Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-20725How socioeconomically disadvantaged people access, understand, appraise, and apply health information: a qualitative study exploring health literacy skillsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Stormacq, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 22 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Nabeel Al-Yateem, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well written paper addressing and important topic. I commend the authors on this simple and high quality piece of research. I have only minor suggestions for its improvent as set out below: 1. In the introduction it would be helpful to include some background information about the health care financing model in Switzerland so that the readers can interpret the results with a fuller understanding. Much of this information is included in the discussion but I felt it was needed earlier in the papers to help readers interpret this important aspect of the results. 2. The sample size even for a qualitative study is small. This should be included as a limitation. 3. The age range of the sample is rather narrow. Participants range between ages 44-60. This should be included as a limitation and there should be some discussion about how this might have narrowed the kinds of responses we saw particularly regarding use of the internet. For instance I would expect if more younger participants were included there may be different or additional information about accessing health information online. Similarly people in the 70s and 80s face obstacles that are skill related to accessing online information. Acknowledgement of this limitation is needed in the discussion. 4. On page 13 could gross monthly income also be presented in Euro and or USD to for international readers. 5. The paper overall is very long. I would suggest trying to reduce the results section and the discussion section by around 25%. One way to help achieve this would be to edit down the quotes to more succinct examples. For instance all quotes could be reduced to no more than 3 lines long. Table 4 could be put into an appendix or online supplement. 6. Typo on line 839 – ‘immediately is repeated in this sentence. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript that deals with a current and important topic. Background- The framework that supports the concept of health literacy was clearly established, as well as the study rationality and design. It is suggested to review more recent investigations that address or develop interventions with socioeconomically disadvantaged persons. Methods - in general are adequate, however the authors cite on page 9 ('202) the use of a French version 16 scale items that evaluate the experienced difficulties in assessing, understanding, appraising and applying health information and it is not described as these results were treated and for what purpose. They are presented in table 2 of the results and in `1018. I did not get what is a CHF 15 gift card ('210).The researchers cite that: data saturation was reached after 10 participants, but 12 people were interviewed. Justify. Results- four main themes with three pathways regarding health information are reported. The table on pages 15-18 is excellent, however the following table and the description of the results are extremely extensive. Discussion- the results obtained can be summarized (according to table 2) and not described again, as well as presenting the results of the cited papers in a grouped way, as done between `853 and `860. Although participants address pharmacists and health professional skills are cited in the discussion, it is not clear whether the health system provides primary health care or access to other health professionals. It is also unclear whether the participants sought health information because they had chronic diseases (looking for treatment and prevention of complications). in some sentences health promotion is mentioned. Also, digital skills are not discussed considering the age of study participants as well years of study and participants' access to internet. The fact that most of the participants are women is only mentioned in ˜limitations and strengths˜. The lack of fluency in French is only mentioned as a limitation of the study, but it seems to be an important limitation for pathways 1 and 2. Pathway 3 is not seemed to have been discussed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Kirsten McCaffery Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-20725R1How socioeconomically disadvantaged people access, understand, appraise, and apply health information: a qualitative study exploring health literacy skillsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Stormacq, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Nabeel Al-Yateem, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: All comments have been adressed. The manuscript is still very long and you did not included any new reference from 2022 or 2023. Reviewer #3: One comment to note - the data of this study was collected between April and June 2017. Given that this is now April 2023, this needs acknowledged as a limitation of this study. Reviewer #4: I commend research team for undertaking this important study and for actively recruiting socially-disadvantaged community members; this is not an easy task and is too often overlooked! The authors provide a thorough qualitative manuscript and have responded adequately to the previous reviewers’ comments. In response to Reviewer 1 (Comment 2) , it may also be useful to add the age range of participants to the Abstract. In addition, the authors could do more to address Reviewer 2 (Comment 4), particularly by shortening the discussion such that the main findings are summarised rather than being described again. In addition to this, I have some other comments for the authors to reflect on and address: Typographical errors: • Page 11: “All the transcriptions were check entirely for accuracy” should be “All the transcriptions were checked entirely for accuracy”. • I find the wording of the first theme slightly awkward: “Getting informed for not worsening a precarious financial situation”. I encourage the authors to consider slight revisions for clarity. Data collection • Data was collected in 2017. Much has happened since then, particularly COVID which changed the way that many of us receive health information. I encourage the authors to reflect on how changes since then might have impacted the data collected, for example, in the Strengths and Limitations section of the manuscript. Related literature: • Muscat DM, Shepherd HL, Morony S, Smith SK, Dhillon HM, Trevena L, Hayen A, Luxford K, Nutbeam D, McCaffery K. Can adults with low literacy understand shared decision making questions? A qualitative investigation. Patient Educ Couns. 2016 Nov;99(11):1796-1802. doi: 10.1016/j.pec.2016.05.008. Epub 2016 May 9. PMID: 27344226. • Jordan JE, Buchbinder R, Osborne RH. Conceptualising health literacy from the patient perspective. Patient Educ Couns. 2010 Apr;79(1):36-42. doi: 10.1016/j.pec.2009.10.001. Epub 2009 Nov 5. PMID: 19896320. • Edwards M, Wood F, Davies M, Edwards A. 'Distributed health literacy': longitudinal qualitative analysis of the roles of health literacy mediators and social networks of people living with a long-term health condition. Health Expect. 2015 Oct;18(5):1180-93. doi: 10.1111/hex.12093. Epub 2013 Jun 17. PMID: 23773311; PMCID: PMC5060848. • Muscat DM, Gessler D, Ayre J, Norgaard O, Heuck IR, Haar S, Maindal HT. Seeking a deeper understanding of 'distributed health literacy': A systematic review. Health Expect. 2022 Jun;25(3):856-868. doi: 10.1111/hex.13450. Epub 2022 Feb 18. PMID: 35178823; PMCID: PMC9122402. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Lisiane M G Paskulin Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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How socioeconomically disadvantaged people access, understand, appraise, and apply health information: a qualitative study exploring health literacy skills PONE-D-22-20725R2 Dear Dr. Stormacq, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nabeel Al-Yateem, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-20725R2 How socioeconomically disadvantaged people access, understand, appraise, and apply health information: a qualitative study exploring health literacy skills Dear Dr. Stormacq: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Nabeel Al-Yateem Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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