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A Randomized Controlled Trial of Storytelling as a Communication Tool

  • Lisa Hartling ,

    Affiliation Alberta Research Centre for Health Evidence, Department of Pediatrics, University of Alberta, Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

  • Shannon D. Scott,

    Affiliation Faculty of Nursing, University of Alberta, Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

  • David W. Johnson,

    Affiliation Departments of Pediatrics and Physiology & Pharmacology, University of Calgary, Calgary, Alberta, Canada

  • Ted Bishop,

    Affiliation Department of English and Film Studies, University of Alberta, Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

  • Terry P. Klassen

    Affiliation Manitoba Institute for Child Health, Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada



Stories may be an effective tool to communicate with patients because of their ability to engage the reader. Our objective was to evaluate the effectiveness of story booklets compared to standard information sheets for parents of children attending the emergency department (ED) with a child with croup.


Parents were randomized to receive story booklets (n=208) or standard information sheets (n=205) during their ED visit. The primary outcome was change in anxiety between triage to ED discharge as measured by the State-Trait Anxiety Inventory. Follow-up telephone interviews were conducted at 1 and 3 days after discharge, then every other day until 9 days (or until resolution of symptoms), and at 1 year. Secondary outcomes included: expected future anxiety, event impact, parental knowledge, satisfaction, decision regret, healthcare utilization, time to symptom resolution.


There was no significant difference in the primary outcome of change in parental anxiety between recruitment and ED discharge (change of 5 points for the story group vs. 6 points for the comparison group, p=0.78). The story group showed significantly greater decision regret regarding their decision to go to the ED (p<0.001): 6.7% of the story group vs. 1.5% of the comparison group strongly disagreed with the statement “I would go for the same choice if I had to do it over again”. The story group reported shorter time to resolution of symptoms (mean 3.7 days story group vs. 4.0 days comparison group, median 3 days both groups; log rank test, p=0.04). No other outcomes were different between study groups.


Stories about parent experiences managing a child with croup did not reduce parental anxiety. The story group showed significantly greater decision regret and quicker time to resolution of symptoms. Further research is needed to better understand whether stories can be effective in improving patient-important outcomes.

Trial Registration

Current Controlled Trials, ISRCTN39642997 (


Children’s illness and injury cause parental anxiety[1,2]; major sources of parental anxiety are uncertainty about the condition and its management[3,4]. Providing information about the illness and processes of care has been linked with reduced anxiety and uncertainty as well as greater satisfaction with medical services and more appropriate healthcare utilization[2,4]. Standard written instructions have been found lacking[5], while alternative formats (such as video presentations, illustrations, or cartoons) have been found to be more effective. Storytelling is one of the oldest forms of communication[6]. Recently, there has been resurgence in the use of storytelling in medicine in diagnostics[7,8], therapeutics[9-11], and education[12-17]. Stories may be effective because they are easy to understand and more likely to be remembered[18]. An appeal of storytelling is its ability to present information couched within a personal account that engages the reader and validates their own experiences[19,20]. Few randomized trials have evaluated the effectiveness of stories and among the trials that exist, there is variation in the purpose of the stories and target populations. Only one trial involved a pediatric, clinical population and addressed management of parental anxiety. Melnyk et al. developed an educational-behavioural intervention for children admitted to a pediatric intensive care unit and their mothers which included reading and discussing a story about a young child who successfully copes with a stressful hospitalization[21]. While there were no differences in parental anxiety during hospitalization, the intervention group showed reduced anxiety at 1 month post-discharge (effect size 0.32), as well as reduced depression, and symptoms of post-traumatic stress disorder following hospitalization. The primary aim of this study was to investigate the effectiveness of storytelling compared to standard information sheets for parents of children attending the emergency department (ED) with a child with croup. Croup was chosen as the condition with which to examine the hypothesis because of the frequency of its presentation to the ED[22-24], the anxiety that it causes for parents[25], and the large body of evidence that supports the therapeutic management of the disease[26].


