Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 14, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-12859Design and evaluation of an MRI-ready, self-propelled needle for prostate interventionsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bloemberg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, the authors should add more details related to the actuation method chosen and foreseen challenges in moving towards in-vivo characterizations. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 20 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present an ingenious bio-inspired needle with six segments. It can be manually actuated by a cam mechanism that advances one of of the segments at a time. The design is interesting and definitely worth pursuing. The presentation is clear and the paper is well written. The major limitation of the design is the lack of experimentation in vivo. The problem is that needle channels in living tissue are almost instantaneously lubricated with blood and further tissue damage is also accompanied by inflammation. This may pose difficulties for the approach, as the needle track risks becoming very slippery. The ex vivo prostate study is helpful but it does not present the full potential issue. To check this, the authors do not need to carry out the experiment in MRI; they could instead use ultrasound and an animal study at the local hospital. Porcine models are used all the time for teaching, so it will not be a huge effort to quantify performance of their device in living animal tissue, e.g. a porcine liver. I would like to see some discussion of this observation in the paper and plans to address the potential problem of friction (or lack thereof). Reviewer #2: In this work the authors present a design for a self-inserting needle with potential applications in prostate biopsy/ablation. The study experimentally evaluates the ability of the needle to insert itself, quantitatively measuring the slip ratio during deployment. The study was conducted in cadaveric human prostate tissue embedded in an agar gel phantom. The paper is very well-written and clearly presents the design, evaluation study, and results. The reviewer has a few comments and suggestions for improvement. In no particular order: There have also been recent works in other types of needles that are pulled from their tip rather than pushed from their base. For instance, [1] leverages magnetic force to pull the needle, and recently [2] leverages a screw-tip mechanism to pull the needle and magnetic torque to steer the needle. The authors may consider mentioning designs such as these which, while significantly different, may exhibit similar benefits as the proposed design: [1] M. Ilami, R. J. Ahmed, A. Petras, B. Beigzadeh, and H. Marvi, “Magnetic Needle Steering in Soft Phantom Tissue”, Scientific Reports, 10(1), pp. 1-11, 2020. [2] T. J. Schwehr, A. J. Sperry, J. D. Rolston, M. D. Alexander, J. J. Abbott, and A. Kuntz, "Toward Targeted Therapy in the Brain by Leveraging Screw-Tip Soft Magnetically Steerable Needles", Hamlyn Symposium on Medical Robotics, pp. 81-82, 2022. In Equation 2, d_m and d_e are used, however when describing the equation, the authors define d_t (line 280). This discrepancy should be resolved. Do the authors have any intuition regarding the differences between the agar used in the study to surround the ex vivo prostate tissue and the tissue in the human body that would represent intermediate tissue the needle must move through en route to the prostate? It may be worth briefly discussing this point and its implications for the study/results. E.g., is it possible the agar may have exaggerated the slip in this case compared with human tissue? How does the shrinking tube that keeps the individual needle segments together near the tip impact the working principle of the self-propelled insertion? Does the shrinking tube hinder the insertion of the needle? If it affects this, to what expected degree? It may be worth discussing this point as well. Can the authors quantify the degree to which the needles diverged at their tips during the experiments? Doing so would add significant context to the observation. In lines 395-396 in the discussion section, the authors state “This makes pneumatic actuators more suited for a discrete, stepwise motion instead of a continuous motion by using our selector mechanism, for example.” This is unclear. Are the authors stating that their mechanism is an example of a continuous motion that does not suit itself to pneumatic actuators or are they instead stating the proposed mechanism is an example of a discrete motion? The text is ambiguous. However, it is my impression that the proposed needle would be an example that can well be actuated by stepwise pneumatic mechanisms. The authors mention the concern of heating of the nitinol in the MRI. It seems to me, however, that nitinol is not necessary as the material for the needle bundle. If the design could instead, theoretically, incorporate non-magnetic materials in the needle bundle, it may be worth mentioning this in the future work section when bringing up the heating concern. It may be an artifact of the review process, or fixed later in the editorial process, but it is worth noting that many of the figures exhibit quite low resolution. A few typos noted: Line 109 prostat…e Line 214 or visualization The paper is clearly presented and quite well written. If the above comments were addressed the paper would be further strengthened. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-22-12859R1 Design and evaluation of an MRI-ready, self-propelled needle for prostate interventions Dear Dr. Bloemberg: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tommaso Ranzani Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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