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PMEN-D-23-00014

Does a specialized assessment improve vocational outcomes for people on sick leave with a suspected common mental disorder? Results from the Mental Health Assessment Study (MeHAS)

PLOS Mental Health

Dear Dr. Hoff,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Mental Health. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Mental Health’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please be aware that you are not obliged to implement all Reviewers` recommendations. If you choose not to accept some of them, please provide the justification in the rebuttal letter. One of the crucial points is the Data Availability Policy of the PLOS Mental Health. 

Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 28 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at mentalhealth@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pmen/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter.

We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Vitalii Klymchuk, Ph.D., D.Sc.

Academic Editor

PLOS Mental Health

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Comments to the Author

1. Does this manuscript meet PLOS Mental Health’s publication criteria? Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe methodologically and ethically rigorous research with conclusions that are appropriately drawn based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: I don't know

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available (please refer to the Data Availability Statement at the start of the manuscript PDF file)?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The article meets the PLOS Mental Health publication criteria. The manuscript presents a methodological and ethically rigorous investigation. And the data supports the conclusions. .

However, it is suggested to review the following observations:

1. Expand information on the procedures used for the application of the instruments and used for the development of the intervention

2. Describe the characteristics of informed consent and the procedure to request it.

3. It is necessary to expand the possible scope of the research. This would allow us to define the relevance of the publication of the manuscript.

4. In the conclusion, point out more specifically what the recommendations for future studies would be, above all, to improve assignment biases and to obtain more convincing results in the vocational and work area.

Reviewer #2: It would be great is the authors provided the link on the underlying data (that is accoding to the PLOS Data Availability Policy), and elaborated more in discussion and conclusions about policy implications of theirs findings.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Does a specialized assessment improve vocational outcomes for people on sick leave with a suspected common mental disorder? Results from the Mental Health Assessment Study (MeHAS)

PMEN-D-23-00014R1

Dear Dr. Hoff,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'Does a specialized assessment improve vocational outcomes for people on sick leave with a suspected common mental disorder? Results from the Mental Health Assessment Study (MeHAS)' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Mental Health.

Before your manuscript can be formally accepted you will need to complete some formatting changes, which you will receive in a follow up email. A member of our team will be in touch with a set of requests.

Please note that your manuscript will not be scheduled for publication until you have made the required changes, so a swift response is appreciated.

IMPORTANT: The editorial review process is now complete. PLOS will only permit corrections to spelling, formatting or significant scientific errors from this point onwards. Requests for major changes, or any which affect the scientific understanding of your work, will cause delays to the publication date of your manuscript.

If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact mentalhealth@plos.org.

Thank you again for supporting Open Access publishing; we are looking forward to publishing your work in PLOS Mental Health.

Best regards,

Vitalii Klymchuk, Ph.D., D.Sc.

Academic Editor

PLOS Mental Health

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