The protocol for this trial and supporting CONSORT checklist are available as supporting information; see Checklist S1 and protocol S1. This parallel randomized trial was conducted in the emergency departments of three tertiary care pediatric hospitals in Canada: Stollery Children’s Hospital (SCH) in Edmonton, Alberta Children’s Hospital (ACH) in Calgary, and the Children’s Hospital of Eastern Ontario (CHEO) in Ottawa. The original study protocol included only two sites (SCH and ACH); CHEO was added in the last year of the study in order to complete recruitment in a timely manner. Recruitment occurred between October 2007 and March 2010. The study was registered ( and approved by the respective institutional Ethics Review Boards prior to commencement: the University of Alberta Health Research Ethics Board, the University of Calgary Conjoint Health Research Ethics Board, and the CHEO Research Ethics Board. Study subjects provided written informed consent prior to participation; the consent process and forms were approved by the ethics committees. Parents of children with a clinical diagnosis of croup were eligible. Parents had to meet the following additional criteria: 1) have a telephone and agree to be contacted for follow-up interviews; 2) fluent in English; 3) provide informed consent; 4) no prior visit to an ED during this episode of the disease; 5) no prior visit to an ED for another episode of croup during the study period. Parents were excluded if: 1) stridor was due to another cause; 2) parent had previously participated in the study. The experimental intervention was a package containing three booklets that integrated stories, as told by parents of children with croup attending the ED, with evidence regarding the epidemiology and treatment of the condition. Each story reflected a case of different severity (mild, moderate, severe). The purpose of the stories was to deliver health information to the parents in the context of real parent experiences. We hypothesized that stories would generate more impact than standard information sheets because of the situation-specific details and human experience related through the recounting of events[19]. Development of the story booklets has been described[27]. A standard information sheet produced by the Alberta Medical Association was the control intervention. After they had been randomized to treatment groups, parents received the story package or the information sheet. In addition, all children received usual medical care. The interventions are available elsewhere[28]. While we planned to recruit parents as soon as possible after arriving at the ED, due to practical and confidentiality issues we were unable to recruit parents when they first arrived at the ED; therefore, recruitment occurred once the child and parent were in a treatment room. The randomization sequence was computer generated by a statistician. After obtaining informed, written consent from the parent, the research personnel opened the next envelope in a series of consecutively labeled, sealed, opaque envelopes. The research personnel and treating physician were unaware of the next group assignment. Parents were blind to the interventions being compared. While they were aware that the study was evaluating some aspect of managing croup, they did not know what aspect was being tested. Because of the nature of the intervention, the researcher and other ED personnel were not blind to the intervention that participants received. Figure 1 describes recruitment and follow-up. Immediately after recruitment and informed consent, the research personnel collected demographic information and participants completed the State Trait Anxiety Inventory (STAI)[29]. The research personnel assessed the severity of the child’s illness using the Westley Croup Score[30]. On discharge from the ED, participants completed the STAI again. The research personnel contacted the parent by telephone at 1 day and 3 days after the ED visit. Parents of children who were still symptomatic at day 3 were contacted every 2 days until the symptoms resolved or until day 9.

Figure 1. Flow diagram of patient recruitment and follow-up

The primary outcome was change in parental anxiety from baseline (immediately following recruitment to the study) to discharge from the ED. State anxiety was measured using the Spielberger STAI which is a well-known instrument designed to measure state anxiety at the time of administration, in the recent past, or at a future point in time. The inventory consists of 20 items that ask respondents to indicate how much each statement reflects how they feel on a 4-point Likert scale ranging from “not at all” to “very much so”. Scores are summed and range from 20 to 80; higher scores indicate higher anxiety[29]. The scale has good internal consistency and takes 6-10 minutes to complete during initial administration and less than 5 minutes during repeat administrations[29]. Secondary outcomes are described in Table 1.

