion PLOS ONE Dear Dr. de Melo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration by two expert reviewers, we feel that the manuscript has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Nonetheless, you will see that both reports are positive, yet suggesting some additional clarifications and modifications before acceptance. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses each of the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 25 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with your previous publications: Melo, Celso De, Stacy Marsella, and Jonathan Gratch. "People do not feel guilty about exploiting machines." ACM Transactions on Computer-Human Interaction (TOCHI) 23.2 (2016): 8. de Melo, Celso M., and Jonathan Gratch. "People show envy, not guilt, when making decisions with machines." 2015 International Conference on Affective Computing and Intelligent Interaction (ACII). IEEE, 2015. The text that needs to be addressed involves the fourth paragraph of the introduction. In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. 3. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified what type of consent you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). 4. We note that you have stated that you will provide repository information for your data at acceptance. Should your manuscript be accepted for publication, we will hold it until you provide the relevant accession numbers or DOIs necessary to access your data. If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript ("Cooperation with Autonomous Machines Through Culture and Emotion") addresses the subject of how human decision-making is affected by interactions with autonomous machines. Throughout the paper, the authors present several results that are able to indicate that there are significant differences between the levels of cooperation in a Prisoner's Dilemma when the game is played among Humans in contrast to when the counterpart is a machine. These differences seem to be related to similar psychological mechanisms that also occur when humans interact with members of different groups/cultures. Nevertheless, the experimental results show that the presence of cooperative emotional cues are able to overcome these situations and increase the levels of cooperation. I believe the questions raised in this paper, as well as the findings are both relevant and very important. All statistical analysis and experimental procedures appear to be correct and follow strict scientific methodology. Moreover, this paper contributes to the increasingly important understanding of the interactions of hybrid human-agent societies. Finally, their conclusions over the psychological mechanisms of human-machine interactions offer a range of potential applications, including nudging cooperation in human societies through autonomous machines, an application that is also supported by other experimental research [e.g., (Shirado et al., 2019)]. Therefore, I consider that this manuscript should be accepted for publication. However, I do have some minor remarks that may improve the readability of the paper as well as some questions about the conclusions: 1. In Page 7 the authors mention: "...The problem is that if both players think like this, then they will both be worse off than if they had both cooperated. " This explanation may result slightly confusing, I would instead rephrase it as: "...However if both players follow this reasoning, then they will both be worse off than if they had cooperated." 2. In page 7 you mention: "Participants were told they would engage in the prisoner's dilemma with either another participant or with an autonomous machine. In reality, to maximise experimental control, they always engaged with a computer script that followed a tit-for-tat strategy..." It is not very clear whether your participants never played against another human or, when engaging against a machine, the machine always used a tit-for-tat strategy. I had to read much further to understand it. 3. In page 8, when you describe competitive emotions, it could be useful for the readers to indicate why regret following mutual defection is part of a competitive emotion. Perhaps because it indicates that the counterpart regrets not defecting after knowing that the participant cooperated? 4. The result section could perhaps perhaps use a bit of rewriting. Sometimes the statistical results are indicated in parenthesis, others in between commas, which difficult the reading flow. However, I don't deem this to be extremely important, and the text as a whole is still sufficiently understandable and correct. One last question: In Figure 1C, the cooperation rate between humans of the same and different cultures in a competitive environment does not seem to differ significantly, does this mean that humans treat "equally" (perhaps as members of a different group) all counterparts when in a competitive emotional environment? Reviewer #2: In this article, the authors report the findings of a cross-cultural study involving the United States and Japan where participants from these two countries interacted online with a virtual agent in an iterated prisoner’s dilemma lasting 20 rounds. The aim of the study was to gain insight on how social categorization as well as emotion expression affects human decision-making. To this effect, the authors ran a between participants study where they manipulated the appearance of the agent’s face as a cultural cue as well as its emotional displays during the interaction. Additionally, the authors also manipulated the perception of autonomy with one group being told they were interacting with an avatar of another human and another group being informed that the agent was acting autonomously. The motivation and methodology of the study draws heavily from other similar work in this line of human-agent interaction research, which uses well established scenarios from game theory to study how humans cooperate with artificial entities. This type of research is important to help us understand how humans and autonomous machines can collaborate with one another. The authors provide a fair number of citations to previous work that helps to situate the novelty of the study presented here. The main novel aspect of the study is that it analyses the interplay between how the agent is socially categorized according to its appearance and the emotional signals it decides to give when playing the game using the Tit-for-tat strategy. Overall the paper is quite well written and easy to follow. Also, from a methodological standpoint, I commend the fact that the authors conducted a power analysis to determine what would be a proper sample size and ended up with more than 400 participants for each country, which greatly increases the robustness of the obtained results. With that said, I do have some criticisms that I would like the authors to address. Firstly, while the results show in fact support for the conclusion that the competitive emotional signalling leads to significantly less cooperation it seems that there is no significant main effect between the cooperative and the neutral strategy for emotional expression. If the goal is to increase cooperation one would not hypothesize that the competitive emotional strategy would be a suitable approach. The obtained results clearly confirm that it is not. However, from a design standpoint and as mentioned by the authors in their motivation, the main research question here is whether having a cooperative emotional strategy can lead to an increased degree of cooperation compared to not showing emotions at all. From that perspective, the results should be discussed more in depth. For instance, when the culture is different, the degree of cooperation in the human condition was roughly the same in both the cooperative emotional strategy and the neutral one. What possible reasons the authors think can explain this result that could be tested in a future study? Perhaps this was due to different cultural expectations of when one should show emotion that are applied more strongly when interacting with other humans. Additionally, in the neutral emotional strategy, the degree of cooperation was higher in the different culture condition than it was in the same culture condition for the human counterpart. This is also an unexpected result according to the in-group hypothesis. Possibly this has to do with using the appearance of the character’s face as a single cultural cue. As reported in the appendix discussing the validation of the ethnicity perception, the authors do report that US participants were significantly less likely to perceive any particular ethnicity in the face than participants from Japan. Perhaps, adding an additional cultural cue, such as having an iconic background image placed behind the character would reinforce the social categorization process. Overall, I think the paper is quite interesting and relevant but a more in-depth discussion of the results as well as a few paragraphs of limitations and future work is greatly warranted. Finally, the authors should also include the effect size when describing their results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-19-20447R1 Cooperation with Autonomous Machines Through Culture and Emotion Dear Dr. de Melo: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Francisco C. Santos Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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