Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-19603 ADAPTS: Automated Deconvolution Augmentation of Profiles for Tissue Specific cells PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Danziger, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ADAPTS presented a user friendly modular tool that aims to solve a most challenging bioinformatics problem that has huge potential in many fields. The augmentation of signature matrix by custom data is a great idea, however, as the reviewers suggest, issues also come along. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 14 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Cell type deconvolution is an innovative technique to achieve higher resolution from bulk transcriptomic data. In this manuscript, Danziger, et al., build on existing methods for profiling leukocyte infiltration of tumors by offering their package, ADAPTS, as a method to augment the reference signature matrix used to deconvolve bulk, heterogenous samples. The authors aimed to address two issues that plague implementation of deconvolution algorithms: the presence of stromal cells alongside immune cells that complicates analysis and the tendency for misclassification of closely related cell types, which they termed spillover. The ADAPTS package enables augmentation of existing signature matrices by including differentially expressed genes which define gene expression profiles for additional cell types and minimizes condition number, a measure of matrix stability. The ADAPTS package deals with spillover by iteratively performing deconvolution on highly correlated cell types then applies hierarchical deconvolution on a subset of the genes that define each cell type. The ADAPTS package aims to offer personalization of existing deconvolution techniques to an individual study, but the added value demonstrated in the included examples is questionable. Some clarification of the existing evidence is required. Major: 1. Using the top 100 differentially expressed genes on average between the existing signature matrix cell types and the added pancreatic cell types appears to produce clusters of highly correlated cell types as demonstrated in Figure 5. After augmentation, the reported correlation increases (table 2) but the spillover matrix in Figure 6 seems to show that more cell types are being misclassified (a larger cluster of cell types in blue). The author should provide clarification. 2. The argument is made that performing the spillover clustering algorithm improves estimation of the relative order of cell type percentages at the expense of accuracy. However, it appears that the authors have only reported the Pearson correlation in Table 2 following clustering. To demonstrate that the rank order estimation has improved, it is necessary to include the Spearman correlation coefficient as well. 3. Augmentation of LM22 to include myeloma cell types is demonstrated to improve RMSE and the correlation coefficient when applied to two cell populations. The reported improvement in Pearson correlation after augmentation is minor though the reported RMSE is significantly reduced. By adding new cell types to the signature matrix that are supposedly at low abundance, it appears that the algorithm’s performance is not affected significantly. The author should include interpretation of these results that clarifies the role of RMSE and Pearson correlation coefficient as evaluation metrics for ADAPTS. 4. Adding new cell types to the signature matrix without adding new genes appears to significantly increase the matrix condition number (figure 1). This is despite the author’s assumption that these genes should not be informative for classifying other cell types. Further explanation as to why the condition number blows up so dramatically is required. Additional detail is required for the condition number minimization procedure, as well. 5. Using the top 100 differentially expressed genes between the average of the signature matrix cell types and the new cell types to seed the de novo matrix seems to be fine for adding a few cell types. However, as the number of cell types increases, shouldn’t this number also increase to ensure that the system is overdefined? Minor: 1. Figures 2 and 3 require titles. 2. The color bars for all of the heatmap figures require annotation. The legend should clearly provide interpretation for the clusters of highly correlated cell types. 3. Do the heat maps represent variance or some other misclassification metric? Reviewer #2: Tumor tissue microenvironment deconvolution is key to understand the interactions between cancer cells and its environment. Information derived from deconvolution can not only be applied to predict immune therapy patient outcome, but also reveal the mechanism of tumor cells in the heterogeneity environment. The accuracy of a cell type specific gene signature matrix is usually the core to most of the deconvolution methods. This paper proposed a novel augmented method ADAPTS to enforce the application of the signature matrix adaptive to different tissue or cancer types. This study has the following novelties. 1. The authors focused on augmenting the signature matrix. Users can upload custom cell type specific expressed genes to the current signature matrix by providing cell type specific training data. This augment strategy can be applied to the most deconvolution methods in order to improve the performance. 2. The authors proposed a novel hierarchical deconvolution algorithm. ADAPTS implements a novel method for clustering cell types into groups that are hard to distinguish and then re-splitting those clusters using hierarchical deconvolution. 3. The authors provided a user friendly R package on the CRAN and github. Nonetheless, further discussions of the following points are expected: 1. This method enables the addition of more custom cell type in the signature matrix. However, the authors need to address the co-linearity issue among the cell types. Adding more custom cell types (some of which may be highly similar to the existing cell types) would cause highly unstable results. 2. On page 2, line 43, the signature matrices are trained from samples of purified cell types. However, the deconvolution method aims to predicted immune cell infiltration of tumor. The immune cells have huge variations comparing to those in the purified cell line states. How could ADAPTS deal with the differences between the cancer suppressed immune cell and purified immune cell in the training data? 3. The authors showed that the augmented signature matrix based deconvolution has good prediction of WBM. The authors are expected to show how adding the new cell types in the current signature matrix will impact the prediction of the previously existing cell types. 4. In the signature matrix augmentation parts, the author selected additional genes that best differentiate each cell types. What if some important marker genes are expressed in two cell types? 5. On page 5, Eq 5 resulted in an initial spillover matrix, E_0. Here, each row of E_0 is a cell type and each column is a sample. Then, the average function A was applied to the matrix E_0 in order to get the matrix S_1. What is the dimension of the matrix S_1? 6. On page 5, Eq 7 used deconvolution function D again to calculate the new spillover matrix. If the second parameter of function D is transpose of E_0, what is the dimension of matrix E_1? It seems like each row of E_0 is a cell type and each column is a sample. The transpose of matrix E_0 would be a sample (row) by cell type (column) matrix. How the matrix E_1 can be in the same form of transpose of the matrix E_0? 7. On page 5, line 145, the algorithm converges in a clustered spillover matrix (Fig. 3). How to explain that T cell was clustered into two different clusters in the Fig. 3? 8. On page 5, line 127, Figure 2 should be Figure 3. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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ADAPTS: Automated Deconvolution Augmentation of Profiles for Tissue Specific cells PONE-D-19-19603R1 Dear Dr. Danziger, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. There is a minor comment from reviewer #2 regarding two tables and the authors are strongly suggested to make changes so that the results would be presented in a more meaningful way. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The author addressed all my concern and answered them in great detail. For the question 2 of review 2, the author mentioned that ADAPTS has the capability that handle the inaccurate signature matrix by adding new cell type signature and removing old biased cell type signature. This gives the promising direction to bring the power of single cell sequencing with high resolution in the specific cancer tissue environment. Minor: For the question 3 of review 2, the author added Table 2 and Table 3 to illustrate the posterior result of all existing cell types after adding custom cell types and adding more genes in the current signature matrix. However, these two table show the average deconvolution percentages of all cell types for two experiment datasets. This reconstruction values just show the trend of predicted cell type proportion which cannot reflect the relationship with the ground truth (actual cell type percentages). It is necessary to include the correlation as well. Or the comparison with the known percentage is required to add. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Wennan Chang |
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