Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 24, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-14766 Evaluation of a Global Spring Wheat Panel for Stripe Rust: Resistance Loci Validation and Novel Resources Identification PLOS ONE Dear Dr Elbasyoni, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear Dr. Elbasyoni, I received comments from the advisers on your manuscript "Evaluation of a Global Spring Wheat Panel for Stripe Rust: Resistance Loci Validation and Novel Resources Identification" which you submitted to PlosONE. Based on reviewer comments and my assessment I have decided that your manuscript could be reconsidered for publication should you be prepared to incorporate major revisions. When preparing revised manuscript, you are asked to carefully consider the reviewer comments, which can be found below, and submit a list of detailed and itemized responses to the comments. Please take attention to comment of reviewer one regarding use of an average data. With kind regards, Dragan ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Aug 12 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Dr. Elbasyoni, I received comments from the advisers on your manuscript "Evaluation of a Global Spring Wheat Panel for Stripe Rust: Resistance Loci Validation and Novel Resources Identification" which you submitted to PlosONE. Based on reviewer comments and my assessment I have decided that your manuscript could be reconsidered for publication should you be prepared to incorporate major revisions. When preparing revised manuscript, you are asked to carefully consider the reviewer comments, which can be found below, and submit a list of detailed and itemized responses to the comments. Please take attention to comment of reviewer one regarding use of an average data. With kind regards, Dragan [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments Major comments 1) Combined data analysis: The authors presented the disease score result as an average of disease scores across environments and over time. Since these are field experiments, there may be natural infections (the manuscript presented strong arguments showing natural infections in the experimental locations: lines 118-128, 470-472 and 569-570). The response of accessions may vary depending on the prevalent race in each location and year. Hence, calculating averages may not provide an accurate picture of the reaction of accessions in each location and year. For example, an accession with resistant reaction in one location (R = 2) but susceptible reaction in the second location (S = 8) will have an average disease score value of 5, which may be categorized as MR = 4 or MS = 6. Both MR and MS are not actually the disease reactions for that specific accession. The result has to be presented as “the accession had resistant reaction in location 1 but susceptible reaction in location 2”. The QTL analysis should also be done for each location and year separately (the authors may refer an article in Plant Genome doi:10.3835/plantgenome2016.10.0107). 2) Selection of resistant accessions: The authors presented in Table S2 (supporting information) accessions that were selected as resistant. They picked only accessions that were having resistant reaction (disease score of 3 and less). This will exclude accessions that were moderately resistant. An accession with MR disease reaction to yellow rust is considered as a good source of stripe rust resistance, hence have to be included in the selection. Sometimes depending on the disease severity accessions with MS reaction could also be a good source of adult plant resistance. Minor comments - Shorten the introduction Line 140: …. Stripe rust resistance Line 170: delete ‘was’ Line 181: Field disease reaction of germplasms to rusts (R, MR, MS, S) at adult plant stage is not referred as infection type (IT). IT is a term used to refer reaction to seedling reaction. The words for adult plant response are ‘Field Response’. Hence, change IT to field response throughout the manuscript. Line 344: What does ‘infection value’ indicate? Use terms consistently across the manuscript. Lines 344-346: What was the cut point to distinguish R from MR, MR from MS and MS from S? This has to be indicated in the materials and methods part. As it stands, Gimiza9 with value of 4.6 is closer to MR = 4 than MS = 6. Line 347: what does resistance score represent? Be consistent Line 466: delete ‘that’ Line 477: environments Table 1. R2 values are between 0 – 1. Why are there values greater than 1? TableS2. Field response of the selected genotypes in both years and location should be presented separately, i. e., Elbostan-2016, Elbostan-2017, Elkhazan-2016 and Elkhazan-2017. Reviewer #2: Dear Dr. Ibrahim Elbasyoni, the manuscript deals with stripe rust as one of the most important fungal wheat diseases. Occurence of new races has been observed many times in the past. Warrior races led in Europe to massive infections. Hence it is of high interest to evaluate genetic ressources which can increase the resistance of cultivars in the future. Therefore,as one result, shown in the manuscript, resistant genotypes can be selected for breeding, supported by SNP markers, which are easy to handle. However some aspects can improve the manuscript: Please check the English spelling in some parts. At the beginning you use "Identifying" several times. Perhaps, some alternatives should be integrated into the text. Other points: Line: 64 to 66: Check sentence (tense). 69: change letters "Yr" to Italic style entire Introduction: PLease change both mentioned Yr.. to Italic style Line 127: Please include a citation into the sentence about Warrior races Line 155: I would like to suggest to change from "an experimental farm for" to "field station of" Line 170: Divide into two words Line 170 to 173: Please show approximately the spore amounts (e.g. 20 mg per slot)... How was the germination rate of spores (if data are available). At which time of the day, inoculation was performed. Line 203: Please cite original source of wnsp 2013 consensus map Line 390 (Table 1: Please indicate in the description of the Table,that R² describes the percentage of explained phenotypic variance. Line 418: change frequenc to frequency Line 453: No information about the method to get the data for Table 2 were provided in the Material and Method (MM) section. Is this a blast of markers to genes in a database? Did you use the reference genome to check this informations? Please insert method into MM section. Are these genes the best hits or did you select genes, specific for defence reactions? Table S1, Please show the high heritability of the trait in the results already. This heritability is very high in comparison to other studies (as you discussed). Please check Table S2. Why only breeding lines are provided, all are Type R independend from the Yr score. Please show in the head of the table, what Yr score means. All should be self explaining. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Belayneh Admassu Yimer Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-14766R1 Evaluation of a Global Spring Wheat Panel for Stripe Rust: Resistance Loci Validation and Novel Resources Identification PLOS ONE Dear Dr Elbasyoni, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Dragan Perovic, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear Dr Elbasyoni, according to reports of our reviewers you manuscript could be considered for publication if you are willing to incorporate minor changes. Hope that your respond will be quick in order to avoid further delays. Regards Dragan [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1) The cut points described in lines 196 - 198 are for single observations (R = 2, MR = 4, MS = 6 and S = 8). They don't take in to account average values. What happens if the average value is 5? Will it be MR or MS? That is why you need to describe your cut off point. On the same lines (355 - 358) you described Gimiza9 with average value of 4.6 as MS. I don't believe it's MS, rather it is closer to MR than MS. Describing the cut off value will avoid such confusions. 2) Lines 201 - 202: The authors described how they calculated the ACI; but at no point did they use the ACI values in the results or discussions part. Hence, you may delete the description in the materials and methods part. 3) The introduction part is still too long. It can be significantly shortened. Reviewer #2: Dear Dr Ibrahim Elbasyoni, all comments have been addressed. Critical comments have been considered. Please change only line 107: "accession" to accessions. The manuscript provides now valuable information's about genotypes, molecular markers, usable for resistance breeding against yellow rust. The northern regions of Africa are effected by many abiotic and biotic stresses. Yellow rust epidemics have been observed in European countries as well, so that genotypes carrying effective resistances in this study are usable in the future as the basis for an increased resistance level of elite material. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Belayneh Admassu Yimer Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Albrecht Serfling [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Evaluation of a Global Spring Wheat Panel for Stripe Rust: Resistance Loci Validation and Novel Resources Identification PONE-D-19-14766R2 Dear Dr. Elbasyoni, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Dragan Perovic, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Dr Elbasyoni, it is my pleasure to accept your manuscript for publishing at PlosONE. Regards Dragan Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-14766R2 Evaluation of a Global Spring Wheat Panel for Stripe Rust: Resistance Loci Validation and Novel Resources Identification Dear Dr. Elbasyoni: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Dragan Perovic Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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