Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-15889 Olfactory Screening of Parkinson’s Disease patients and healthy subjects in China and Germany: A study of cross-cultural adaptation of the Sniffin’ Sticks 12-identification test PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Dr. Pinkhardt, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 07 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PLPS one manuscrpit PONE D 19 15889 By inkhardt E et al. This manuscript reports the first study to directly compare olfactory function in a North Chinese and a German cohort of healthy subjects and Parkinson patients. For testing olfactory function the SIT12 (Sniffin Sticks) test and a modified CH-SIT12 test – the later adapted to the Chinese culture – are employed. The study is explanatory and therefore does not fulfill the strict criteria of a test-retest development with all the statistical ramifications. By testing all 16 odors in one test procdur, the need for adjusting the analysis for multiple testing was avoided. There are a few comments: Line 86 is not clear – cited: for the patient groups we likewise hypothesize …… please change Line 119: was the UPDR III rating performed in On or Off – I assume the PD patients were under treatment. Line 167: Is there evidence that olfactory function deteriorates during the progression of PD or is the hyposmia stable over time ? Please quote respective references. Table 1 20 % of German PD patients were smokers. Did they perform differently ? Were the Chinese PD patients de novo patients ? They had a disease duration of about 3 years. Was the Sniffin Test performed by asking the person to sniff once or twice ? – there is a difference in the results if you sniff once or twice Line 191-199: For a naive reader this paragraph is slightly confusing. Please try to present the data in a simpler way. Discussion: Line 312: The most likely explanation of the results is the fact that German subjets are widely exposed to Chinese Cuisine. It is not surprising that liquorice and coffee are well recognized by the Chinese Healthy controls and PD patients. This is part of their day to day diet . Thus it is not clear why these two odors where exchanged. This should be explained in the methods. Conclusion: it may be changed. As in the strict sense the CH-SIT12 would only need an exchange of 2 odors and a replacement for the oder shoeleather. Criteria for publications: Original Trans-national Nicely carried out Minor modifications requested. Reviewer #2: The authors present an interesting study on the cross-cultural adapted olfactory screening test (Sniffin’ Sticks 12-identification test) for the differentiation between Parkinson’s disease and healthy subject. The purpose of the work is meaningful as we indeed sense the impact of cultural difference on the accuracy of olfactory screening tests in clinical practice. Yet, I have the following concerns that need to be addressed. 1. The statistics are incorrect. The student t test can be used in data with normal distribution. The author did not indicate the feature of the data. Judging from table 1, non-normal distribution is very likely for disease duration, smoking years, UPDRS III scores in this cohort. If that’s the case, the data should be firstly displayed as median value and interquartile range, then analyzed using Kruskal-Wallis test. Likewise, Pearson correlation is used in normally distributed data as well. The authors need to indicate the distribution of the data, and rectify the analytic approach and the result accordingly. 2. The conclusion that the adapted Chinese version screening test (Ch-SIT-12) is more useful than the original SIT-12 can’t be reached according to the result. The ROC curve shows that the non-adapted version has higher AUC than the adapted version. Besides, as the disease duration and gender differ between Chinese and German patients, the superiority may not be suitable to analyze in the first place. 3. Can the authors indicate who conducted the olfactory test for the subjects? Is it the same group performing the olfactory test for these subjects? Have they been trained in the same way? Is there a common protocol for both German and Chinese practitioners? Is there any blindness used? Is there inter-rater variability tested? I’m concerned as Chinese subjects performed better on both the non-adapted (SIT-12) and the adapted olfactory test (ch-SIT-12). Besides, the curve in ROC figure is smoother in German subjects while a small bump can be seen in the Chinese subjects, indicating larger variability in Chinese subject. According to Table 1, larger SD is shown. Can the variability come from different raters? 4. Have the abstract finished? There is an unfinished sentence in the result parts. There are grammar errors in the abstract. And the expression used in the abstract need to be more simplified and concise. 5. I suggest a brief summary of the main finding and implication of this study in the first paragraph in the discussion part. 6. Several grammar errors are present across the article. And th ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Olfactory Screening of Parkinson’s Disease patients and healthy subjects in China and Germany: A study of cross-cultural adaptation of the Sniffin’ Sticks 12-identification test PONE-D-19-15889R1 Dear Dr. Pinkhardt, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Jing A. Zhang, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: No comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-19-15889R1 Olfactory Screening of Parkinson’s Disease patients and healthy subjects in China and Germany: A study of cross-cultural adaptation of the Sniffin’ Sticks 12-identification test Dear Dr. Pinkhardt: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jing A. Zhang Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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