OutcomeMethod of assessmentTiming of assessment post emergency department visit
Expected future anxietyState-Trait Anxiety Inventory regarding expected anxiety should they face another incident with croup in the future [29]Day 1
Event impactThe Impact of Event Scale includes 15 self-report items to measure intrusion (7 items) and avoidance (8 items) resulting from exposure to anxiety-producing events (in this case, the child’s croup illness). Using a 4-point Likert scale ranging from “not at all” to “often,” respondents indicated how frequently the items were relevant to them during their child’s illness with croup. This tool has been shown to have good internal consistency and takes up to 10 minutes to complete[53].Last follow-up (day 3, 5, 7, or 9 depending on when croup symptoms resolved)
Parental knowledge10 questions developed specifically for this study about the natural history of the disease, symptoms, and management strategies Day 3
Parental satisfactionIndependent questions with responses on a 5-point Likert scale for satisfaction with overall ED visit and with the information they receivedDay 1
Parental decisional regretValidated scale assesses “remorse or distress over a decision”[54] (i.e., the decision to take their child to the ED). Participants rate five statements from strongly agree to strongly disagree (see Table 6 for specific items). Day 1
Incidence of return to be evaluated by a physician (or other health care practitioner) for croup Parent self-reportAssessed at each follow-up interview
Healthcare utilization Parent self-report of seeking further medical care for croup following the visit to the ED, the type of consultation, location of care, type of care provider, and whether they were prescribed any medicationAssessed at each follow-up interview
Resource utilizationParent self-report regarding costs for medication, equipment (e.g., humidifiers), parking and travel, ambulance service, child care, and time lost to usual activitiesAssessed at each follow-up interview
Ongoing croup symptomsTelephone Outpatient Score for Clinical Status (TOP score)[55,56]. The TOP score involves three questions dealing with croup symptoms: whether the child makes a noise when breathing, whether the child has a cough, and whether or not the cough is barky.Assessed at each follow-up interview
Long-term outcomesknowledge of croup, other incidents of croup occurring after the study, and their reactions to and management of subsequent croup episodes 1 year

Table 1. Secondary Outcomes.

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Sample Size

The initial anxiety level in both groups was estimated to be 45 on the STAI-S[1,4,31-38]. Based on previous research[21], we hypothesized that parents in the story group would return to a “normal” level of anxiety following treatment (i.e., 36 or 37)[29], while those in the comparison group would remain more anxious (i.e., 39 or 40)[29]. We conducted sample size calculations, using a two-sided, two sample t-test with a significance level of 0.05 and standard deviation of 10 (based on the cited studies), to detect a difference of 3 points. For 80% power, we required 176 individuals per group. The sample size was inflated by 20% (210 per group) to account for potential contamination and drop-outs[39].

Data analysis

Baseline variables were described for each group. For the primary outcome, a change score from baseline to discharge was calculated for each patient. The median change scores were compared between groups using the Mann-Whitney test. Continuous outcomes were compared between study groups using independent-groups t-tests if the data were normally distributed, and the Mann-Whitney test if the data were skewed. Categorical outcome data were analyzed using the Chi-square test. Kaplan-Meier curves for time to resolution of symptoms were tested for equality using the log rank (Mantel-Cox) test. Our analysis was based on intention-to-treat where all participants who were randomly assigned to a study group were included whether or not they received or complied with (i.e., read) the intervention to which they were assigned. Analyses were conducted using SPSS 18.

Study data and additional analyses not reported here are available from the corresponding author.


413 parents participated. Figure 2 describes the recruitment and follow-up of study participants to day 3 which was the last follow-up point required for all participants. There were no notable differences between groups in demographic variables (Table 2).

Figure 2. Recruitment and follow-up of study participants.

Story bookletsInformation sheet
Age of participant (i.e., parent), years (mean, SD)
Sex of participant (i.e., parent)
Age of child, years (median, IQR)2.1 1.2,3.51.9 1.2,3.1
Alberta Children's Hospital9244.29144.4
Stollery Children's Hospital9646.29345.4
Children’s Hospital of Eastern Ontario209.62110.2
Number adults living in the home
Number adults participating in care of child
Relationship to child
grades 1-910.510.5
grades 10-11 (some high school)94.394.4
high school graduate2512.04220.5
some college/university3717.83818.5
college graduate6430.86029.3
post-graduate education or degree6832.75225.4
Marital status
never married73.4157.3
separated, divorced, or widowed115.3146.8
Household income (Canadian $)
Ethnic or minority group
Place of birth
North America15574.516882.0
Outside of North America4722.63215.6

Table 2. Demographics.

