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PONE-D-20-15659 Multiplicative priming of the correct response can explain the interaction between Simon and flanker congruency PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rey-Mermet, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. I have received two expert reviews and am ready to act. The reviews are excellent in both their thoroughness and thoughtfulness (thanks to both reviewers). As you will see below, the reviewers have raised some issues and I think your study can provide conclusive answers to the issues raised with a major revision. I will not spend time summarizing the reviews in any detail, you can see the detailed reviews below. Given these reviews, I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please pay attention to the following comments and give them due consideration, as those changes are required for acceptance. I will send back the revision to both reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The present work aims for a better understanding of the origin of the under-additive interaction between Simon and flanker congruency effect evidenced by previous work. Experiment 1 tests whether the interaction results from a spatial feature overlap between tasks by orthogonally manipulating the spatial configuration between both tasks (Simon horizontal/flanker vertical and Simon vertical/flanker horizontal). A robust interaction between Simon and flanker congruency effects was observed in the two groups, ruling out the spatial overlap hypothesis. Experiment 2 tests whether the interaction stems from a bias in the learning of the stimulus-response mappings. The interaction was still observed when equating the number of stimulus exemplars across all trial types, ruling out this hypothesis. Finally, Experiments 3a and 3b evaluate the hypothesis of a multiplicative priming account. In congruent trials, the correct response is activated by the irrelevant stimulus attribute of each task (the position on the screen and the flankers), which may result in multiplicative priming of the correct response (each irrelevant feature would increase response activation proportional to its activation, which would accelerate processing in congruent-congruent trials). This hypothesis was evaluated by incorporating neutral Simon and flanker trials. If the under-additive interaction results from multiplicative priming induced when the trial is both Simon and flanker congruent, the interaction should be observed when the facilitation effect (neutral minus congruent) is used as the dependent variable, but not when the interference effect (incongruent minus neutral) is used as the dependent variable. According to the authors, the results provide evidence for the multiplicative priming account. The paper addresses a complex and interesting topic in the field of cognitive psychology. It is well written, and the experiments are rigorously conducted. I enjoyed the thorough theoretical approach to the problem, and found the results from Experiments 1 and 2 compelling. However, I believe that some important methodological and theoretical issues regarding the evaluation of the multiplicative priming account should be addressed before the paper is published. See attached file. Reviewer #2: Results of this study are interesting but the way in which they are presented is not convincing. There are many logic inconsistencies and the rationale of the experiments is weak: the proposed accounts cannot explain the critical interaction and/or the proposed experiment is not appropriate to evaluate the account. I suggest starting from the multiplicative priming account, which appears to be the most sensible, sound and grounded account based on previous studies, and presenting feature-overlap and frequency of S-R parings as factors they may have an impact on the interaction, i.e., they may be necessary for the multiplicative priming and, consequently, the interaction to occur (feature-overlap) or they may either act in favour or counteract the under-additive interaction predicted by the multiplicative priming account. The study may be presented as an attempt to evaluate the impact of these factors. MAJOR POINTS 1) Other accounts of the interaction (conflict-monitoring and spatial-code decay). p.8. lines 117-125. I do not fully understand why the results of the ERP study described here rule out the conflict-monitor and spatial-code decay accounts. Please, give a thorough and clear explanation for that. Beyond this, the results of ONE experiment are not enough to rule out an account - especially because: (a) as I understand it, the critical results challenging that account are ONLY the ERP data of that study ; (b) the conflict-monitoring account is presented in the paper as one of the main accounts for the interaction. I do not actually think that the conflict-monitoring account is the main account for the interaction. In my view it is a sensible explanation for sequential effects, but it is not a sound explanation for this type of interaction (see my second minor point). In any case, among the studies that the authors mention, there may be other studies the results of which challenge these two accounts (conflict-monitor and spatial-code decay). For example, did other studies perform distributional analyses? Did other studies find additive effects instead of interactive effects? Did other studies find other types of interactions? Are these additive effects/other types of interactions accountable for by these two hypotheses? From what I understand, the results of the present study do not rule out these alternative accounts (both accounts are compatible with the results), thus the authors should present convincing evidence that the multiplicative priming account is the most suitable explanation for the interaction. 