Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-15769 When calculators lie: A demonstration of uncritical calculator usage among college students and factors that improve performance PLOS ONE Dear Mr. LaCour, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please find below the reviewer's comments. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 21 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review: When Calculators Lie 2019 (Plos1) Summary: This interesting research explored factors that influence whether or not solvers detect when calculators yield incorrect/implausible answers. This can happen ‘in the wild’ when typos are made and/or incorrect procedures are used, and, more theoretically, solver’s sensitivity to such errors arguably reflects math aptitude and understanding. The authors hypothesized (correctly) that an individual’s numeracy (conceptual understanding of math) would predict their sensitivity to such errors. Further, presenting problems in concrete contexts (word problems) vs. abstract form increases sensitivity at least in the case of large errors (Study 2,3). In Study1, the delay of calculator answer production -- to allow users to form expectations about the answer -- did not seem help them notice incorrect answers. [Some further discussion/interpretation desired]. Nor did adding a $5 financial performance incentive seem to increase sensitivity, although this comparison was not (yet) tested statistically (Study 2 vs. Study 3). Error magnitude (15% off vs. 120% off) and type (magnitude error vs. conceptual error: e.g., product of two negatives being negative) were also considered. This is interesting, novel research with theoretical and pedagogical relevance. It is connected to various existing lines of research, and interesting and motivated factors are considered. It is also generally well written. Study 1: 8 groups: 2(calc: 15% lie vs. no-lie) x 2(delay) X 2 (presentation: concrete vs. abstract) Within: lie probs vs. non-lie probs? Study 2: 2 groups: 2(Presentation: abstract vs. concrete), 120% lying on magnitude lie problems Within: Magnitude lies problems vs. Concept lie Problems? There we no non-lie concept problems (baseline) Study 3: 2 groups: 2(Presentation: abstract vs. concrete), 120% lying + $5 performance incentive Within: Magnitude lies problems vs. Concept lie Problems? 1. Some key additional analyses are requested since some very interesting manipulations are across vs. within experiments. It seems feasible and would add considerable value to add statistical analyses combining/comparing experiments to better understand the influence of these interesting manipulations, for example: a) magnitude of calculator error/lie (0%, 15%, 120%) 0% in no-lie group in Study 1, 15% in lie group in Study 1, vs. 120% in Study 2/3 just include the no-delay subset in Study 1 since there was no delay in Study 2/3 i) does lie magnitude affect Suspicion Likelihood ii) does lie magnitude affect Calculator Use (e.g., less likely to use Calculator if lies big-time) (on Q4-Q6 for those who used the calculator on Q3) b) Performance Incentive: Study 2=no, Study 3=yes i) does incentive affect Suspicion Likelihood ii) does incentive affect Calculator Use (e.g., more likely to use calculator if money on the line?) Study 2&3 could maybe even be described as a single experiment. 2. The use of the On-screen calculator use was *NOT* mandated/required for all VP questions. There are pros and cons to this design. a) On the con side, allowing solvers to opt out seems can cause missing data if they opted not to use calculator on critical “Lie” questions in the lie condition? The people who didn’t use the calculator on those questions couldn’t be included in the analysis (since they never saw the error to be suspicious of). The people good enough at math to opt out of calculator use (and thus be excluded from the analysis) however, arguably includes a subset of the sample especially likely to be skilled/savvy enough to be suspicious of dodgy answers. This possibility/limitation should be more explicitly spelled out in the discussion about the rarity of suspicion frequency (overriding/rechecking). E.g., line 550 b) HOWEVER, on the pro side, calculator use could itself serve as an additional potential index of suspicion. Opting to decrease calculator use after exposure to errors is possible evidence of suspicion. Was an original intention of the design (allowing them the flexibility to opt out of calculator use) to possibly see if they would opt to use the calculator less on questions 4-6 (especially quest 6 after 2 lies) in the lie condition than no lie condition as another possible indicator of suspicion? Do the data cooperate? (Please do and report requested analysis in Point 1)a)ii) above). 