*percentages except for age where value reported is a standard deviation
SD=standard deviation; IQR=inter-quartile range SD: standard deviation; IQR: inter-quartile range; NR: no response
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Overall, parents demonstrated a moderate level of concern at baseline with a mean self-rating of 6.3 (SD 2.5) on a scale of 1 to 10 (10 is highest concern) (Table 3). The majority of participants had no prior history with their children of croup admissions, ICU admissions, or intubations (Table 4).

Story bookletsInformation sheet
Level of concern about the following items:
uncomfortable aspect of child's cough
0 (not at all)73.421.0
3 (extremely)7435.66933.7
unusual sound or nature of the cough
0 (not at all)125.842.0
3 (extremely)7837.57335.6
unusual sound of child's breathing
0 (not at all)94.352.4
3 (extremely)9545.710048.8
effort that child is making to breathe
0 (not at all)178.2125.9
3 (extremely)8942.88541.5
child is not getting enough oxygen
0 (not at all)3918.83718.0
3 (extremely)5426.05727.8
child may be wheezing or have asthma
0 (not at all)4923.64220.5
3 (extremely)5526.45526.8
child's sleep was disturbed
0 (not at all)2713.02411.7
3 (extremely)7335.17235.1
parent felt increasingly tense or frustrated as a result of the illness
0 (not at all)4019.23416.6
3 (extremely)5024.03517.1
child might be hospitalized
0 (not at all)4220.25024.4
3 (extremely)4622.13215.6
illness might recur in the future
0 (not at all)157.2199.3
3 (extremely)7033.76732.7
not knowing about this illness
0 (not at all)3416.33617.6
3 (extremely)5325.54321.0
  1. Overall concern (scale 1-10)

Table 3. Parental concern at baseline.

NR=no response; SD=standard deviation
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HistoryStory bookletsInformation sheet
Parent first noticed respiratory symptoms (number of days to ED visit) (median, IQR)10,211,2
Prior history of croup
no history11555.312159.0
History same child3818.33517.1
History other child2713.02612.7
History both2612.52210.7
Prior history of croup admissions
no admits18388.017685.9
ED visit only this child94.394.4
ED visit only other child31.483.9
previous admissions this child52.452.4
previous admissions other child73.462.9
Prior admissions to ICU
no ICU admits20498.120097.6
ICU this child10.521.0
ICU other child10.510.5
Prior intubations
no history18990.918087.8
History this child94.3146.8
History other child83.883.9
History both10.521.0
Prior serious illness or chronic medical condition this child
Croup severity
total score (median, IQR)10,321,3
ED Care
left without being seen10.542.0
discharged home18588.918791.2
Prior to recruitment patient seen by
triage nurse19895.219796.1
staff nurse10751.411656.6
staff physician7033.75928.8
Prior to recruitment treatment ordered
Read information during ED visitN=173N=179
Read study material10158.412770.9
Read additional information4324.73318.4

Table 4. History of previous illness, severity of illness at baseline, and ED visit.

percentage except where otherwise indicated
ED=emergency department; IQR=interquartile range; ICU=intensive care unit
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The majority of patients presented with mild croup: median croup score of 2 (IQR 1,3) on a scale of 0 to 17 (Table 4). Approximately 90% of the patients were discharged home from the ED; less than 5% were admitted. Prior to recruitment approximately 1 in 5 children had been seen by the staff physician and treatment had been ordered for almost 70%.

Approximately 65% of participants read the study material during their ED stay while 22% read additional information on croup. Fewer parents in the story group read the study material (58% versus 71%) but more parents in the story group read additional material (25% versus 18%). There was no association between parental education level and whether they read the stories or sought additional information.

The baseline anxiety score on the STAI was 37.2 (SD 12.3) for the story group versus 38.8 (SD 12.3) for the comparison group (Table 5). At discharge the STAI scores were approximately 5 to 6 points lower for both groups (32.2 and 32.8, respectively), with no significant difference between groups in change in parental anxiety from baseline to discharge (p=0.78).

