Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 31, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-15520 Mixotrophic cultivation of Spirulina platensis in dairy wastewater: effect on the production of biomass, biochemical composition and antioxidant capacity PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Emerenciano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please see the comments stated as Additional Editor Comments. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jul 27 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript:"The authors gratefully acknowledge the CAPES (Coordenação de Aperfeiçoamento de Pessoal de Nível Superior) for financial support and Laboratório de Nutrição Animal from the Federal University of Rio Grande do Norte (EAJ/UFRN) for chemical analysis and LARBIM (Laboratório de Ambientes Recifais e Biotecnologia com Microalgas) from the Federal University of Paraíba for biochemical analysis and for the facilities." We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows:"The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." 3. Please amend your list of authors on the manuscript to ensure that each author is linked to an affiliation. Authors’ affiliations should reflect the institution where the work was done (if authors moved subsequently, you can also list the new affiliation stating “current affiliation:….” as necessary). Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript has no page neither line numbers. Reviewers have difficulties to track and manage the manuscript if page and line numbers do not exist. The text has too many paragraphs, especially in the Introduction section. Can you please compact it? I also noticed excessive number of references. It is a common practice to use abbreviation of the species genus, such as S. platensis, once you already give the full species binomial name in the first mention. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-15520R1 Mixotrophic cultivation of Spirulina platensis in dairy wastewater: effect on the production of biomass, biochemical composition and antioxidant capacity PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Emerenciano, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Reviewers raised major concerns about the general manuscript structure as well as the statistical significance of the presented differences in the results section. More comments are listed below. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 13 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Highlight: Not provided Graphical abstract: Not provided General remarks: This manuscript focus on the growth of S. platensis microalgae using a pollutant by-product called cheese whey for high biomass and carbohydrate production. The used of English in this manuscript is poor and require to further amend the language. There is a lot of work needed to further improve this manuscript (e.g., structure arrangement, language, unnecessary introduction) My recommendation is not to accept this paper for now as there is still lack of assurance and required amendment in this manuscript. I hope my following comments world improve the following manuscript. COMMENTS: The used of English and grammar were poor. This section is not constructive enough in this section - Page 3, Line 63 – 65. Please read and cite some suggested paper for these biomolecules. 1. Khoo, K. S., Lee, S. Y., Ooi, C. W., Fu, X., Miao, X., Ling, T. C., & Show, P. L. (2019). Recent advances in biorefinery of astaxanthin from Haematococcus pluvialis. Bioresource technology, 121606. 2. Ren, H. Y., Xiao, R. N., Kong, F., Zhao, L., Xing, D., Ma, J., ... & Liu, B. F. (2019). Enhanced biomass and lipid accumulation of mixotrophic microalgae by using low-strength ultrasonic stimulation. Bioresource technology, 272, 606-610. Also, please remove “bioactive compounds”. - Page 4. Line 90 – 104, Please combine all into one paragraph. -Why is such concentration (2.5%, 5.0% and 10%) of cheese whey deployed for the culture medium? Why not (2.5%, 5.0% 7.5% and 10%?). Please give clarification for this. By doubling up the concentration is difficult for optimization. - Page 9, Line 266 – 269, the English used is too poor, please rephrase. - Based on Figure 1, why did the author stop at Day 17 and state it’s the maximum growth? Why not increase to Day 20 to see if there is any growth? - There is a lot of new paragraph for each section. Advise author to keep 1-3 paragraph is sufficient enough. Page 10, Line 295 – 298, This paragraph does not make any sense and clueless on discussion. Please revise. - I realize that the discussion part is too long and will get lost during reading. Advise author to revise overall of this manuscript. Keep it short and simple for the reasoning. - Page 13, Line 376, what species? Please state it. Page 17, Line 462 – 488. Combine all into one paragraph or remove it. It is too lengthy and not necessary for this result and discussion section. Much more to introduction. - Please revise the structure of the overall manuscript. There are still too many new opening paragraphs which does not seem to be important. - For Figure 2, why is the error bar for 10% whey cheese is so large. Some were small and some were large. This shows the inconsistency for the data collected. Reviewer #2: The authors used an experimental approach and determined the biochemical composition of the algae, in addition to biomass yields, specific growth rates, and antioxidant activity. The authors compared their results to those found in other studies, providing plenty of context. They found that Spirulina platensis can reach higher biomass yields and specific growth rates when clarified cheese whey is added to the growth medium, and that carbohydrate content increases. Protein, lipid, and antioxidant contents decreased, however, which affects which products can be made from the algae. Overall the cheese whey would be effective for improving biomass production and reducing cultivation costs for algae products that need high carbohydrate costs. One major way the study could be improved is by performing statistical analyses, which are not described in the methods section. However, results throughout the abstract, results, and discussion sections are often described as significant, even though it appears statistical tests were not performed. If statistical analyses are not going to be performed, the authors should be transparent about this, and only use qualitative descriptors to present the