Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-27717 A new method of recording from the giant fiber of Drosophila melanogaster shows that the strength of its auditory inputs remains constant with age PLOS ONE Dear Dr Blagburn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Line 28: Please, revise for clarity the sentence describing the 40% decrease and the following few sentences. Line 44: "motor neuron" or "motoneuron". Also line 284. Line 49: I think you can delete the "somewhat uncoordinated" Line 63: The shakeb should be designated as innexins and with a reference. Line 70. Eliminate quotations around love song and please describe the courtship song in a sentence or two for non-Drosophila readers Line 84: Consider using "the strength of the connection between auditory input and GF" Line 96: "Changes" in food probably does not mean different types of food? Please clarify in the text. Please, explain at line 163 the relationship between sound intensity and particle velocity. Are they linear? Some incite for readers who is not familiar with particle velocity might be beneficial. Line 164: Sound duration and frequency should be given. See also line 197: What does i.e. mean here? Were different frequencies used? Line 166 and following: Maybe this could be improved a bit by explaining the general idea at the beginning of the paragraph: that an electrical stimulus activates optical pathways that are kept subthreshold, but enable the auditory stimulus to become suprathreshold and elicit GF activity. This would also help for later (line 384). Line 208. Remove about. The latency should be directly measured and not roughly estimated. Line 209 - 210. The phrase in the parentheses feels like a sentence fragment. Please revise it. Line 267. Remove "in passing". It's either been reported or not. Line 289. Remove the whole sentence stating that a direct measurement of GF activity would be more advantageous. It's unnecessary and such direct measurements have their own limitations (equipment expenses, more difficult, invasive, etc). Line 350. 1ms delay to what? Line 404 / 405: Maybe this sentence would be better if split into two. Split sentence in line 406 into smaller statements. Line 427: It's not clear why this is a combined results / discussion section. The discussion part clearly starts in line 427, so why not call it discussion here? (just a suggestion) Line 441. This half sentence needs to be moved to line 433. Figure 4. Remove the figure title. Perhaps swap it for the y-axis and use no figure title. Figure 5. There are a lot of non GFN spikes in these recordings that don't seem reliably time locked to stimulation. Perhaps mentioning that these are from other non-identified neurons should be mentioned in the figure legend. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 09 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I enjoyed reading the manuscript by Jonathan Blackburn examining the changes in signal propagation through the giant fiber system over time in Drosophila. The paper introduces an elegant means of dissociating several synaptic steps in the giant fiber pathway by using sharp extracellular electrodes at several recording sites to deduce pre-synaptic activity in auditory and visual pathways from action potentials generated in the GFN. The data generally support the conclusion that JON sensitivity changes over the course of the flies lifetime while the giant fiber neuron response to auditory input remains constant. A small caveat is that high variability in the JON to GFN synapse strength may drown out small statistical effects. Essentially, it is difficult to prove there is no change over time as the change may simply be below statistical resolution. The study uses reasonable sample sizes to try to mitigate this risk. Overall, the study of synaptic aging is of high interest and this novel approach could facilitate identifying differences in synaptic maturation in a what that is more high throughput than direct synaptic physiology. I do believe the manuscript could be improved eliminating some of the more informal writing style and reducing the use of quotations. Below are some additional specific suggestions. 1) Line 70. Eliminate quotations around love song and please describe the courtship song in a sentence or two for non-Drosophila readers 2) Line 74. I don't think it's correct to refer to the adult as hatching. I believe this is eclosion. 3) I understand the complexity in measuring particle velocity and thus why the authors reported dB in arbitrary units. Perhaps the authors though could make a statement at line 163 about the relationship between sound intensity and particle velocity. Are they linear? Does a double in sound intensity result in at least a near doubling in particle velocity. Some incite for readers who don't think about particle velocity might be beneficial. 4) Line 208. Remove about. The latency should be directly measured and not roughly estimated. 