OutcomeStory bookletsInformation sheetsP-value
Anxiety - STAI
Baseline (mean, SD)38.1 (12.1)38.5 (11.4)0.71
Discharge (mean, SD)33.1 (11.1)32.7 (9.3)0.72
Discharge-Baseline (median, IQR)4.1 (-1,10)5.4 (0,10)0.24
Expected anxiety in future episodes of croup (mean, SD)42.0 43.40.28
Decision Regret (mean, SD) 1.24 (0.42)1.16 (0.29)0.04
Expectations for treatment and care (n)0.44
very satisfied132 (63.5)136 (66.3)
somewhat satisfied48 (23.1)47 (22.9)
neither satisfied nor dissatisfied4 (1.9)3 (1.5)
somewhat dissatisfied7 (3.4)7 (3.4)
very dissatisfied6 (2.9)1 (0.5)
Expectations for Information (n)0.42
very satisfied147 (70.7)136 (66.3)
somewhat satisfied37 (17.8)47 (22.9)
neither satisfied nor dissatisfied4 (1.9)3 (1.5)
somewhat dissatisfied3 (1.4)4 (2.0)
very dissatisfied2 (1.0)0 (0)
Knowledge (mean, SD)8.6 (1.6)8.5 (1.3)0.55
Impact of event scale*
Intrusion sub-scale (median, IQR)6 (1,12)6 (1,13.5)0.20
Avoidance sub-scale (median, IQR)3 (0,7)3 (0,6.5)0.51
Total (median, IQR)10 (3,19)10 (4,21)0.80

Table 5. Comparison of primary and secondary outcomes.

STAI=State Trait Anxiety Inventory; IQR=interquartile range; SD=standard deviation; ED=emergency department; NR=not reported
*Intrusion (e.g., unbidden thoughts, troubled dreams45 p=0.20); avoidance (e.g., denial of event importance, blunted sensation45).
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Expected future anxiety showed no significant differences between groups (42.0 versus 42.6, p=0.36). Interestingly, expected future anxiety was substantially higher than the participants’ baseline anxiety (Table 5).

The impact resulting from exposure to anxiety-producing events showed no significant differences between groups overall (median=10 for both groups, p=0.80) or for the two subscales (intrusion and avoidance, Table 5).

There was no significant difference in knowledge between groups at day 3 (8.6 versus 8.4, p=0.5). Overall, the knowledge level was high for both groups: mean of 8.5 (SD 1.5) out of 10.

The majority of patients in both groups (64% and 68% respectively) were “very satisfied” with the treatment and care they received in the ED. A further 19% and 21% were “somewhat satisfied.” The results for satisfaction around their expectations for information were similar with the majority “very satisfied” (77% and 71%) or “somewhat satisfied” (17% and 21%). There was no significant difference between groups in satisfaction.

The mean regret score, assessed at 1 day post-ED visit, was significantly higher in the story group compared to the comparison group (1.3 versus 1.2; t-test, p=0.04). When the five items in the regret scale were assessed independently, only one item showed a significant difference between groups (Table 6). More parents in the story group showed less agreement with the statement “I would go for the same choice if I had to do it again” (p=0.017).

Statements in Decision Regret ScaleStory bookletsInformation sheetsP-value
It was the right decision.0.39
Strongly agree149 (71.6)160 (78.0)
Agree42 (20.2)31 (15.1)
Neither agree nor disagree3 (1.4)3 (1.5)
Strongly disagree3 (1.4)1 (0.5)
I regret the choice that was made.0.41
Strongly agree4 (1.9)1 (0.5)
Agree0 (0)1 (0.5)
Neither agree nor disagree6 (2.9)7 (3.4)
Strongly disagree186 (89.4)185 (90.2)
I would go for the same choice if I had to do it over again.0.02
Strongly agree133 (63.9)151 (73.7)
Agree38 (18.3)30 (14.6)
Neither agree nor disagree12 (5.8)9 (4.4)
Strongly disagree14 (6.7)3 (1.5)
The choice did my child a lot of harm.0.61
Strongly agree0 (0)0 (0)
Agree2 (1.0)2 (1.0)
Neither agree nor disagree3 (1.4)1 (0.5)
Strongly disagree192 (92.3)191 (93.2)
The decision was a wise one.0.71
Strongly agree156 (75.0)151 (73.7)
Agree37 (17.8)42 (20.5)
Neither agree nor disagree1 (0.5)1 (0.5)
Strongly disagree3 (1.4)1 (0.5)

Table 6. Comparison of decision regret scale*.