2) On p. 8, the authors claim that “although flanker conflict and Simon conflict are resolved at separable stages, there appears to be little influence of the earlier stage on the later one.” What are these different processing stages? That the flanker and Simon effects arise at different processing stage is indeed inconsistent with: (a) the conclusions of the present study. According to the additive factor logic, the presence of an interaction suggests that two effects arise at the same stage, or involve at least one processing stage in common (cf. Sternberg, 1969, 1984). Moreover, if, as suggested by the authors, the interaction is due to priming of the same vs. different response(s) by the two irrelevant features, then we can conclude that both effects emerge at the response-selection stage. (b) main accounts of the flanker and Simon effects, according to which they both emerge at the response selection stage. There are plenty of evidence suggesting that the locus of both effects is that stage (cf., e.g., literature reviews by Proctor and colleagues, Eriksen and colleagues, experimental studies like that by Hübnerand Töbel, 2019) and I think that the authors should explicitly state it. They should also underline that, given that both effects arise at the same processing sage, one may expect an interaction between the two compatibility factors. 3) The feature overlap account is NOT an account for the interaction, but only a possible account for the discrepancies between studies: according to this account, the interaction can only emerge when there is an overlap between the irrelevant spatial feature producing the Simon effect and a spatial feature of the flanker object(s), thus this overlap is a prerequisite for the interaction (and this would explain why in some studies no interaction emerged while it emerged in others), but it does not specify which is the mechanism producing the interaction. Accordingly, feature overlap should not be presented as an account for the interaction, but as a possible factor influencing it. It is worth noticing that a paper mentioned by the authors on p. 5 and p. 45 (Treccani et al., 2012) proposes that the interaction only emerges when there is massive overlap between the two irrelevant features (i.e., they are borne by the very same object) and participants process such an overlap (i.e., they “bind” the two features). Thus the “feature binding” is the prerequisite. Yet, the mechanism proposed to account for the interaction is multiplicative priming. 4) pp. 9-11. The account based on the “learning of stimulus-response mappings” does not actually account for the critical interaction, at least as it is presented (see REASONS** below). The authors may consider presenting the frequency of presentation of the different S-R pairings simply as a factor that may influence the performance in this kind of tasks (i.e., tasks combining more than one compatibility factor). They may present Experiment 2 as an experiment aimed to investigate the possible impact of this factor and its possible contribution to the interaction (together with OTHER factors) - in principle, at least, this factor may actually counteract, rather than act in favour of the interaction (see below). If they decide to do so, they should specify in which previous studies this factor may have had an effect, that is, in which previous studies using flanker-Simon paradigms the S-R pairings were presented with a different frequency. Indeed, the rationale of Experiment 2 would become even weaker if in other previous studies the frequencies of different S-R parings were balanced. To make a significant contribution to the understanding of the factors influencing performance in this kind of tasks, I strongly suggest comparing (by means of an ANOVA) the results of Experiment 2 with that of the similar condition of Experiment 1 in which, however, frequencies were not balanced. In this way, the authors may evaluate the specific contribution of this factor. **REASONS WHY THIS ACCOUNT DOES NOT WORK: (a) The authors claim that “the stimulus-response mappings for the congruent-congruent trials are the easiest to learn and then to retrieve because there are only two mappings” This does not make any sense to me : the congruent-congruent trials are not presented in isolation but with the other trials, thus each of these two (I would say) S-R “doubly” congruent pairings are simply one of 8 possible S-R pairings. They cannot be easier to learn or retrieve. (b) The authors probably meant something else: They probably meant that the numbers of times with which the S-R pairings are presented can explain the interaction (i.e., some S-R pairings may be practiced more). However, I do not understand how. - When the stimulus irrelevant features are two (e.g., two positions, two flanker identities), and the study provides for the same number of trials in all the four possible categories (a. flanker congruent-Simon congruent; b. flanker incongruent-Simon incongruent, c. flanker congruent-Simon incongruent; d. flanker incongruent-Simon congruent), the number of S-R pairings for each category is exactly the same (i.e, two S-R pairings for each category), thus one would not expect any interaction. To produce the interaction, a study should provide for a larger number of S-R pairings for the categories a and b than for the categories c and d. For example, a study that considers only three categories: totally congruent trials, totally incongruent trials, partially (either flanker or Simon) incongruent trials. This last category would include more S-R pairings (i.e, 4 exemplars), that would be presented less frequently To the best of my knowledge, a similar study has not been conducted, thus this is not an account for the interaction for any two-feature study (If –instead- I am wrong, the authors should explicitly mention this study and explain that in this specific case the interaction may emerge from the addition of two compatibilities effect and the effect of the number of exemplars/frequency) - When the stimulus irrelevant features are four, and the study provides for the same number of trials in all the four possible categories, the number of S-R pairings for each category is as proposed by the authors: 4 exemplars of the category a (congruent congruent )< 12 exemplars of category c= 12 exemplars of category d< 36 exemplars of category b . The effect of this