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Original SubmissionDecember 6, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-40878Gender Discrimination in Swedish Family CourtsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sikström, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both methodological and structural implementations are needed. Revisions are needed to improve clarity and depth. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 22 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PONE-D-23-40878 – Gender Discrimination in Swedish Family Courts This paper provides insights into possible gender discrimination in decisions about custody decisions. Using a vignette approach with Swedish social workers, this paper aims to provide more insights into possible gender discrimination, specifically against fathers, in such decisions. Bias research in the legal domain is an important matter of study, especially in such important cases as custody cases. The choice for a vignette design explained properly, and the sample with professionals makes it a unique study. However, I believe this paper needs revisions before it would be suitable for publication in all sections of the paper. First, I believe the introduction can be structured in a clearer way. I appreciate the explanation of the Swedish system as this is relevant for the paper, but the theoretical framework and previous literature can be structured in a better way. What are exactly the limitations of previous research, and how does this study fill these gaps? Furthermore, the only relevant hypothesis, as I understand from the paper, is the “female primary caregiver hypothesis.” However, the only source to explain this hypothesis is more than 25 years old. If possible, I believe it would greatly increase the strength of the theoretical framework if more recent literature can be incorporated, especially empirical studies on this. It would be even stronger if there is any literature based on a Swedish sample. Second, the methods section needs to be improved. Although the design and procedure are explained, more detail on the sample and groups are worth stating. What are the group descriptives, were there any group differences? The sample size is very low, which is understandable with a sample of professionals, but what does this mean for the power of the study? I believe most revisions should be done in the results and discussion section. The result section now only shows statistics for the found difference in recommendations of shared living, but there are more options to answer. For completion, it would be more transparent to also show the non-significant results. Especially because the discussion section does try to explain some of the non-findings, but no statistics are given. The result section should also include some descriptive statistics of the answers, as for example in the discussion the scored weakness of the parents is discussed, but no statistics are provided. Furthermore, research on bias is important but before you can conclude that there is a bias, it is important to exclude other possible explanations of differences. Now, nothing is stated about any additional analyses trying to find other explanations such as gender of the participant or years of experience. If this is not possible with the sample size, the authors should consider trying to increase the sample size. In general, the result and discussion sections require more explanation about made choices for the analysis. The method section mentions four answer options, but the structure and text of the result section makes it difficult to follow which answer options are analyzed or taken together. The second paragraph of the discussion was very hard to follow, I believe the first sentence should be “… sole living but not sole custody…” instead of shared custody. The discussion section discusses some possible explanations of the findings but does not elaborate on the non-finding for custody vs. the finding on living. It would strengthen the paper if the authors could come up with an explanation for this as this is somewhat surprising for me as a reader. What I am missing in the limitation section is the limited sample size. I understand how difficult a professional sample is, but I believe this is an important limitation of this study as it greatly limits the generalizability of this study. The authors should be careful with making strong conclusions based on this small sample size. This would also be an important suggestion for future research. A minor thing, but I hope that there is more recent work on unrealistic vignette stories than from 200 years ago. In conclusion, I believe that the paper holds valuable information about gender discrimination in courts, with a unique sample. However, I believe revisions are needed to increase the quality of this paper, especially providing more statistical information, a better structure in introduction and discussion as the paper is somewhat hard to follow, and more nuance with the conclusion as a result of the small sample size. I hope these comments may be helpful to the authors. Best wishes! Reviewer #2: It is fantastic to see research on the impact of the legal system on men. There is definitely a gap in the literature that needs to be filled. While the paper focuses on an important topic, it would be good to further examine the impact of your findings. What does this mean for practitioners? What needs to happen in the field to reduce the negative impact on men? It might be worth looking into therapeutic jurisprudence and examine the impact these decisions may have on men in the short and long term. By weaving legal theory and discussing how your research translates to practice you will create a stronger paper. There are also quite a number of spelling and grammatical errors throughout the paper that need to be addressed. Reviewer #3: In a vignette study, the authors found that mothers were considerably more likely to receive shared custody than fathers. The authors asked participants to provide a risk assessment as well as to make a living decision. However, they only focus on the living decision and do not report the risk data. Due to the very small sample size and the relevance of the research questions, I recommend reporting and analyzing the risk data here. This would enhance the contribution of the paper and allow readers to assess the entire decision-making process. It is unclear from the manuscript whether the risk question was asked before the living recommendation. There is concern that the order of the questions might affect the responses, so perhaps a randomized order would have been the best strategy. I also recommend conducting a mediating analysis. The sample size is very small: a total of 29 Swedish custody evaluators (8 men and 21 women). Relatedly, was there an interaction between the gender of the decision-maker and the gender of the parent? I am concerned that the sample size is too small to investigate this adequately. The authors acknowledge the risk of additional discrimination occurring in the judicial court. However, it could also be that courts "correct" the discriminatory decisions of evaluators. This should also be stated as a limitation. Contribution: There are some studies on gender discrimination in custody disputes. Although dated, Sagi and Dvir (1993) had already shown that female custody evaluators discriminate against men in custody evaluation recommendations. I reiterate my point about the risk data and why I believe it should be discussed in this paper, as it would enhance the contribution. Reviewer #4: Overall, the manuscript indicates the exciting point of 'discrimination against men in custody dispute'. However, it requires more details on the significance of the study, its methodology and results for meaningful discussions. The manuscript's introduction still lacks an explanation of the importance of gender discrimination in men's studies. It is still being determined whether the research is quantitative or qualitative. As the quantitative research, the sampling technique should be demonstrated. From which population can a representative samples of 29 social workers be resembled? As for the qualitative research, the data results are invalid for hypothesis testing. The demographic data of all social workers should be included in discussions. Previous work on gender discrimination with the vignette method demonstrates that both the gender and social capital of participants play a significant role as well. Instead of discussion on the 'weaknesses' part of the study, the study should close the gap in its methodology and provide more insightful findings for further discussions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-23-40878R1Gender Discrimination in Swedish Family Courts: A Quantitative Vignette StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sikström, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, we suggest the following: Section 'The primary care-taker preference', Paragraph 2 - This paragraph needs to be rewritten in order to A) ensure that provided statements are supported by recent references and B) clarify how athletics is associated with male gender stereotypes or is relevant to the discussion, or preferably, remove it altogether. Section, 'Significance of gender discrimination in child custody', Paragraph 1 - Rephrase what is meant by "This can only benefit women." (we have concerns about a potential statement of false equivalence being made here). Section, 'Method' - Provide information on statistical analysis performed - Provide vignettes as SI file Section Discussion, Paragraph 1 - "In terms of custody recommendations, results showed no evidence for gender discrimination" - this is not in line with the results section above - the results were shown to be inconclusive for this part of the study - this needs to updated accordingly, as well as potential removal of the discussion regarding the floor effect. Section, Implications for fathers and children, Paragraph 1 - we suggest that the discussion and comparison against the job market is not relevant and should be removed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 02 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I believe that the added information about gender equality does not benefit the paper; the data on itself is interesting enough and does not need to be compared with gender bias against women. I would highly recommend to keep this paper separate from the comments about that gender equality for women is a disadvantage for men. It would strengthen both the introduction and discussion to focus just on this type of gender bias instead of minimizing other types in order to show the relevance of the research. Reviewer #2: The authors have responded to feedback well and in doing so have made their publication much stronger. I applaud them for delving into such a difficult topic, and encourage them to do more work in the future and not to be too scared off by the women's rights movements. All genders should have equal rights and in an ideal world, one persons rights should not breach another persons rights. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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