Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 26, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-16829Definition and terminology of Developmental Language Disorders - Interdisciplinary consensus across German-speaking countriesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lüke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The three Reviewers have really appreciated the manuscript and recommended its publication. However, two of them, in particular, provided suggestions and comments for its improvement to be submitted to the authors before publication. Therefore, I urge the authors to accept and address the Reviewers’ comments by proceeding to revise the manuscript accordingly. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 03 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If this work was previously peer-reviewed and published, in the cover letter please provide the reason that this work does not constitute dual publication and should be included in the current manuscript. 4. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The three Reviewers have really appreciated the manuscript and recommended its publication. However, two of them, in particular, provided suggestions and comments for its improvement to be submitted to the authors before publication. Therefore, I urge the authors to accept and address the Reviewers’ comments by proceeding to revise the manuscript accordingly. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors report on the results of a delphi study on the definition and terminology of language disorders in childhood. This is an important topic and the authors report convincingly the history and background of this endeavor. The experts involved represent all relevant professional fields. Results are clearly presented and discussed. It is also clearly stated when no consensus could be reached. Strengths and limitations are well discussed. Two thoughts: - Statement 9. Multilingual children can only be classified as having a developmental language disorder if they do not demonstrate age-appropriate abilities in any of their spoken languages. This sentence is difficult to understand, even with the paragraph explaining it. Could the authors add a sentence such as ‘this means that multilingual children cannot be classified as having a developmental language disorder if they are age-appropriate in one of their spoken languages’ –following ‘Participants agreed on this statement with a mean response of 2.4 (SD = 2.0).’ - The aspect of difficulties in nonverbal intelligence together with a developmental language disorder is of high importance. It is interesting to read that no consensus regarding the role of nonverbal cognitive abilities in developmental language disorders (whether a potentially co-causing factor) was reached when considering IQ-score ranges and, thus, no recommendation for the consideration of defined IQ-score ranges of nonverbal cognitive abilities in developmental language disorders was given. But could the authors add a sentence that an evaluation of cognitive abilities is of high importance in a child with language delay – as is also discussed later (lines 665-666). Reviewer #2: It’s perhaps not surprising that I’ve got very few comments, given that this is a report of a Delphi project that was carefully planned and co-ordinated with many co-authors, and the paper is a straightforward account of the final statements. The aim of the study was to use the Delphi method to create an agreed definition and terminology for childhood language disorders in German-speaking languages. It is an excellent idea to publish an English translation of the outcome, to facilitate comparisons across languages. This is a major study that should have real impact in streamlining research in German-speaking countries and facilitating comparisons with English-speaking groups. As with the CATALISE English-language study, a wide range of professional groups was included, ranging from those with medical, educational and linguistics expertise. The one limitation, compared to CATALISE, was the lack of any representation from charities working with language-impaired groups – I suspect these may not exist in the German-speaking countries. In general, it can be good to include the ‘user perspective’, but it is admittedly difficult when the condition under consideration is language disorder, and the discussions are all about which words to use. But this would be worth a mention. I could see no mention of open data. It would be useful to make the anonymised reports from the panel openly available; I suspect these won’t attract much interest currently, but when the history of children’s language disorders comes to be written, such information will be invaluable. It was good to see broad agreement between this German-language Delphi and the English-language CATALISE. It might be worth saying a little more about the recommendation re using standardized tests to define disorder. This, of course, has the limitation that it requires adequately standardized tests, which may not be available in all countries. I wondered if it might be worth adding an Appendix with a few guidelines regarding suitable standardized tests? I think it would be helpful to have a little table at the end that lists the points where the D-A-CH SES consortium and CATALISE consortium diverge. This could help set an agenda for future research that might bring different language definitions into closer alignment. Finally, it might be worth inventing an acronym to make it easy to refer to this study! **Minor wording suggestions** 87 dispute -> debate 88-89: the journal is the International Journal of Language and Communication Disorders, and the summary article would be worth citing here: Reilly, S., Bishop, D. V. M., & Tomblin, B. (2014). Terminological debate over language impairment in children: Forward movement and sticking points. International Journal of Language & Communication Disorders, 49(4), 452–462. https://doi.org/10.1111/1460-6984.12111 101-102: something has gone wrong with formatting here 103: “is used since then” -> “has been widely adopted since then” (recognising there have been a few people who have held out for retaining the term SLI!). 106: “did no longer preclude” -> “no longer precluded” 110-111: the assertion that DLD is now used more widely than SLI is undoubtedly true, but might benefit from adding some numbers? It should be fairly simple to do a count of the number of articles with each term for, say, 2007-2014 vs 2015-2022. 115: realized -> conducted 241: please add a reference for the R programming language 271: “consented results” and “consented terminology” : this is a bit unclear to me. Presumably this refers to the final set of results representing best consensus? 394: ”comprehensive” is rather unclear here – is there an alternative term that could convey what is meant? 489: “rated against” -> “were opposed to” 745: “dissensus” -> “disagreement” Reviewer #3: This is a very interesting article with a consistent methodology, an ample sample, and a clear and detailed description of the procedure carried out. The results are very well organised, and the conclusions are based on them. My only suggestion refers to the content of Figure 1 (which could be renamed Table 1): The number of experts corresponding to the three categories should be included in each round of the Delphi procedure. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dorothy V. M. Bishop Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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