*Decision Regret (measured at day 1 or 3 post-ED visit): Parents were asked to respond to the statements regarding their decision to take their child to the ED for the episode of croup in question.
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There was no difference between groups in the number of participants who returned to a physician or the ED (27.9% versus 24.5%, p=0.44), or in the incidence of contacting a healthcare professional following the ED visit (28.9% stories versus 24.5% comparison, p=0.36).

The survival distributions of time to no symptoms (TOP score=0) were significantly different (mean 3.7 days stories vs. 4.0 days comparison, median 3 days both groups; log rank test, p=0.04). A greater proportion of the story group reported no symptoms by day 1 (18.4% versus 14.4%) while a greater proportion of the control group reported symptoms until day 9 (5.1% vs. 1.5%); further, five patients in the control group reported ongoing symptoms at day 9.

303 parents (73.3%) responded to the 1-year follow-up. Average knowledge scores were less than immediately following the ED visit (mean 7.11, SD 1.77); however, there was no significant difference between groups (mean 7.20 [SD 1.77] stories vs. 7.03 [1.77] comparison). Overall, 30.7% of parents reported at least one additional episode of croup in the same or another child after the study episode (26.4% stories, 34.8% comparison). When questioned about their confidence that they knew what to do when the subsequent croup episodes occurred, 82% were very confident, 15% somewhat confident, and 2% not at all confident. While there was no significant difference between groups, both parents who reported being not at all confident were in the comparison group.


This is one of few randomized trials examining stories to communicate with healthcare consumers. As this trial evaluated a novel intervention that has not been the focus of previous research, we explored a number of outcomes; however, only two notable differences were found. First, parents in the story group showed greater decision regret. After reading the stories parents may have felt that they could have managed at home and avoided the trip to the ED. Second, parents in the story group reported resolution of croup symptoms earlier. Children’s symptoms may have resolved more quickly due to how the parents managed the child at home. Alternatively, the parents’ perception of the child’s symptoms may have been affected by the intervention. For instance, if the parents who read the stories felt more reassured or more confident in their knowledge or ability to manage the condition, they may have been less bothered by ongoing coughing or other symptoms. Further, by reading accounts of how croup resolves in the stories, parents may have been more aware of the natural progression of the disease[40].

We found no significant difference for the remaining outcomes including the primary outcome of change in anxiety between study enrolment and ED discharge. One of the main reasons for this finding may be related to the clinical context. While croup may cause heightened anxiety when the child first exhibits symptoms, or exhibits the most intense symptoms, the medical treatment is highly effective with very rapid results, the condition is transient, and there are no known ongoing or long-term effects of either the condition or the treatment. Therefore, large differences may be unexpected regardless of the intervention. The baseline anxiety observed in our study showed that parents were within “normal” levels of state anxiety[29]. This may have been related to the timing of recruitment: due to practical and confidentiality issues we were unable to recruit parents when they first arrived at the ED therefore many participants had already been seen by a healthcare professional and in some cases had already received treatment. A previous study identified the loss of parental roles as a major source of stress[21]. This may be more applicable to conditions requiring highly intensive medical interactions or where the child is removed from the parent for periods of time.

Other studies of similar interventions have attributed a lack of significant difference to the fact that the control group also received an intervention that may have resulted in decreased anxiety[21,41]. A “pure” control group receiving no patient education materials may have demonstrated a greater effect of the test intervention. Participants in this study received interventions which overlapped in terms of content thereby minimizing the relative impact of one intervention over the other. A “pure” control group (i.e., placebo arm with no handout) should be considered in future research to establish whether educational material of any form has an effect.

