Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-19700 Reporting adverse events related to medical devices: A single center experience from a tertiary academic hospital PLOS ONE Dear Dr Alsohime, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 21 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer’s comments A reporting system was described in this manuscript. However, there are some issues that need to be addressed. Major comments 1. There is little description about the national reporting system, the name of the law, the time of legislation, the details in the required reporting, etc. 2. Demographic characteristics: the nationality/citizenship was not reported. Howe many of them were native? Do they have difficulties in understanding the regulations? 3. Can the authors be more specific about the “devices”? What are the devices that are more frequently used in the settings? 4. How was “Respond to it appropriately by examination” in the questionnaire defined? 5. The reporting interface (?) or methods were not described. In the Results, it seemed complicated. Was the reporting part of nursing education? 6. In the Discussion, the explanations about the key terms should be moved to the Introduction or the Methods. Minor comments 1. In the first sentence, Line 67, what does “(a 95% confidence interval and 5% marginal error)” mean? 2. In the Discussion, was there any data about the reporting rates in previous studies? Reviewer #2: Dear authors, I got to review your manuscript "Reporting adverse events related to medical devices: A single center experience from a tertiary academic hospital". In my opinion, your manuscript is already in a quite good state dealing with a topic highly worthwhile to further assess. However, there are some aspects, that should be covered/questions that were raised during the reading: 1.) In your introduction, line 53, you state that the development of the MDNR system remains in its infancy. However, you do not further elaborate. Please write one or two sentences as to why this system is not that well developed yet. 2.) In line 71 you state, that the questionnaire was drafted by the authors based on a review of the literature - can you further elaborate as to how this review was assessed? Do you refer to specific papers? 3.) Please keep the same order in Methods (1, 2, 3) and in results/discussion (1, 3, 2). I recommend to first present the results of the step sequence and THEN the personal experience (as it is in methods section). 4.) Have there been any nurse pupils, assistance care givers been questioned, as well? 5.) Please delete "approximately" in line 118, as it makes no sense. 6.) I recommend to give the percentage of those who had reported an AE compared to those who were aware of the system, as you state in the sentence (line 121f.). Then you can also lose the next sentence. 7.) In table 2, why does it say n=103 at the third question? Does that not have to be 102? And further, if n=102, how come the frequency is higher? I would only indicate the nurses, that have ticked yes in the second question (therefore n=102; yes: 44, No: 58). 8.) In your sequence of steps, I do miss the relevance of the patient - how comes, that there is no step "securing the patient's survival" or similar? 9.) In table 3 the n at "call the biomed technician" is missing. 10.) On page 12 in your discussion, you state, that the nurses had also reported usage errors - however, prior to that there is no mentioning of usage errors, just technical errors. So I recommend to delete it here AND 11.) Introduce a limitations section, in which you could also discuss, that some of these technical errors could be due to wrong usage and so on. In general, a limitations section would be helpful. 12.) In the middle of page 14, where do the 2% come from? I thought it would have been n=102, therefore around 34%? If the rest could not name the right system, then please introduce these 2% and this fact in results section already. 13.) Have you found any correlation between length of experience/age with the knowledge of the existence of that database? Please add this to your manuscript. 14.) Have you found any literature concerning the same topic with other medical professions? E.g. doctors - I would be interested in how many of those know about the existence of said systems. Please discuss. Thank you. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-19700R1 Reporting adverse events related to medical devices: A single center experience from a tertiary academic hospital PLOS ONE Dear Dr Alsohime, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 04 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Lars-Peter Kamolz, M.D., Ph.D., M.Sc. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the revision. Major comments - I am not familiar with the type of statistics used in the manuscript. The fixed effects of the types of ICUs may need to be controlled or specified by the ICUs, because the types of medical devices most frequently used and the levels of training might vary accordingly. - Discussion: there are several recommendations. However, they are not all based on the findings. For example, “The reporting system of adverse events to the SFDA should be anonymous, confidential, and non-punitive” was unrelated to the findings and inferred based on the comparisons with other jurisdictions. The non-punitive principle was mentioned in the first and second points. The term, “activated”, was not clear. Minor comments - Results: please use the tense consistently. Both present and past tenses were used. - Abstract: “international standard”? Do you mean the Danish system? - Table 1 and 2: please add total. - Fig 1 & 2: the units? Abbreviations? Reviewer #2: Dear authors, thank you for your revision. In my opinion, there is still some space for improvement. I would like to ask you to consider the following: 1.) While I can imagine, that the development of the MDNR system remains in its infancy because it has just been amended, it still remains elusive to me, if you mean that. If so, please indicate (see previous comment 1.) 2.) Even if you want to elaborate more on the adverse events in the discussion, the logical flow is compromised if you switch the orders. If you want to discuss the personal experience before the approach, please switch the order in the methods section then. (see previous comment 3) 3.)In table 2, the third question still makes no sense to me. How can the frequency of no be 253, if the whole n is just 102? Again a typo? Should it be 58? (See previous comment 7). 4.) Even if you explained the 2% (6 out of 279) now, you should really introduce that number in the results already. I do not want to think about the numbers again, when I am in discussion already. Every "new" result just leads to confusion. (see previous comment 12). 5.) You should really introduce a clearly delineated limitations section. (see previous comment 11) Thank you. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Reporting adverse events related to medical devices: A single center experience from a tertiary academic hospital PONE-D-19-19700R2 Dear Dr. Alsohime, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Lars-Peter Kamolz, M.D., Ph.D., M.Sc. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the revision. Please revise the following items: Typos to remove: 1. Line 112: remove 4. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-19-19700R2 Reporting adverse events related to medical devices: A single center experience from a tertiary academic hospital Dear Dr. Alsohime: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Lars-Peter Kamolz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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