should be: RT (and/or errors) of a<c=d<b, which="">There is no apparent reason why there should be advantage for the 4-exemplars “a” category over the 12 -exemplars categories, while there should not be an advantage of the 12-exemplars categories (“c” or “d”) over the 36-exemplars category. Quite the opposite, these different frequencies may counteract a possible under-additive interaction produced by other factors (e.g., multiplicative priming). The comparison I suggested (see above) may help to understand the real impact of this factor. (c) The authors also state that “Explaining performance on this trial type may be sufficient to account for the interaction …The reason is that although previous research has focused on the reduction of the congruency effect of one task when the other task was incongruent, the interaction between Simon and flanker congruency mainly resulted from an increase in the congruency effect of one task when the other task was congruent, in particular from the fast RTs and high rates of correct responses in the congruent-congruent trials” As explained above, this pattern of performance cannot be explained by the different frequency of S-R pairings given that, based on that, one should expect larger effects of a compatibility factor in both levels of the other factor. Moreover, I do not think that the interaction mainly results from an increase of the effect of a congruency factor in the congruent level of the other factor: in some studies a congruency effect was found in the congruent level of the other factor, while this effect was no longer significant in the incongruent level of the other factor (thus, a reduction/disappearance of the effect was observed in the other-factor incongruent conditions compared to standard conditions). The authors themselves found a disappearance of the effect of a compatibility factor in the incongruent level of the other factor. E.g.,: “Similarly, the Simon congruency effect was smaller – but not significant – when the trials were flanker incongruent” 5) The rationale of Experiments 3a and 3b is not clear. Do these two experiments simply aim to verify a prediction of the multiplicative priming account? The authors claim that “the interaction should not be found when the interference (i.e., the difference between incongruent and neutral trials) was used as dependent measure”. What are the predictions based on other accounts? Could we expect other outcomes based on the other factors mentioned by the authors? I have other major concerns, but they might no longer be relevant if the authors decide to change the manuscript according to the comments and suggestions I have detailed above. MINOR POINTS 1) From the manuscript: “Simon Task, flanker task, and their interaction” “Previous research has shown an interaction between the Simon and flanker tasks when both tasks were combined within the same trial”. It is worth noticing that the interaction is not between two tasks. Indeed, the task is only one: participants had to indicate the colour of the central letter while ignoring the flanking letters and their location on the screen. This task had the characteristics of both typical Simon and flanker tasks. I would say that the interaction is between the flanker-target identity congruence (the compatibility factor usually observed in flanker tasks) and the stimulus-response spatial correspondence (the compatibility factor usually observed in flanker tasks). Speaking about two tasks may be confusing to the reader (one may think of a dual-task paradigm) and makes it harder to understand the proposed accounts for the interaction. For example, that authors claim that “One can assume that the conflict monitoring system estimates the current levels of conflict for the task being processed first. If this task is incongruent and thus associated with a high degree of conflict, this leads to a shift of control signal. That is, response-relevant features are activated while all irrelevant features – including those for the task being processed second – are inhibited. Thus, the strength of control is also adjusted for the second task to be processed.. “ What are the tasks the authors are speaking about? I guess they are speaking about irrelevant features, instead of tasks, which are not to be processed (given that they are task-irrelevant), but they are processed nevertheless. I would rather write: “One can assume that the conflict monitoring system estimates the current levels of conflict. If the first irrelevant feature being processes (e.g., stimulus position) is incongruent with the relevant one, and thus associated with a high degree of conflict, response-relevant features are activated while all irrelevant features (not only that already processed) are inhibited. “ 2) Also, what is exactly inhibited according to the conflict-monitor account? Following some versions of this account (e.g., the “gate” version), when a conflict between competing response codes is detected by the conflict monitoring mechanism, the weight of the route activated by the irrelevant feature(s) is attenuated. Do the different versions of the conflict-monitoring account have different predictions? Actually, as underlined above, I find this account not very convincing. If the gate closes, it should close in the first place for the direct route involving the feature for which a conflict is detected. Moreover, it should take a while for the gate to close, thus the effect of this closure should be observed in the following trial 3) p.8 " Hommel [6] (see Table 1), suggesting that this effect could explain the observed interaction in some experiments but not in others". What effect? Please be more explicit “suggesting that this phenomenon(i.e., the decay of the stimulus spatial code) could explain 4) Please fix inconsistencies in lexical choices. “Stimulus-response mapping” (e.g., p.9) usually means the instructed (i.e., contained in the instructions) associations between specific stimulus values and the correct responses(i.e., the responses required by these values). I think that the authors should use instead “S-R pairings” (e.g., S-R congruent pairings). Note that the authors themselves use “stimulus-response mapping” with the standard meaning on p. 14. p. 14. “The stimulus was determined randomly for each trial” Maybe better (more clear) “the stimulus colour was…”. 