Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-22122 The effect of overnight consolidation in the perceptual learning of non-native tonal contrasts PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers have expressed that the research presented can have valuable impact, but have suggestions for improving the strength of the paper and interpretations. Both reviewers offer suggestions for improving the clarity of the paper, particularly with regards to providing justification for certain methodological decisions. In particular, Reviewer 2 also recommends incorporating more coverage of the background literature on the effects of sleep on learning to improve the theoretical justification behind your predictions, and has questions and ideas about the interpretation of your results. I agree that the suggestions brought forth by the reviewers would improve the article, and thus offer the opportunity to revise the manuscript in accordance with their feedback. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Following previous work on the effects of sleep vs. wake state on the consolidation of learned segmental nonnative speech contrasts, the authors examined the potential effect of sleep on the generalization of tones across talkers. To this end, the authors trained two groups of learners: Evening and Morning, and examined group-level differences in the pattern of changes to perceptual performance over 24 hours. The authors found that while those trained in the Evening appeared to improve in their identification performance over the subsequent 24 hours, that the Morning group declined in performance. The authors interpret their findings as evidence of sleep’s role in talker generalization. I found this work to be interesting and well-executed. I have some methodological questions, and comments/minor suggestions for edits. Methods: Why was raw trial-by-trial accuracy modeled for the ID task, whereas AX performance appears to have first been transformed into d’? I can see pros/cons of each (and thus have no objection to either being used, per se) – but I do find the inconsistency in how the data was handled across tasks to be a bit odd. Which sleep questionnaire was used (in-house? If so, what were the questions asked?) Interpretation: The authors rightly point out some important distinctions between the current findings and the Earle & Myers (2015) study on talker generalization. Specifically, the current findings of a Time*Group interaction (but no Time*Group*Talker interaction) indicates that performance on the untrained talker follows a roughly similar learning trajectory to the trained talker, if I’m understanding correctly. Given that, talker generalization of tones may not be separate from talker-specific learning of tones. Given that, some scaling back of the assertion that the findings are primarily about talker generalization might be warranted (e.g. “First and foremost…overnight consolidation facilitates generalization across talkers…”(p.25)). The findings that sleep promotes perceptual tone learning in general is in itself interesting. I do agree with the authors’ interpretation that some differences with previous findings may relate to the variability of stimuli used during training (p.28). The findings by Fenn et al. (2013) cited elsewhere in the manuscript may be of some relevance to this point. Minor comments: Table 3 in the ID performance section says “AX posttests” – which results are being displayed here? The authors use the term “development” to refer to changes to perceptual behavior across time (in abstract and in the introduction). As “developmental” is most often used to refer to changes during child development, the use of the term here comes across as confusing. Figures (at least on my copy) appear to have low-resolution/are blurry. Reviewer #2: Summary This study explored the effects of memory consolidation after sleep on the perceptual learning of new lexical tone contrasts. Two groups of native Mandarin speakers were trained to identify 3 Cantonese level tones [T1 (high-level), T3 (mid-level) and T6 (low-level)]. One group was trained in the morning and tested immediately after training, after a 12-hour delay and after a 24-hour delay. The other group was trained in the evening and tested immediately after training, 12 hours later after a night of sleep, and again in the evening, after a 24-hour delay. Both groups were administered pitch sensitivity and pitch memory tasks and an AX perceptual discrimination task before the identification (ID) training. After training, they were administered both the AX as well as the ID posttests. The results showed a significant increase in tone identification accuracy from posttest 1 to posttest 3 for both trained and untrained talker among the evening training group but not among the morning training group. No significant difference was found between the two groups in the AX discrimination posttests. The authors concluded that “overnight consolidation facilitates generalization across talkers in the identification of novel Cantonese level-level tonal contrasts.” Comments The effects of memory consolidation resulting from sleep on learning among animals and humans remains controversial. While extending this line of research to lexical tone learning will add new information to an existing body of research in speech learning, concerns on some aspects of the research design and the interpretations of the results prevent me from recommending this paper for publication in its current forms. But with substantial revision, the authors may be able to contribute with this data set. In case it is helpful in future revisions, some of my primary concerns are outlined below: 1. The introduction did not provide enough information to motivate the theoretical predictions. I suggest that the authors thoroughly review the literature on memory consolidation during sleep for information on such issues as the type of memory (i.e., declarative versus episodic) facilitated by sleep, and how this may impact speech sound category learning. Mechanisms underlying an identification (ID) and an AX discrimination task should also be thoroughly discussed. It’s not clear to me what the theoretical motivation was for including both tasks in the study. Different levels (e.g., auditory-acoustic, phonetic and phonological) of processing should also be discussed. From the literature, an ISI of 1 sec would likely elicit the phonetic or the phonological level of processing (as opposed to the auditory level of processing), making the AX and the ID tasks comparable. Yet, the different findings between the two tasks are puzzling. In addition, it’s also not clear why acoustic dynamicity, claimed to be characteristics of lexical tones but not of segments (vowel and consonants), would differentially impact the overnight consolidation effects. Note that vowel and consonant acoustic properties are also dynamic and are subject to variations across phonetic contexts, talkers, speaking rates, etc. 2. Some of the results are not consistent with the general conclusion that “overnight consolidation facilitates generalization across talkers in the identification of novel Cantonese level-level tonal contrasts” while some others remain to be accounted for. As pointed out by Fenn et al. (2003), “Sleep has at least two separate effects on learning. Sleep consolidates memories, protecting them against subsequent interference or decay. Sleep also appears to ‘recover’ or restore memories “ (p. 616). From Figure 3, for trained speaker, the difference in identification accuracy between posttest1 and posttest2 for the evening training group was not statistically significant, suggesting, contrary to the authors’ conclusion, a lack of consolidation during the 12-hour period of sleep. Significant improvement from posttest1 to posttest3 is puzzling in so far as it suggested that additional consolidation occurred during the 12 waking hours between posttest2 and posttest3. Note also that the morning training group outperformed the evening training group numerically immediately after training (postest1). In fact, even in posttest2, the evening training group’s performance remained numerically lower than that of the morning group at posttest1. It would appear that there is a ceiling effect of the training. While the evening training group still has room to improve after posttest1, the morning training group appears to have hit a ceiling. 3. Statistical power is also a main concern. The authors should present evidence of enough statistical power of all the statistical analyses performed. 4. It is also peculiar why the talker asserted different effects on the two training groups and on the two types of tests (ID and AX discrimination). 5. A number of sentences are not easily parsed so the paper should be proof-read by a native speaker. Minor questions/concerns 1. Did the subjects in each training group spend the same amount of time on the training? 2. Why was it necessary to make sure that the subjects performed at an above chance level immediately after training? 3. Why were the tone stimuli normalized to 500 ms? 4. Discuss if and how the administration of the ID posttests prior to the AX discrimination posttest may have been responsible for the results obtained. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-19-22122R1 The effect of overnight consolidation in the perceptual learning of non-native tonal contrasts PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript was sent out for review to Reviewer 2. I agree with Reviewer 2 in saying that the paper has been very much improved and is nearly ready for publication. Reviewer 2 requests that you add discussion of an alternative explanation from findings not involving speech stimuli for your finding of a group difference in the identification task and not the discrimination task, based on the nature of the training and different task requirements. I agree that this argument would fit and complement the paper, and will accept the paper pending this minor revision. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 05 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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