Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 27, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-05809Spontaneous verbal descriptions of vegans, non-vegan vegetarians, and omnivores and relationships between these descriptions and perceivers’ dietsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nezlek, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Both reviewers agree that you present an interesting study and I feel the same. Regarding necessary improvements, both reviewers agree that you should broaden your introduction and include more relevant theory and research; that your description of participants’ diets needs improvement (e.g., “restriction of meat” is inaccurate and confusing); that the generalizability of your findings needs addressing and that your conclusions require some reworking. In addition, Reviewer 1 raised important concerns about the rating of your descriptors. I would encourage you to take particular care of these points in your revision. There are some additional points that I would like you to address/consider:
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In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It is an interesting and timely study aiming to analyse the attitudes towards veg*ns and omnivores through analyses of spontaneous descriptions made by participants following various diets. The study found that vegans were viewed more negatively than vegetarians, who were viewed more negatively than omnivores, but this was moderated by the extent to which participants restricted meat from their diets. Although the method is quite unique and results are presented in a clear and orderly manner, the manuscript has some significant limitations (see comments below). My main concern is to what extent the study shows the attitude to the specific word/terms of a few undergraduate students (raters) rather than perceptions of veg*ns and omnivores by general populations. For example, the trait “free-spirited” may be rated as negative by a conservative or deeply religious person. Moreover, rating adjectives such as “caring”, “flowery”, or “soft” as feminine is very controversial nowadays. It is difficult to judge how serious the bias can be as you presented in table 1 only examples of descriptions. The abstract is quite uncomfortable to follow as it presents a lengthy summary of results and lacks clear conclusions. Lines 62-82: It would be helpful to present some examples of what it means to be viewed more positively or negatively (in what respect?). Statements such as “positively in some ways” (line 72 and 79) is very ambiguous. The review of the literature is very limited. It only refers to four previous works. The major part of the Introduction section presents the description of the methods. It resembles the structure of an introduction to some thesis rather than the research manuscript. Moreover, numerous papers present positive attitudes toward veg*ns (eg. Chin, M. G., Fisak Jr, B., & Sims, V. K. (2002). Development of the attitudes toward vegetarians scale. Anthrozoös, 15(4), 332-342; Judge, M., & Wilson, M. S. (2019). A dual‐process motivational model of attitudes towards vegetarians and vegans. European Journal of Social Psychology, 49(1), 169-178; Ruby, M. B., & Heine, S. J. (2011). Meat, morals, and masculinity. Appetite, 56(2), 447-450.). The contradictory results of both hypotheses and findings are not appropriately discussed in the manuscript. Line 123-124: the concept of “vegetarianism as a social identity” is only briefly mentioned in the description of the methodology. It would be useful to present it more broadly. Or any other psychological/sociological concept which forms this study’s bases. Line 147-148; 153-156; 157-159: References? Methods: Why didn’t you ask participants to present negative, positive and neutral words? You would have immediately received the valence of trait and other terms without the bias of the raters. Lines 340-342: I think the lack of such analyses is due to the logical assumption that the veg*ns wouldn’t have a negative attitude to veg*ns. Please, comment. Page 23: Is it possible to draw reliable conclusions from a correlation between 4 or 10 participant groups with a group of 480? Discussion: The discussion thoroughly and clearly presents the results but needs more theoretical analyses of the findings. The manuscript only briefly refers to some psychological concepts, such as social perception, attitudes towards minorities, etc., but does not discuss results in the view of any theory. Page 28: “It is possible that if we had asked participants to provide more than four descriptors, we would have had a basis to add to the ten dimensions we used.” Isn’t that obvious? Page 29: “In contrast, many of the world’s vegetarians are vegetarians of necessity because meat is not accessible (e.g., not available, too expensive). For members of such societies, being a vegetarian is probably not a salient identity (almost everyone is a vegetarian), and so following a vegetarian diet may not be a particularly important influence on person perception.” Is it really a conclusion from that study? How does it refer to any of the findings or the overall topic? Reviewer #2: This is an interesting article and brings a new perspective related to difference in people's attitudes based on their diets. It also generates some valuable insights. The following are my concerns in relation to the study and how it is presented: • There doesn't seem to be any theoretical background - some theories are briefly mentioned in the Discussion sections but are missing in the justification for the study; • The gap in previous research and studies is not explicitly stated; • There is no discussion about how valid or applicable the findings are given the nature of the sample used; • The paper could benefit from better engaging with the issue of why such results were obtained, that is, what explains the findings; • Some terms need to be explained for the wider audience, namely WEIRD sample, woke, Peta (I assume it's PETA); • There is no indication when the study was conducted; • It seems strange that a different range of diets is used to describe the participants' diets compared to the evaluated diets (e.g. Table 4) - why was such a choice made? • How can there be no dimension scores for one quarter of the descriptors (line 231)? It needs better wording/explanation; • Using sentences which start with "Note" does not seem appropriate in an academic article; • There should be more consistency in the use of the term vegetarian or a definition given - at the moment, it is described both as "non-vegan vegetarian" and "lacto-ovo vegetarian" as well as simply vegetarian; similarly, what is meant by "meat restrictors"? • It is best to have the limitations of the study outside of the Conclusion; • The Conclusion should be improved as it does not do justice of the research in terms of presenting its findings and implications. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Spontaneous verbal descriptions of vegans, non-vegan vegetarians, and omnivores and relationships between these descriptions and perceivers’ diets PONE-D-23-05809R1 Dear Dr. Nezlek, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Johannes Hönekopp Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for answering my questions and revising the manuscript. I have no further comments. Best regards! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Klaudia Modlinska ********** |
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PONE-D-23-05809R1 Spontaneous verbal descriptions of vegans, non-vegan vegetarians, and omnivores and relationships between these descriptions and perceivers’ diets Dear Dr. Nezlek: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Johannes Hönekopp Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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