5) Line 209 - 210. The phrase in the parentheses feels like a sentence fragment. Please revise it. 6) Figure 4. Remove the figure title. Perhaps swap it for the y-axis and use no figure title. 7) Line 267. Remove "in passing". It's either been reported or not. 8) Line 289. Remove the whole sentence stating that a direct measurement of GF activity would be more advantageous. It's unnecessary and such direct measurements have their own limitations (equipment expenses, more difficult, invasive, etc). 9) Figure 5. There are a lot of non GFN spikes in these recordings that don't seem reliably time locked to stimulation. Perhaps mentioning that these are from other non-identified neurons should be mentioned in the figure legend. 10) For the diptheria toxin experiments, was there any independent validation that the toxin killed these neurons? Co-expression of GFP with the toxin is a reasonable what to do this. 11) The sentence in line 406 is a very long run on sentence and was difficult to understand. Simply chop it up into smaller more comprehend-able statements. 12) Line 439, eliminate "never". Just state, "because JON PSP's do not go above threshold in this configuration ... 13). Please revise the writing of point (5) starting on line 439 of the manuscript. It is a really long sentence and it causes confusion. I am not sure that somatic recordings are very useful for assuming spike thresholds as the spike initiation site might be very far from the soma. I simply did not understand point (5). Reviewer #2: This is a very well written manuscript. I have only minor comments. The manuscript describes how the sensitivity of auditory pathways in flies changes with age, but that their output connection to a pair of descending giant fibers does not. This is shown using an elegant 'trick' to measure the connection strength between the auditory neurons and the giant fibers: An additional electrical stimulus activates visual pathways that converge onto the same giant fibers but this input to the giant fibers is kept subthreshold. Only visual and auditory stimulus together 'sum up' and elicit action potentials in the giant fibers. The experiments are well described and the conclusions are well formulated. The author has a very nice way of discussing alternative interpretations and laying out arguments for and against these interpretations. Line 28: The sentence describing the 40% decrease is difficult to understand. Similarly, the following few sentences could be better. They make sense once one has read the whole paper, but as a first time reader they are difficult. The end of the introduction gives a nicer summary of the results, for example. Line 44: "motor neuron" or "motoneuron". Also line 284. Line 49: I think you can deleted the "somewhat uncoordinated" Line 63: The shakeb should be designated as innexins and with a reference. Line 84: I suggest to use "the strength of the connection between auditory input and GF" Line 96: "Changes" in food probably does not mean different types of food? Please clarify in the text. Line 164: Sound duration and frequency should be given. See also line 197: What does i.e. mean here? Were different frequencies used? Line 166 and following: Maybe this could be improved a bit by explaining the general idea at the beginning of the paragraph: that an electrical stimulus activates optical pathways that are kept subthreshold, but enable the auditory stimulus to become suprathreshold and elicit GF activity. This would also help for later (line 384). Line 350. 1ms delay to what? Line 404 / 405: Maybe this sentence would be better if split into two. Line 427: It's not clear to me why this is a combined results / discussion section. The discussion part clearly starts in line 427, so why not call it discussion here? (just a suggestion) Line 441. This half sentence needs to be moved to line 433. Figure 6: the averaged inset needs a scale bar and state the number of averaged responses. Figure 6B: How do we know that the large spike is not the 'usual' GF spike, while the smaller spike before is just a subthreshold reflection of synaptic input? Maybe this could be stated clearly in the text. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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A new method of recording from the giant fiber of Drosophila melanogaster shows that the strength of its auditory inputs remains constant with age PONE-D-19-27717R1 Dear Dr. Blagburn, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Author has adequately addressed the issues that I raised in the previous version of the manuscript. As a result, the current version is now clearer and better supported. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. 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PONE-D-19-27717R1 A new method of recording from the giant fiber of Drosophila melanogaster shows that the strength of its auditory inputs remains constant with age Dear Dr. Blagburn: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Gennady Cymbalyuk Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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