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PONE-D-23-04113Estimating the Potato Farming Efficiency: A Comparative Study between Stochastic Frontier Analysis and Data Envelopment AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hossain, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Particularly, both reviewers recommend reconsideration of your manuscript following minor revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 21 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Sir/Madam, My comments are in the file. 1-The potato (Solanum tuberosum L.) is the most productive crop and the third-largest source of food on earth [1]. (The following information is also available in the literature. Potato is in the fifth place after sugarcane, corn, rice and wheat in the list of the most produced plant products in the world. Please refer to the literature: FAOSTAT (2022). World Production Quantities of Crops. http://www.fao.org/faostat/en/#data/QC. and Kadakoğlu, B., Karlı, B. (2021). Economic Analysis of Potato Production in Afyonkarahisar Province, KSU J. Agric Nat 25 (3): 581-588. https://doi.org/10.18016/ksutarimdoga.vi.947387) 2-To the best of our knowledge, no research has been done yet on potato farming efficiency using both SFA and DEA. (On the contrary, a study was conducted in Türkiye on the technical efficiency of potato cultivation using both SFA and DEA. According to the results of the research, SFA 69.0, DEA-CRS 76.4, DEA-VRS 84.6 were found. Please refer to the literature: Kadakoğlu, B. (2021). Analysis of Technical and Economic Efficiency of Potato Production in Afyonkarahisar Province, Isparta University of Applied Sciences, The Institute of Graduate Education Department of Agricultural Economics, M.Sc. Thesis. http://dx.doi.org/10.13140/RG.2.2.20260.96641) 3-This study applies a self-dual Cobb-Douglas SFA Method. (What is your reason for choosing this method? As you know, there are statistics for Cobb-Douglas or Translog method in SFA and as a result, the method is selected. Please apply the statistics and choose your method accordingly.) 4-Results of Cobb-Douglas stochastic frontier model. (It is recommended to compare your study result with another study on the same method and the same product. Please refer to the literature: Kadakoğlu, B., Karlı, B. (2022). Technical Efficiency of Potato Production in Turkey by Stochastic Frontier Analysis,Custos e Agronegocio, 18(2), 163-178. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/364303318_Technical_Efficiency_of_Potato_Production_in_Turkey_by_Stochastic_Frontier_Analysis) 5-Further research would be better if collected data and information were based on a larger sample size. (Why didn't you increase the sample size of the research more and make it more comprehensive? Include the constraints of your research.) 6-References (It is recommended to include the above-mentioned references to increase the scope of the research.) Reviewer #2: Estimating the potato farming efficiency: A comparative study between SFA and DEA Journal: PLOS ONE Summary This study first assesses whether SFA is a better method than DEA in estimating potato farming efficiency. Second, this study identifies the determinants of potato farming efficiency. I only have a few minor comments. Abstract Please rewrite the abstract. The current abstract is quite lengthy and repetitive. Data Please provide descriptive statistics of variables used in this study. Please provide references for the inputs and outputs used. Results For the analysis of efficiency determinants, please provide references to each finding. References Please keep the references consistent. Other comments English writing is relatively poor, for example, “where Tk. Is the currency of Bangladesh”. Please approach professional editing services before resubmitting your manuscript. Again, the author(s) could benefit from a professional proofreader. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-23-04113R1Estimating the Potato Farming Efficiency: A Comparative Study between Stochastic Frontier Analysis and Data Envelopment AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hossain, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Besides the comments from Reviewer 2, I suggest the authors to review some missing literature on agriculture efficiency, although not on potato farms, around the references 9 and 10 on page 3 as follows. Fuwa, N., Edmonds, C., & Banik, P. (2007). Are small-scale rice farmers in eastern India really inefficient? Examining the effects of microtopography on technical efficiency estimates. Agricultural Economics, 36(3), 335-346. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1574-0862.2007.00211.x Asadullah, M. N., & Rahman, S. (2009). Farm productivity and efficiency in rural Bangladesh: the role of education revisited. Applied Economics, 41(1), 17-33. https://doi.org/10.1080/00036840601019125 Madau, F. A. (2011). Parametric Estimation of Technical and Scale Efficiencies in the Italian Citrus Farming. Agricultural Economics Review, 12, 91-111. Madau, F. A., Furesi, R., & Pulina, P. (2017). Technical efficiency and total factor productivity changes in European dairy farm sectors. Agricultural and Food Economics, 5(1), 17. https://doi.org/10.1186/s40100-017-0085-x Nguyen, H.-D., Ngo, T., Le, T., Ho, H., & Nguyen, H. T. (2019). The Role of Knowledge in Sustainable Agriculture: Evidence from Rice Farms’ Technical Efficiency in Hanoi, Vietnam. Sustainability, 11(9), 2472. Rada, N. E., & Fuglie, K. O. (2019). New perspectives on farm size and productivity. Food Policy, 84, 147-152. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.foodpol.2018.03.015 Please submit your revised manuscript by May 11 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving me a chance to read your work again. Although the authors have addressed all my comments, I still see several grammar errors there. For example, pp.10 " The cost on seed is positively and significantly influenced the potato production and this findings is supported by a previous study [16]." or "Moreover, without good quality fertilizer, production would be hampered which is a prerequisite for boosting production which is consistent with other study findings [16]." In the abstract, "Therefore, the authors aimed to evaluate farm-level efficiency and inefficiency of potato farming in Bangladesh." I think that a word "inefficiency" is unnecessary. Very best, Tu ********** 7. 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