Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJuly 2, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-18584 Differentiating electrophysiological indices of internal and external performance monitoring: Relationship with perfectionism and locus of control PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alexandra Michelle Muir, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I really enjoyed your article and that I believe it should be accepted for publication in PLOS ONE with minor corrections, after you address the concerns of the reviewers, meanly Reviewer 1. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by November 8, 2019. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript the authors explored the association between individual difference measures of perfectionism, locus of control, and ERN, Pe, and RewP. In general, the manuscript is clear and well written. Methods follow the research questions and results allow to answer such questions. First of all, I’d like to congratulate the authors for all the control analyses they carried out in order to reduce the chance of getting false positives. My concerns are mainly about the statistical methodology, and I would be happy to review this paper again after they are answered or fulfilled by the authors. ABSTRACT 1. Please define Pe. INTRODUCTION 2. What do the authors mean with individual difference traits? Aren’t they just individual traits? 3. The authors claim that “Another ERP component where individual differences, such as levels of anhedonic depression, are implicated is the reward positivity”. I wonder whether there is any ERP for which there are no individual differences, like age, gender, fatigue, psychopathology, etc. maybe the authors might emphasize that they refer to individual personality or trait differences. HYPOTHESIS 4. I wonder why would individuals with more internal locus of control exhibit enhanced ERN and reduced RewP? Given that they do not attribute high control over themselves and give most of the credit to the environment, one would expect for them to show enhanced sensitivity to external feedback, and hence larger RewP amplitudes. Please comment. 5. I don’t get why the authors suggest that heightened Pe would be present in participants with increased perfectionism AND those with more internal locus of control. From the Introduction, one would think that perfectionists do not trust their own abilities to influence environment, so then enhanced Pe would be expected in perfectionist participants with low internal locus. METHODS 6. The authors decided to use only differential waves for their analyses, and they give an argument about that. Certainly, differential waves can extract reliably the components of interest. Nevertheless, I think it is always useful to explore the raw ERP that contains the process of interest, as these data are less manipulated. Did the authors try using these ERP for their regression analyses? 7. While there were no lineal associations between ERP and personality traits, I wonder whether there would be a difference if ERP were compared in terms of presence/absence of trait. Did the authors try comparing the ERP by a median split within the sample or based on cutoff points? Moreover, as they did not include participants with evident psycopathology, how about comparing participants with extreme scores in each scale? Even if the sample did not include psychiatric patients, a high score in the scales (e.g. 48 in the Levenson scale) could be considered as a risk factor. 8. Were ERN and RewP correlated across participants? DISCUSSION Please propose some clinical populations in which it would be relevant to explore the association between these personality traits and ERP. MINOR Line 259, page 12, “cents” instead of “centers” Reviewer #2: Experiments seem to have been performed in an adequate manner. A-priori analyses were carried out to ensure an adequate reliability of the ERPs. Achieved power, effect sizes and other important values are reported. Data underlying their findings is readily available. The manuscript is presented in a good English. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The comments made by reviewer 1 were adequately addressed, the research question is well presented, as well as the psychophysiological correlates of the psychological constructs posed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Mauricio González-López |
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