Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 4, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-17901The best intimate partner violence screening instruments for the general population: a COSMIN-based systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Although both reviewers found the topic of the study interesting, they also identified numerous methodological shortcomings and a potential limited impact on the international scientific community. The manuscript requires extensive revision and integration of information to ensure its scientific acceptability and suitability for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 07 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Although both reviewers found the topic of the study interesting, they also identified numerous methodological shortcomings and a potential limited impact on the international scientific community. The manuscript requires extensive revision and integration of information to ensure its scientific acceptability and suitability for publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. 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Finally, was this an international/global review (I think it was), and if so, the authors should consider a thorough review of cultural factors related to screening instruments for IPV. Reviewer #2: General This paper assumes that the reader knows a lot about psychometrics and COSMIN. Both topics are quite complex and especially as COSMIN is not that well known outside of psychometrics, it would be useful to provide the reader with more information to help them interpret the manuscript. The manuscript would benefit from a table or figure explaining concepts such as construct validity, internal consistency etc and how COSMIN ideally wants these to be measured by studies and what is considered to be less adequate (e.g. that for reliability a study would receive a sufficient rating if the ICC or weighted Kappa ≥ 0.70, the study would be insufficient if the ICC or weighted Kappa was < 0.70 and would be indeterminate is neither ICC nor weighted Kappa was recorded). I really liked the discussion section of this manuscript, but there should be more information to help the reader before this point. Abstract Aim: don’t think need added part of, "for their users". Recommendations is fine. PQDT and EBSCO PBSC should be in full, not the acronym. Introduction Line 46: What do you mean by other relationship types? I would assume it’s some form of romantic/dating or sexual relationship? This needs to be made clear. Line 47 – 49: The sentence about domestic violence isn’t as easy to understand as it could be. Suggest that you explain that you’re going to refer to the concept as intimate partner violence, rather than domestic violence as you’re only looking at instruments that address abuse between romantic/dating partners rather than abuse between family members (e.g. abuse of children or elderly relatives). Line 52 – 57: When you say the physical health consequences of IPV are well documented and the mental health consequences are frequently documented, what do you mean? Are there differences between the amount of evidence available for physical and mental health? Are associations between IPV and physical health better established? Or are the links between IPV and physical and mental health equally well evidenced? The wording of this part of the manuscript implies a hierarchy of evidence, but I'm not sure if that's what you meant. Line 63: "Because of the difficulty of meeting the cut-offs" – I’m not sure what you mean by this. This should be clearly explained. Line 89: I wouldn’t give the example of female patients. State that you include studies on IPV screening instruments targeting both males and females. Some of the phrasing in the introduction needs a re-think. It can be quite difficult to follow. Methods Provide references for COSMIN. COSMIN addresses the psychometric properties of measurement instruments. The risk of bias tool is an adaptation of the checklist and its four-point rating system into a version exclusively for use in systematic reviews of Patient Reported Outcome Measures and assesses risk of bias of studies on measurement properties – Mokkink et al (2018) COSMIN Risk of Bias checklist for systematic reviews of Patient-Reported Outcome Measures. Qual Life Res. It’s not specifically about IPV screening instruments, as could be interpreted here. Line 114/115 – why did you contact the author of each included study to review the search results? Inclusion/Exclusion criteria isn't detailed enough, use PICO (population, interventions, comparators and outcomes). I would be more inclined to say people who are victims/survivors of IPV rather than people who were suffering from IPV. Were reference lists of review articles identified in the literature search checked for relevant studies? Were there exclusions for language? Study selection Examples of the Joanna Briggs Institute SUMARI search filters used would be helpful for someone replicating the review. Who reviewed the titles and abstracts? Data abstraction This is more of a computer science term, I would title as data extraction. PROM needs writing out in full the first time it’s mentioned. Characteristics of the included studies Were the instruments tested mainly with males or females? or a mixture of both? Methodological quality and measurement property ratings What were the psychometric properties that were reported the least in the studies? More information is needed to explain why the measurement properties were given the ratings that they were. What was presented in the studies for the internal consistency, reliability and cross-cultural validity to be rated as very good? What was missing for criterion validity to be rated inadequate? Should be clearer how many studies measured each psychometric property for each instrument, I assume with 18 instruments and 23 studies, most instruments will have only been assessed by one study, but this isn’t clear. A table, figure or some reporting would help with this. Readers should understand this before the discussion. Discussion Some discussion of what evidence is currently missing that would elevate existing measures from a B to an A may be interesting, especially with regards to directions for future research. Generally the discussion section is very well written. My only comment is that the rest of the paper refers to IPV among both men and women, but the discussion only mentions women being reluctant to report. The discussion would benefit from some inclusion about the majority of instruments only being tested with women. Table 2 Table 2 may benefit from more detail about the thematic content of the instruments. For example, categories of questions. Alternatively, this could be a supplementary table. Table 2 and 3 The acronym and full name of each instrument would be useful here, so the reader don't have to look back to the main text. Table 3 Make it clear the levels of evidence is using the GRADE criteria. There are spelling mistakes in the figure presented. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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