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Original SubmissionNovember 16, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-36310Effects of trust, risk perception, and health behavior on COVID-19 disease burden: Evidence from a multi-state US surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ridenhour, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Referee report for “Effects of Trust, Risk Perception, and Health Behaviour on Covid-19 Disease Burden: Evidence from a Multi-State US Survey Summary: This paper collects survey evidence from around 1000 individuals in Texas, Idaho and Vermont in November 2020, measuring demographic characteristics, social behaviours, risk perceptions, trust and political ideology. The paper assesses the relationship between these variables and case counts using SEM modelling. The paper finds that lower trust in rural locations offsets the natural advantages these places have for combating the spread of Covid-19. Assessment My main technical concern is with the implementation of the model. In many cases (e.g. Model 1A) the authors model behavioural intention as determining cases. The behavioural intention is then measured at the individual level, while case numbers are measured in the aggregate. But of course an individual’s behaviour is atomistic and has negligible effect on aggregate case numbers. So I don’t know how to interpret the estimates. I can’t recall ever seeing a model with an aggregate explained variable being driven by an individual-level explanatory variable. This approach should at least be discussed and supported. More subjective concerns are as follows: The main problem with this paper is the extremely small sample size. In each model the authors use 1000 observations to estimate 40 parameters. Obtaining significant and novel results in this way is only possible with rigid modelling. My technical concern above leads me to another criticism, that much of questions here would be better addressed using aggregate data variation over both location and time. For example the google data can be leveraged to obtain detailed aggregate measures of behaviour across locations and over time. Similarly social surveys could be leveraged to obtain aggregate measures of trust and political ideology over time. Of course, that’s a different study, but it feels that would answer the same questions much more convincingly. My final criticism is that the discussion is too focussed on the U.S. Of course, issues of the interaction of population density, behaviour and disease spread are of relevance across the globe. The paper should attempt to speak to this audience rather than to focus on the U.S. rather narrowly. Reviewer #2: This paper examines the relationship between individuals’ attitudes concerning COVID-19 and disease burden, and whether these relationships was significantly different in rural populations. To that end, the authors develop their own survey covering three states: Idaho, Texas, and Vermont. I think the authors have written an interesting paper on an important topic and while the literature is crowded, I do think that they make a contribution to it. However, I have some concerns and I feel like the current version comes up a bit short of robustness tests. 1) My first concern is about the measure of disease burden. The authors consider the number of cases from the beginning of the pandemic at county level as a proxy of disease burden. However, the prior epidemiology literature has used the number of deaths to better account for the spread of the COVID-19. Thus, I would suggest a robustness test where you make use of COVID-19 deaths. 1) The adoption of social distancing measures (including business closures and stay-at-home orders) may be influencing the trust-risk-behavior itself. As the authors highlight, the implementation of NPIs varied widely between communities within the US as they took place at distinct geographic levels (some at the county, others at the state) and for different periods of time. Thus, without appropriate controls it is hard to disentangle the effect of disease burden from the implementation of the NPIs. Can the authors control for the timing and intensity of the NPIs at county level? 3) I am not sure whether there is available data on the number of cases/deaths at city level. In this case, does it make sense to use disease data corresponding to the county instead of using city data when we know people addresses? If there is not available information I would suggest the authors to note that in the text. 4) I would suggest as another robustness test to amplify the set of demographic controls if it is possible. The authors describe the sample in terms of education and total household income; however, it is not clear to me whether these controls have been included in the model. 5) Are the estimates weighted? 6) I would suggest the authors to note the limitation of the low number of observations in the text. 7) Another important data limitation is that the survey period does not enable you to explore the existence of pre-trends during the months prior. Can the authors manage to assess that? Reviewer #3: This is a nice paper, but somewhat too long compared with the contents. I am also puzzled by Model 2 (Supplemental Appendix page 8) that assumes that economic and health risk perceptions are affecting trust. I don't see what mechanism would make this plausible, or how it could be tested with the current data. If using data collected in one survey, I am worried that even if running formally regressions in line with Model 2, we woulf effectively capture correlational patterns the causal effect of which would go the other way. I suggest either dropping Model 2, or arguing more convincingly why it deserves to be kept and can be tested. I think that streamlining the paper would improve its impact as potential readers would be more likely to read it through. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-21-36310R1Effects of trust, risk perception, and health behavior on COVID-19 disease burden: Evidence from a multi-state US surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ridenhour, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 29 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The responses to my points are mostly fine. With regard to my first point, the response of the authors is a little unfortunate; The Im and Kim paper that they refer to clearly uses aggregate variable as both dependent and independent variables. More precisely Im and Kim state "These 77 cities and counties were used as study units for the regression models." Accordingly I should be more precise in my question about the paper at hand: Is the unit of observation the location or the individual? If it's the location then you have very few data points. If it's the individual then I'm still not fully convinced by having an aggregate variable as the dependent variable. On the other hand, the extended answer the authors give to my point is acceptable. But I would like to see a clear statement of the unit of observation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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