Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 27, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-16985 A tailored cognitive behavioral program for juvenile justice-referred females at risk of substance use and delinquency: A pilot quasi-experimental trial PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Walker, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 26 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors should describe the effect size results, especially since this is a small sample and the effect size results help interpret the effectiveness of the intervention. Authors should review more literature relevant to female specific interventions--this is a growing field and placing this study within the existing literature can be done better. Reviewer #2: This is a review of “A tailored cognitive behavioral program for juvenile justice-referred females at risk of substance use and delinquency: A pilot quasi-experimental trial.” As a licensed clinical psychologist who contracts to supervise psychology graduate students delivering an intervention in a youth court system I was initially very interested in this project. I think the topic of trying to test what is both effective and feasible for high at-risk youths like those in juvenile justice is an important goal but felt that this study as it is now presented fell short of providing information that is practically useful. I recognize that it is a pilot study, but nonetheless I have some concerns about both the way the information is presented in the manuscript and how the results would really provide actionable information to other researchers or court personnel. My comments below are mostly in order of the document. The authors should consider updating terms like “substance abuse” and “dependence”. This intervention seems like a lot of extra work for POs and they are not typically appropriately trained for this kind of thing. One also wonders about dual relationships. I think it really benefits the kids I work with to have a therapist who is not also dealing with their probation compliance. I actually argued against having a PO with a master’s degree in counseling provide the clinical services for this exact reason- you can’t expect to wear both hats and have it go well. For what it’s worth, the immediate reaction of every (psychology) colleague I mentioned the counselor-PO thing to was essentially “oh my God, no” so I wonder about the wisdom of this intervention, even though the authors were careful to select qualified people and had buy-in from the local system. How many kids were in actual parental custody? On p. 5 there is a citation listed as (author, year) rather than the numbering scheme used elsewhere. Is there a citation for “probation officers who are familiar with principles of prevention are likely to incorporate this framework into other areas of work, including their probation supervision approach and participation in organizational policymaking” (p. 5)? The authors claim that concerns about whether POs can or should deliver the intervention are “outside the scope of the current study” and I would insist that they are not. Both the competence of these non-mental health professionals, the effects of their having an apparent dual relationship with the participants (counselor and PO), and how well this worked on a macro level (did they have time to do this and the rest of their job well?) seem like pretty important points as far as the utility of this study. The n of 87 doesn’t seem to match the CONSORT chart. I guess that is everyone who did at least one survey? I wonder if the authors should be more clear about how many youths did (or did not) do which aspects of the study up front. How were emotion dysregulation and family conflict measured (p. 8)? Means are given before measures info. Does “the court risk and needs assessment” have a name (p. 8)? Why were so many more girls referred to GOALS than TAU? The “participant self-report at 3and 6 months follow up” on p. 9 is 1) confusing as described and 2) there is a space needed between 3 and ‘and’ . 12 participants is 50% of what, exactly? And what questions were being asked? Why the mix of group leaders? The intro is written like it will be POs but then it is only half POs. And I know this is a small sample but were there any effects of leader type? And POs who have 2 years of groups/MH experience and/or a master’s degree seems like a pretty special bunch. How does this program translate to any other jurisdiction? The way feasibility was measured here is not really in line with the spirit of determining actual feasibility. People completed the program is certainly a component of that, but so are things like whether it was overly burdensome on staff, etc. Was group leader satisfaction assessed? Why was there so much missing data? This is a tough population, but I’m still surprised at how high it is. Do the authors have an explanation? How was the survey given to the participants? There isn’t really a procedure section for the surveys, and the GOAL group itself could be explained in more detail in a paper ostensibly about how its implementation went. Was acceptability collected at the same time as other data? How many youths actually provided this information? It’s less than half of parents and general follow-up with youths has a lot of non-responses so this should be specified. Were kids mandated to attend treatment? What were the consequences of not attending or completing? What were to reasons for non-completion of poor attendance? p.15- “each of the six question” question should be plural. The youth response that an improvement would be “more food” suggests that food was provided but this is not mentioned anywhere. I am wondering if this is an initial paper reporting some early results of a larger project, but in any case one wonders about statistical power in this small of a sample. Was there enough power to detect effects in the linear regressions with multiple IVs? Something like a latent growth model might make more sense than separate linear models for two time points, though I suppose the sample is too small (and has too much missing data) for that to make sense. The discussion overstates the findings a bit given the amount of missing data. The intervention doesn’t appear to have been unacceptable to the people who provided feedback, but that’s the minority of youths and parents so it’s hard to say how acceptable it really is. In the discussion the authors should probably focus on effect sizes and more clearly discuss issues of sample size and statistical power rather than focus on significance. If the authors are going to propose problem-solving as a potential mechanism, they should probably provide those (qualitative) data. Similarly, suggesting that the facets of the DERS may have had more information than the mean of for all items (is that what the score is? Because that’s unusual, the measure has scoring guidelines) begs the question or why don’t the authors look at the facets? The self-report nature of the outcome variables (for information that might easily be reported in a biased manner for a number of reasons) should also be mentioned as a limitation. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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