results. It appears that all data underlying results of the study are not available in the supplementary information (e.g., data for each of the control and treatment replicates that are used to provide the average and standard deviations in tables and figures). The authors should further clarify how their current manuscript complies with the journal’s data availability policy, or should include more of the experimental data in supporting documents or ideally in an online public data repository (e.g., Figshare). Lastly, the intended meaning of the manuscript writing is mostly understandable, but further editing is needed to improve readability. Minor and specific comments are described below: Abstract - It would be helpful to state in the abstract what the intended product from this alga is, and what characteristics are necessary (e.g. high carbohydrate content). This would help the reader evaluate whether the summarized results (e.g., increased carbohydrates and decreased lipids under mixotrophic conditions) are advantageous or disadvantageous for the intended product. Since the authors found that protein and antioxidants decreased under mixotrophic conditions, perhaps there should also be a statement about what specific types of products the algae can be used for after growing with cheese whey (i.e., products that just need carbohydrates). Line 48: This sentence could be improved for clarity. Does the description “relative to the culture” mean “relative to the autotrophic culture”? Line 73: Please clarify what “light invasion” means. Does this mean photoinhibition? Line 102: It may be helpful to specify in the Introduction which biochemical components are advantageous for which algae products. For example, which products would need high carbohydrates and antioxidants, and which products would need high lipids. Please also define phenolic compounds and what product they are advantageous for. Line 119: Please state if the culture was axenic (did not contain bacteria) or not. Line 122: Please specify what type of percentage this means (e.g., volume per volume or mass per volume). Were nutrient concentrations the same across treatments and the control, even if different percentages of cheese whey were added? Line 161: Does the added cheese whey affect optical density of the medium? Please explain how you used different standard curves because of this fact, and that they are available in the Supporting Information. (I believe Figure S2 is for the 2.5% whey treatment, but the caption says 5% whey). Line 169: Here and in the Results section, the specific growth rate is often referred to as the maximum specific growth rate, which could be incorrect. Based on the description in the methods section, the authors are calculating the specific growth rate based on data measured in the experiment, not the maximum specific growth rate, which would require measuring many specific growth rates at different substrate concentrations. Line 172: Writing out these equations for specific growth rate seems unnecessary, the authors could simply that the specific growth rate was calculated as the slope of the natural log of biomass concentration versus time during exponential phase, when the correlation coefficients of these two variables was above 0.98. Please also state which days were used to calculate the specific growth rate, since based on Figure 1 it does not look like the natural log of biomass versus time would be linear for the entire duration of the experiment. Line 183-184: The description of the polynomial function seems unclear. Did the authors just calculate the productivity for each day compared to day zero using Eq. 2, or did they use another function to compare productivity between all different days? Line 191: Could the authors briefly state how total nitrogen was measured? Line 225: Please explain why two antioxidant methods were used. Was it to cross-check the results? Table 1: How were these variables measured for the whey? Should they be included in the methods section? Table 2: As stated previously, this variable is the specific growth rate, not the maximum specific growth rate, based on the calculation method described in the methods section. This table should also include standard deviations based on the triplicates. Line 318: Authors are referring to a figure of productivity, so should clarify that they mean productivity and not specific growth rate. Figure 4: Please include a y-axis label. Table 4: Please explain these numbers, are they the lowest and highest fatty acid content (% of total fat?) of the three replicate cultures? Please discuss the implications of having a higher ash content and lower antioxidant activity when whey is added to the medium at optimal percentages (5%). Does this change which industries would be able to use the algae? ********** 7. 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PONE-D-19-15520R2 Mixotrophic cultivation of Spirulina platensis in dairy wastewater: effect on the production of biomass, biochemical composition and antioxidant capacity PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chagas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Alhough they addressed most of the issues perceived by reviewers, authors still failed to present their manuscript in a scientifically acceptable form. The text lacks readability and abounds superficial espressions. Moreover, syntax is generally poor. In the presented form the manuscript cannot be accepted for publication. I strongly encourage authors to ask for a critical review of a senior colleague(s) to give frank and objective advices how to reformat the text to gain a publishable shape. If authors wish, I can provide examples of my concerns in future correspondence. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 03 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Mixotrophic cultivation of Spirulina platensis in dairy wastewater: effect on the production of biomass, biochemical composition and antioxidant capacity PONE-D-19-15520R3 Dear Dr. Chagas, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Branislav T. Šiler, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-15520R3 Mixotrophic cultivation of Spirulina platensis in dairy wastewater: effects on the production of biomass, biochemical composition and antioxidant capacity Dear Dr. Chagas: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Branislav T. Šiler Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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