Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 16, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-23195 A Bayesian framework for the detection of diffusive heterogeneity PLOS ONE Dear Dr Cass, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 17 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study describes a Bayesian inference algorithm to estimate local values of the diffusion coefficient inside live cells from single trajectories of intracellular particles. This type of algorithm can be useful to researchers interested in quantifying diffusivity of heterogeneous or time-varying environments, including but limited to the cytoplasm of live cells. The manuscript describes related existing efforts in the literature, and makes a convincing point that the present algorithm, and in particular its associated freely accessible implementation, is sufficiently different from those existing efforts. In particular, while the parametric nature of the present study is a limitation with respect to existing, non-parametric, efforts, its simplicity may be advantageous to those without significant expertise in statistical mechanics. The manuscript analyzes the error in the estimated D based on the localization error of the particle. As expected, the error decreases with the length of the recorded trajectory. However, Figure 5 shows this error seems to be unacceptably large for some combinations of values, and it is unclear whether a “typical experiment” (this is a loose term whose meaning is expanded below) would yield acceptable results. The authors argue that the purpose of Figure 5 is for each researcher to assess the error for their own experiments. This is valuable but Figure 5 is plotted in a way that makes this assessment difficult: 1) Only two values of D are covered. It would seem to make more sense to plot Figure 5 normalizing the localization error with (D*tau)^(1/2). This could capture the D-dependence of the estimation error, and only one panel might be necessary to cover all D values. 2) Second, a line plot or contour plot format would be preferable to read errors in the plot. 3) It would be informative to represent a “typical experiment” or experiments in the localization error and trajectory length coordinates of Figure 5. The authors can use experiments from the literature and / or their own data from previous studies. As the authors point out, a limitation of the study is that it focuses on an idealized model of intracellular diffusion. The authors argue that the method could be adjusted to account for complicated phenomena, such as subdiffusion, but the intended audience of this algorithm may not find this straightforward. This issue is compounded with the fact that this reviewer finds the purely diffusive case to be particularly amenable to the analytical calculation of the posterior distribution. Other cases may be harder… It would be informative to illustrate how the algorithm would be modified in the subdiffusive or e.g., persistent-random walk case by presenting the posterior distribution for those processes. Finally, there may be cases in which modifying the algorithm to account for non-purely diffusive, isotropic behavior is not feasible or where the actual behavior that needs to be accounted for is unknown a priori. It would be informative to know the error in estimated D in those cases. Again, subdiffusive, persistent-random or anisotropic random walk cases come to mind. Minor comments: 1) Is the alpha in equation 2 related to the alpha in equation 1? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-19-23195R1 A Bayesian framework for the detection of diffusive heterogeneity PLOS ONE Dear Dr Cass, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Juan Carlos del Alamo Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciate the authors' efforts to address my concerns and am for the most part satisfied with their revisions. I have a couple of remaining comments. First, the list of references is rather short and there are places at which the authors discuss standard statistical inference theory without providing appropriate references to the literature. Perhaps a graduate level textbook would be enough. I believe this would be important considering the targeted audience. Second, I still believe the authors overestimate the generality / flexibility of their approach. I understand the computational framework they present could be extended to other scenarios more representative of intracellular fluctuations than a Gaussian process. However, it is not clear that these extensions would be trivial. In fact, they even recognize this point themselves (circa line 370). I appreciate the authors including a section where they benchmark their tool for fractional Brownian motion. I would suggest to temper the statements about generality of the framework. Also, please use the same color axis and color bars in figures 5 and 7 to facilitate direct comparison (as in by caxis of Matlab or clim of python). Reviewer #2: The authors manuscript with the accompanying, well-documented python repository is a valuable tool for researchers without significant expertise in Bayesian statistics. It would be more helpful to gather better intuition for KL divergence criterion with more details on how to interpret Fig 6. For e.g, an approximate threshold value of threshold KL below which the posteriors have a given probability to represent the same true diffusion constant (and therefore, not representative of the heterogeneous environment). Authors explain the intuition of KL values, but a rule of thumb would be more beneficial to design experiments. The authors also provide an accessible way of estimating baseline errors in inference using heatmaps in Fig 5. A very important source of sensitivity to parameter inference lies in prior distribution parameters and a brief guide of choosing parameters (a,b) to not introduce bias in analysis (uninformative prior) would be recommended. Minor typo: In pg 7/18, the likelihood function is written as p(theta | x) instead of p(x | theta). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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A Bayesian framework for the detection of diffusive heterogeneity PONE-D-19-23195R2 Dear Dr. Cass, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Juan Carlos del Alamo Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-23195R2 A Bayesian framework for the detection of diffusive heterogeneity Dear Dr. Cass: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Juan Carlos del Alamo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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