The choice of outcomes in our study was based on factors that could be easily measured and quantified. Stories may have a stronger or more consistent effect on factors that are more challenging to measure. We hypothesized that the stories would provide greater overall comfort to the parents (or attend to their emotional reactions), although this construct was difficult to define and quantify. Therefore, we chose a variety of outcomes that we felt were related to this construct in different ways including anxiety, satisfaction, decision regret, and impact of the event. Many of these measures may be inadequate to evaluate whether this type of intervention is effective for its intended purpose[42]. An alternative outcome to explore in future studies is self-efficacy.

While stories can enhance recall of information, the advantages may be less apparent if the audience is highly motivated or educated[43]. In our sample, the education level was relatively high. Many narrative or story interventions have been developed and evaluated within populations of lower education and literacy levels, lower socio-economic status, and sometimes those with “a distrust of authorities.”[44] These populations are often the most difficult to reach[44], and may not have other information sources.

Future Research

Our experience leads us to make several recommendations for future research. Researchers need to clearly identify the purpose of the stories prior to development and evaluation. The purpose and timing of the intervention need to match the needs of the end-user[45], and should be identified through a systematic process. The outcomes of most importance will also vary by the needs of the end-users, as well as the clinical context. Careful consideration is needed for the study comparisons. Significant differences in this literature have more often been found when the intervention was compared against standard care or waitlist control, whereas fewer differences have been observed when compared to another active intervention[46].

This topic area presents a unique challenge in that the development and pilot testing [47] of the stories and how they are packaged is a critical step. There are a number of characteristics of the intervention that may influence its effectiveness, such as the readability and level of language, length and format, writing style, and, capacity for emotional engagement[43,44,48-52]. Another challenge is that there are numerous aspects of the interventions that can be varied, such as the medium of delivery (e.g., booklets, video, computer) and presentation (e.g., illustrations, images, colours, shape, and size)[49]. Researchers need to consider the optimal design of the intervention[51], and these attributes may shift in response to the audience, clinical condition, and end goal.

Strengths and Limitations

We developed our intervention through an iterative process which involved pilot testing among healthcare professionals for content validity and focus groups of parents for appeal and readability[27]. We implemented a randomized trial representing the highest level of evidence for an intervention. Blinding was a challenge due to the nature of the intervention. We blinded the participants to the study hypothesis and the interventions being compared. Where possible, we used validated tools to measure outcomes. We conducted a separate qualitative study where we interviewed a sample of parents who received the stories; the methods and results have been reported elsewhere and should be considered in planning future research[40]. Despite the scientific rigour of the present study, numerous questions remain for future work in order to identify for whom and in what contexts narrative communication may be most effective[43].


This randomized trial comparing story booklets with standard information sheets for parents of children attending the ED with croup showed no difference in the primary outcome of change in parental anxiety. The story group showed significantly greater decision regret and quicker time to resolution of symptoms; further research is required to substantiate these findings and their clinical significance. No differences were observed for the remaining outcomes. Potential reasons for lack of significant findings include choice of outcome, timing of outcome assessment, and disconnect between the nature of the intervention and the needs of the target audience. Finally, the story intervention may offer no advantage over standard information sheets; both study groups received interventions which overlapped in terms of content, thereby minimizing the relative impact of one intervention over the other.


We are very grateful to the research coordinators at the study sites who helped with study implementation and patient recruitment: Erin Logue and Joyce Chikuma (Edmonton), Janie Williamson (Calgary), Chantalle Clarkin (Ottawa). We thank the many research nurses and assistants who participated in patient recruitment, data collection, and data entry.

Author Contributions

Conceived and designed the experiments: LH SDS DWJ TPK. Performed the experiments: LH SDS. Analyzed the data: LH. Wrote the manuscript: LH. development of intervention: LH SDS DWJ TB TPK. Interpretation of data: SDS DWJ TPK. Critical review and approval of manuscript: SDS DWJ TB TPK.


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