5) p. 16. In contrast with the horizontal-key condition, the keys in the vertical-key condition are not perfectly aligned along one spatial axis, the vertical one (i.e., they are not perfectly one above the other). Can the authors justify this choice? (in many keyboards, there are numerical keys which are vertically aligned). 6) pp. 14-16. I did not understand whether stimuli were of different size in the different conditions (it is not clear from the description) and whether in the flanker pure blocks the asterisks appeared in a (central) yellow square as in the pure Simon blocks. These seem unnecessary differences between experimental conditions.</c=d<b,> ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-15659R1 Multiplicative priming of the correct response can explain the interaction between Simon and flanker congruency PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rey-Mermet, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. The previous reviewers agreed to review your revision. Whereas Reviewer 1 is completely satisfied with this revision, Reviewer 2 raised a number of concerns (see the detailed review to upload). I invite you to submit a revised version of your manuscript addressing the points raised by R2. If you disagree with some of R2’s points, please make that clear in your response letter. I will send back the revision to R2. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-20-15659R2 Multiplicative priming of the correct response can explain the interaction between Simon and flanker congruency PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rey-Mermet, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. R2 thank you for the detailed responses to his/her suggestions. He/she is suggesting other minor modifications that you might wish to add into the final version of your manuscript. I will read this final version without sending it to R2. Please submit your final manuscript by Apr 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete this finale version, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for their detailed replies to my comments. The following are additional comments that the authors may take into consideration: “The account presented here is so far very similar to the temporal overlap account proposed by Hommel (1997), except to one key difference. Here, we do not assume a spontaneous decay of the representation features” I think that the account presented here is very different from the account that Hommel proposed in 1997 for the interaction between S-R correspondence and S-S congruency. According to Hommel, S-S congruency (the compatibility between the target and flanker) affects the perceptual encoding of the stimulus, stimulus identification, while S-R correspondence (the correspondence between stimulus and response positions) affects response selection. In S-S incongruent trials, stimulus identification would be delayed and thus, when response section starts, the irrelevant spatial code would not be active anymore (either because of the decay of the spatial code or because of active inhibition of this spatial code - that does not matter in this context). Accordingly, this code would not have any effect on response selection (->under-additive interaction). In contrast, the authors here propose that both S-S congruency and S-R correspondence affect response selection: Both irrelevant features prime the congruent/correspondent response at the response selections stage. If there is an overlap in time between the effects of these priming processes (if the response primed by a feature is still activated when the second priming process occurs) we observe the interaction. Thus, in order for the interaction to be observed, the overlap does not need to occur between the processing of the two features, but between the effect of the processing of the two features: the effect of the processing of one feature (i.e, the response priming mediated by one feature) must overlap in time with the effect of the processing of the other feature (i.e. the response priming mediated by the other feature). In this respect, in my view, the two accounts that the authors propose in the ‘Discussion’ section (pp. 53-57) are not that far from each other. In the cover letter the authors claim “ the EEG findings are not directly compatible with an account assuming an overlap in time. The EEG results clearly showed separate ERPs associated to the processing Simon and flanker irrelevant features.” However, the lack of an overlap in time between two ERP components reflecting the processing of two stimulus features is totally consistent with an overlap in time of the effects of the processing of these two features: one feature can be processed and its effect (i.e., response activation/priming produced by the processing of this feature) can last over time. Finally in the Discussion section the authors claim that: “if one considers that the interaction between Simon and flanker congruency does not emerge during conflict processing, but appears on the level of motor responses.” This is confusing: According to main models of response selection, in the case of tasks such as Simon and flanker tasks, conflict processing DOES occur at a motor-related stage, namely, response selection (thus the level of motor responses coincides with the stage in which response conflict emerges). In this kind of tasks, the possible responses are only two or four (the same 2 or 4 responses are repeated in the different trials) and they are typically button presses, thus critical variables are not likely to affect other (late) motor-related stages, that is, motor execution (such as happens instead with unpredictable, complex movements). Response selection coincides with the activation /inhibition of the motor codes of these responses. ********** 7. 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