Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 28, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-18278 Understanding allergic multimorbidity within the non-eosinophilic interactome PLOS ONE Dear Dr Daniel Aguilar, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by September 27. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General remark This paper reports on an extensive interactome analysis of three disease known to be clinically associated as co-morbidities, asthma, rhinitis and dermatitis. It follows on from their previous paper in this journal but now focuses on phenotypes of disease that distinctly do not involve eosinophils. Specific comments 1. This is a study that has used a complex systems biology to integrate data. My main general comment/critique of this paper is that it makes very difficult reading, and makes an assumption that readers will understand the methods and how the data were interpreted. This may well be the case fo a systems biology journal but not for a journal like PLOS which is read widely. I fear that not many people without in-depth knowledge of the methods applied will understand it. I have given some examples below but the whole paper could do with a rewrite to make it more friendly. For example, a standard cell biologist will be puzzled to see that 14 cell types are major components in asthma, rhinitis and dermatitis in 15 distinct tissue sites. It is difficult to comprehend how any tissue outside the lung, the nose and skin (e.g. adipose tissue) is related to any of these diseases. 2. What do the authors conclude is a major novelty that arises out of their analysis? After so much analysis the conclusions seem very bland: the link between asthma and dermatitis through IL-4 and IL-13 (hardly a novel thing) and TLR-mediated IL1 signaling. No proposal for how the genes previously not associated with these diseases could be involved or targeted. 3. The key obstacle which took me a while to work around is that the authors state that the data reflects only expression levels in healthy individuals yet the paper is making conclusions about three diseases! 4. The authors do not provide any no steer for taking the interactome, which is a hypothesis-setting stage, towards definitive proof. One could argue that the only way to do this is to perturb the pathways that are shared across the three diseases. 5. I found it very annoying to stop and think about what terms like cell type T mean. What does disease d (line 107) mean? I am assuming it means disease-associated but I can’t see the value of writing it like this. Why not just say disease-associated. When reading a text, it is annoying to have to go back to the initial definition to see what it means. 1. Cell type-specific gene expression: I am intrigued to see that only samples not subjected to any treatments were considered. Why? An explanation is needed in the methods or, if more lengthy, in the discussion. Also, why discard whole blood derived data if they are controlled for cell types? I am sure the authors are aware of methods to correct for cell types in a sample containing a mix of cells. 2. The sentence “Being reactome a hierarchical collection of pathways..” is not clear at all. 3. Results section, line 285: please state from which databases the disease-gene associations were obtained. 4. Table 1: the legend needs clarification. The full circles distinguish associations characterised by GWAS ad by other methods. What about associations made by both GWAS and other methods? It would be useful to see a column with the number of methods that show the association. 5. I am intrigued to see that more gene-disease associations were shared between asthma and dermatitis than between asthma and rhinitis. What does that say about the one airway concept that implies strong links between the upper and lower airways? 6. Line: 301: We are told that the complete interactome contained 15.332 genes, yet Table 1 only shows a fraction of these as being associated with the three diseases. Does this mean that the other genes (the majority) are NOT associated with the three diseases studied in this paper? If this is correct, then a sentence should be added to explain that we are seeing only a minority of genes associated with the three diseases. 7. Line 303: We are told that there were 62 cell types. Can we see the list of these cell types or, if Table 2 is the full list, please say so in the text? 8. Line: 303: Why and how were cells classified into 15 distinct tissues? What tissues are you talking about (the list?) 9. Table 2 legend: when you say that “the number of genes is significantly high”, high compared to what? Is the adjusted p value FDR adjusted? 10. Line 320: when you say that 519 pathways were available, do you mean that there was evidence for 519 pathways detected in the datasets you examined? 11. Table 3 shows tissues that have no connection with the three diseases. For example, if we take the first tissue type (adipose tissue from abdomen and thigh, please explain how these data are linked to one of the three diseases? 12. I am struggling to understand in Table 4 how Erythrocyte pathways are associated with asthma and rhinitis in respect of the adaptive immune system. Minor comments: 1. The paper would benefit from proof reading by a native English speaker as there are several minor mistakes in English and punctuation. E.g. abstract: in the methods section error in English “…multimorbidity mechanisms in distinct cell types WERE characterised…., use of the word “coordinately”instead of “in a coordinated manner” (line 60), repetition of “can be shared” (line 75 etc. Reviewer #2: The authors investigated mechanisms explaining the multimorbidity between asthma, dermatitis and rhinitis and their specificity in distinct cell types by means of an interactome-based analysis of expression data. The authors observed differential roles for cytokine signaling, TLR-mediated signaling and distinct metabolic pathways across distinct cell types. This paper is a continuation of their previous study, where they explored multimorbidity between asthma, dermatitis and rhinitis at whole organism level by investigating patterns of network connectivity between cellular networks. The paper is well written and data is clearly presented. Data in tables are well presented but figures are not clear. I recommend uploading higher resolution images. The discussion does a nice job of putting the results into context of previous studies. However, it would be good to discuss also other genes for which a significant link has been shown. For example, it would be interesting if you could discuss what is known about PLA267 gene so far in the context of these multimorbidities. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Understanding allergic multimorbidity within the non-eosinophilic interactome PONE-D-19-18278R1 Dear Dr. Daniel Aguilar, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is still not a very easy paper to read for people unfamiliar with the complex methods used but I accept that there is no toom for further simplification. Reviewer #2: The authors addressed all my previous comments. As suggested, the authors extended the Cell-type-specific candidate genes section in the Discussion to include PLA2G7. The paper uses very specific methodology that is understood by a smaller number of readers who are experts in the field of interactome analysis. However, the revised article is significantly more understandable to a wider audience of readers and is now written clearly enough to be accessible to non-specialists interested in this particular field. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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