Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-14908 Omecamtiv mecarbil lowers the contractile deficit in a mouse model of nebulin-based nemaline myopathy. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Granzier, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please provide a detail response to the queries submitted by reviewers and keep in mind that there are new guidelines for making figures involving blots and gels that you should consider when making the final figure. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 20 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper describes the effects OM has on a nebulin KO model. The premise is that since type 1 fibres are mainly affected and predominate in nemaline myopathy due to nebulin mutations, it may have a positive effect on contractility. Whilst 0.1µM OM has limited effects that are greater in the nebula KO, there is a considerable issue about the chosen dosage. 1 In this system EC50 appears to be about 0.6µM (no sem is given), so 0.1µM is a rather low level of dosage. It is necessary to explore this system in greater depth, using- 1a Effects on contractility and pCa50 at a range of doses- is there a maximum with decline at higher concentrations as Nagy et al. found? 1b The low dose is chosen to avoid cardiac effects. Since none of the experiments involves cardiac muscle this is not relevant to the study. However it would be important to check the dose-response curve of cardiac muscle in this system and also of the nebulin KO, which may be different from wt. 1c There should be some discussion as to whether a combined cardiac and type 1 fibre effect might actually be advantageous given that nebulin is also present in heart muscle. 2 The authors seem to have misunderstood the mechanism of OM action. (line 46) no mention of the work of Woody et al (ref 36) which clearly explains the mechanism- in fact refs 21 and 22 seem to be wholly unsuitable, being clinically al trials. In the discussion lines 310-317 are essentially wrong- Woody shows that OM causes non-moving attached cross bridges that are inhibitory but which activate the THIN FILAMENT cooperatively. SRX has nothing to do with this- you are thinking of Mavacamten, perhaps. 3 in the discussion the authors should compare OM with the fast skeletal-specific troponin activators as treatments for Nemaline myopathy. Some of these were tested with the nebulin KO mouse. (Collibee et al. 2018; Hwee et al. 2017, 2015,2014; de Winter et al. 2013 4 Figures. You should use a consistent shade for the points on graphs: in figs 2 & 3 OM is light, in Figs 4 & 5 OM is dark ! other points: Some poorly constructed sentences; the text should be inspected and corrected by an English expert. line 15 is an obvious example. line 37 nebulin is BELIEVED to play..... line 41 Few or none? If a few state what they are. line 53 Can you specify which are the main type 1 muscles (in mouse and in human) Figure 5- Please also show the original force-velocity curves which were used to create the force-power plots. Reviewer #2: This MS by Lee et al reports a study of the effect of omecamtiv mecarbil (OM), a small molecule activator of cardiac beta/skeletal muscle type I myosin, on correcting the contractile abnormality of mouse skeletal muscle lacking nebulin for potential use in the treatment of NEB nemaline myopathy. Skinned single fiber and intact muscle studies were performed. The results suggest beneficial effect of OM treatment. The studies used comprehensive quantitative approaches which the authors have expertise and extensive past experiences. The experiments are carefully performed and the data are clearly presented. While this work is considered as potentially interesting to the field by providing valuable information on whether and how manipulate myosin ATPase function and kinetics could therapeutically correct or mitigate the functional defect of a thin filament function due to the loss of nebulin, a skeletal muscle specific protein. There are some issues that need the authors’ attention: 1. For the rationale and significance of this study, the authors should emphasize the effect of OM on increasing myosin activity to treat myopathies, since this drug is unlikely to be directly useful in the treatment of Neb myopathy for its cardiac effect in humans. 2. Muscle weight and fiber size information should be presented and discussed for whether and how atrophy has effect on the contractile function of whole muscle or single fibers. 3. The whole muscle functional parameters should be normalized to the contents/% of type I myosin. 4. Since there was no anticipated effect of OM on maximum force whereas it increased calcium sensitivity (pCa50), the effect on intrinsic myosin ATPase activity should evaluated. The authors referenced previous Ktr study, which should also be examined here. 5. In addition to Force-Power curve, the primary contractile velocity data should be shown and discussed. 6. Examples of the SDS-gel confirmation of single fibber types should be shown. This will also help to evaluate the myofilament protein contents of the Neb KO and WT muscle fibers studied. If there are any adaptive changes in the KO muscle, they can be discussed for potential significance in altering contractility. 7. The difference between normal cardiac and skeletal muscles in their nebulin contents may contribute to their contractile properties and the responses to OM treatment, a worthwhile point for discussion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Omecamtiv mecarbil lowers the contractile deficit in a mouse model of nebulin-based nemaline myopathy. PONE-D-19-14908R1 Dear Dr. Granzier, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: OK OK K OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OKK OK Reviewer #2: My comments have been clearly addressed. I have no further concerns. This work should be published to make a valuable contribution to the field. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-19-14908R1 Omecamtiv mecarbil lowers the contractile deficit in a mouse model of nebulin-based nemaline myopathy. Dear Dr. Granzier: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Agustín Guerrero-Hernandez Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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