3. Delay Factor (Study 1): a) In Walsh & Anderson, if I recall correctly, calculator efficiency influenced the likelihood of them opting to use it (e.g., on subsequent trials) – so just as you tested to see if numeracy influenced peoples’ tendency to opt out of calculator use, also please test whether this delay factor influenced calculator use. b) What proportion of people were excluded from suspicion analysis (as non-users) in delay group vs. no-delay group? If delay caused more people to be excluded, it is possible that the people likely to opt out of calculator use (in response to delay) may be the more skilled ones and thus the ones who would have been more likely to detect errors. This should be discussed as a possible reason for failure to find an effect of delay on suspicion (if it induced more calculator opt out ). c) Additionally, in discussion section (Study 1 and/or general), could include other possibility as to why this hypothesized factor may have not had an effect (on suspicion) in this study, but did have influences (on other measures) in Walsh&Anderson (2009) and Pyke&LeFevre (2011). I might speculate that in Pyke&LeFevre (2011) the delay was before they could use the calculator, so they had nothing to do except try to mentally come up with the answer. However in the current research, I believe the delay came after they had already put in the effort of typing the problem into the calculator, so in that case they might not be inclined to further exert themselves to also then calculate mentally – rather they might just wait for the fruits of the labor (typing) they’d already invested. 4. Lie vs. Baseline Comparison (Study 1): -Line 244: Significance of Results are reported for various factors/coefficients (e.g., presentation format, delay, question number) – but not for the calculator (lie, no-lie) factor. Assume it is ns? Please report. Maybe the baseline condition wasn’t included in this analysis? However, since it was a manipulation there should be some statistical analysis comparing lie vs. no lie conditions. 5. End of Study Suspicion Reports: this info is reported for study 2 & 3, but not study 1 6. Numeracy and Calculator Use: Gen Discussion should consider why numeracy (as measured here) might not have influenced calculator use. It may have to do with the extent the measure focuses on conceptual knowledge vs. procedural fluency. Which is fine, as conceptual knowledge is likely more important/predictive for suspicion. Were the numeracy evaluations timed or time-limited? Measures related to time/speed related like calculation or retrieval “fluency” might better predict reliance on external computation devices. If there is timing (speed) data on for the numeracy tasks – this might predict calculator use. Another issue is that some people may have been using external calculators/smart phones. This should be controlled/prohibited in future research. Otherwise there is ambiguity in data interpretation – no keystrokes on on-screen calculator could mean they opted to mentally calculate OR use an external calculator. 7. Conceptual errors (Study 2): such conceptual errors and (detecting) sensitivity to them relates to some existing lines of research on “Operation Sense” by researchers such as Prather and (Dixon, Deets & Bangert). Some of that research should at least be mentioned/cited in the context of background and/or discussion Minor Points: -Abstract: after i.e., it should be “from” not “form” -Line 123: Sentence structure is a bit long/awkward. Maybe break into two sentences: However, **numeracy is** more than a simple prerequisite. Since numeracy explicitly…. -Line 131: missing words “than the”: greater discriminability of skills **than the** expanded…. -Line 157/158: Since it is between groups design, recommend clarifying that in the no lie condition the calculator will tell the truth on all problems vs. in the lie condition the calculator will lie on two problems. (If my understanding is correct). - Why round the answer to the nearest integer in the lie condition? - Please clarify in procedure: If participants rechecked an answer (re-typed question into calculator) – would it provide correct answer this time or still give the same error? -Line 241: if only participants that used calculator on both critical problems were included in analysis – please explicitly state what proportion of participants in the lie condition were omitted/included? Also do this for Study 2 and 3 please. -Line 242/243: Why were 94 participants involved in suspicion percentages for VP3 and 109 participants for VP5? Is this now including participants who used calculator for each question but not nec. Both questions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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