Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJune 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-20042 Prognostic factors for severity and mortality in patients infected with COVID-19: A systematic review PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Izcovich, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: First of all one has to applaud the authors for the sheer amount of data, they have provided in this systematic review! Generaly the manuscript is well writen, but still contains a few typing errors. Some formulations formulations are a matter of taste. Nevertheless, I would recommend to change them (detailed information can be found below). Abstract: Since you are describing/systematically reviewing prognostic factors, I would go so far and claim that it influences decision making! Prognostic factors are importnat as well, but they are not predictive factors. Therefore, developing a predictive model (would call it multivariate model not multivariable model) to estimate disease course, severity and mortality is, what the data support. Since arterial hypertension, and cardiac arrythmias are mentioned seperately, it should be defined, what cardiovascular disease includes. Basically all laboratory test you mention are tested in the blood/serum or plasma. Please omit using blood ... (e.g. WBC instead of blood WBC). It is heavily affecting the fluidity of the text and adds no information. Propably it makes sense to define it at one point. Ultimately, it is also not consistant through the text/tables. Covid-19 is defined as an infectious disease (does not include asymptomatic SARS-CoV-2 infections). Please change infection to infectious disease. Introduction: Please cite the RECOVERY trial (contains important and prospective reference information regarding mortality rate and the rate of severe Covid-19 disease). "Can may be used" (page 8) can be formulated a bit more eloquent (e.g. have to potential to be used/applied or can be potentially used). What is mentioned above about decision making applies also here. Methods: The sentence on page 17, chapter 1, line 3 is difficult to understand. "Exposed" is not the correct wording here. The biomarkers/clinical factors/symptoms/etc. are absent or present. It is also not clear if the biomarkers are measured/determined at baseline/SARS-CoV-2 diagnosis or crossed/never crossed the treshold during the complete disease until recovery. Please be more specific in your description. This is essential information! On page 17, chapter 2, line 5 please change studies results to study results. That you promote an update (AI based) is a huge plus point and might already be necessary! The mortality has currently dropped to 5%. Your reference value is no longer up to date!!! On page 13, line 2 please change "inseverty" to "in severity". Although the cut-offs used are arbitrary, they seem to be weel chosen (e.g. 0.5% in overall mortality is one tenth of the current overall mortality). Results: Please change "Physical examination factors" to a more appropriate term. Fatique is rather subjective and a symptom. Personally I am also not aware of a test for myalgia. Rewording is required for example to "symptoms, vital signs & abnormal physical examination results". Laboratory factors: as mentioned above. Some terms (e.g. immuncompromise) need a better definition (lymphopenia, immunosupressive medication, etc. ???). Please mention why you didn't look at co-medication! This might be the only factor, which is relevant for decision making!!! Overall it is an important review, which summarizes the current biomarker landscape for Covid-19. The cut-off date (End of April 2020) is very early and new discoveries have been made since. NLR and lymphopenia have been even published earlier. They should actually have met the inclusion criteria, but are not included (Lancet, Lancet Resp. Med. Feb 2020). Data have been homgenised and adjusted. The tables, figures and supplementary figures are very informative and have been nicely prepared! Results: The mortality risks Reviewer #2: This study sets out to report a very important issue: prognostic factors that may be used in decision-making related to the care of patients infected with COVID-19. Although, this topic is not novel, the current research investigated it in a much more detail way than previous studies. In addition, authors also raised the possible questions that must be tackled in near future in order to develop multivariable prognostic models that could eventually facilitate decision-making and improve patients’ outcomes. Reviewer’s comments: 1. The definitions of severe COVID-19 disease are adopted from multiple studies and therefore are inconsistent. How do the authors eliminate the effect of inconsistent definitions on the association analysis? 2. When severe COVID-19 disease was not reported as an outcome, the authors considered ICU requirement, invasive mechanical ventilation (IVM) and acute respiratory distress syndrome (ARDS) as surrogate outcomes. Did authors analyze the correlation between primary outcome and surrogate outcomes in this study? 3. The ICU requirement, invasive mechanical ventilation (IVM) and acute respiratory distress syndrome (ARDS) were used as surrogate outcomes. As a results, the outcomes in this study include mortality, severe COVID-19 disease, ICU requirement, invasive mechanical ventilation (IVM) and acute respiratory distress syndrome (ARDS). Multiple outcomes make the results difficult to be interpretated. If those outcomes could be analyzed separately, the results can be interpretated more precisely. 4. In the analysis of multivariable models, the variables used for model adjustment include age, one comorbidity (e.g diabetes) and one parameter of disease severity (e.g. respiratory rate) at minimum. How do the authors validate that this setting is statistically appropriate? 5. In this study, the authors arbitrarily set thresholds to define important incremental increase in the risk of their outcomes, including mortality or severe COVID-19. How do the authors validate that those thresholds can select proper prognostic information? 6. The thresholds were set in 0.5% increase in mortality and 1% increase in severe COVID-19 disease. Do the authors analyze the correlation between 0.5% increase in mortality and 1% increase in severe COVID-19 disease? 7. The authors used the clinical scenario of a patient infected with COVID-19 with severe but not critical disease to assess the prognostic value on mortality. Please clarify the definition of critical disease. 8. When prevalence of prognostic factors was not available, the authors used described baseline risks (9% for mortality and 13 % for severe COVID-19 disease). This setting will inevitably lead to bias in the results. 9. This study enrolled 207 studies and only 7 were judged as low risk of bias as the remaining presented important limitations in at least one domain or item. Hence, there are multiple inevitable bias in the current study, limiting the reliability of the results. 10. There is too much information in Table 1. Is there any way to condense the information or split it into different tables? 11. The authors described that clinicians can use their results to tailor management strategies for patients with COVID-19. 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