Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 21, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-29804New evaluation scale for measuring patients’ motivation for rehabilitationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Otaka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the clarifications / changes required by the reviewers, the title of the manuscript would be greatly improved if you include both the clinical subject (stroke) and the primary method. This will help readers to more quickly understand the relevance of the manuscript. Having looked at the included data file I consider you to have met the journal's requirements for data sharing. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It is an interesting topic to discuss. The title and abstract are interesting and easy to read. The introduction has explained the background of the study and the gap in the knowledge related to patients' motivation for rehabilitation scale and the shortcoming of previous proposed scales. The methods section is both clear and detail enough that it explained several steps of the MORE scale development and the scale test for its validity, reliability. The results section was written clearly and informatively. Data were presented in clear tables followed by ample explanation. . The discussion section was adequate and the results were discuss from several perspectives without being too wordy or overinterpreted. Conclusion section had concluded the paper properly Reviewer #2: Summary This is a well-designed study which deals with motivation during rehabilitation. Here are my suggestions Major comments It needs more explanation on the MORE. Is it stroke-specific or generic? MORE seems to represent rehabilitation motivation, however the developments was only based on the stroke patients, thus the naming is preferred to be changed and target population could be specified. The language might affect the results. For example, the validity and reliability of Japanese version of SDS and AS needs to be written in this paragraphs with references. Especially, these questionnaires related to psychometric properties are easy to be affected by the language. For example SRMS and Korean version of SRMS is different because there are different consistency. (Park M, Lee JY, Ham Y, Oh SW, Shin JH. Korean Version of the Stroke Rehabilitation Motivation Scale: Reliability and Validity Evaluation. Ann Rehabil Med. 2020;44(1):11-19. doi:10.5535/arm.2020.44.1.11) These concerns about language needs to be listed on the limitation. Similarly, the English version of the MORE might be different from original version of the MORE. Thus, both the English version of the MORE and Japanese original version of the MORE needs to be listed on this manuscript and those things are better to be listed in the limitation. Under the subtitle of convergent, discriminant, and criterion validity, discriminant and criterion validity was not enough. Please put more things on that topic. Also, topics regarding reliability was missed on this article. There is a logical gap between the result and the discussion (The results showed that the MORE scale was an appropriate scale for evaluating stroke patients' motivation for rehabilitation, and could specifically assess the motivation rather than depression and apathy.) Especially, it failed to demonstrate structural validity, discriminant, and criterion validity as well as reliability. The results describes single factor model, however discussion says three factors (personal, social, behavioral). These descriptions does not come from the result, thus please provide the logical support. Minor There is inequity on the introduction of the various outcomes. Thus, there are too much expression about MOT-Q. L97: based on “various categories”. Please specify the various categories. L98 from medical staff but also narratives from stroke patients themselves [14]. It is difficult to understand the contents of this sentences and the reference 14. L123: “from among” is strange to be read. Please fix it L128: “the item response theory” seems to be better to be revised into “item response theory analysis” and it applies on the remaining sentences on this manuscript. The authors mentioned “Intensive rehabilitation”, however it is not defined in the manuscript, thus it needs operational definition L158, 159: The authors describe association between motivation and apathy, and apathy and depression. However, the goal of the present study was to find association of motivation and apathy, and motivation and depression. Thus those part needs to be revised. L161: needs grammatical correction. L167: It might be better to describe the reason of using SDS other than other outcome measures on the depression. Moreover, the reference on the validation and reliability of SDS is needed. L183-186: It needs clarification and specification of the process grouping the items, why the whole items were grouped into personal factor, social relationship factor. L187: Why the Likert scale is made up with 7-point scale?. Please state the reason. Table 2: Paretic side: 0 could be misunderstood , thus lesion side seems to be better to transfer the glimpse of the participants. Foot-tap test rather than foot-pat test L 204: Please specify “it” P15: structural validity says the MORE scale is not indicative of acceptable model fit. Then, I guess more revision is needed in the process, however there was no trial to improve the validity. P20 L12-18: It is difficult to understand the authors’ purpose of the table 6 and the sentences. I hope the authors emphasize the meaning of the table. Table 6 :abbreviation of IQR needs to be described with full terminology. The row name IQR needs to be revised to convey the meaning of 1st ~ 3rd IQR. Table 5: It seems to be strange to correlate AS total score, SDS total score, and VAS with each item of MORE scale. Please specify the reason of this process. Discussion Unlike in our hypothesis, this study's factor analysis, a one-factor structure was indicated.; In the introduction section, hypothesis about the factor is not found. Please describe it. “The category “goal setting,” which the items 1,2,3, and 4 referred to, have been reported to be related to the improvement of daily living activities [38,39]. "Pain" in Item 14, which is included in the category "physical condition", has been reported to have a negative effect on FIM improvement [40]. Similarly, the category "success experience", which are items 11, 12, and 13, and the category "resilience" (resilience against obstacles), which are items 16 and 17, were related to patients’ functional improvement [41,42]. Furthermore, it has been reported that the category "influence from supporters," including professionals and family members, in items 5,6,7,8,9, and 10, can affect patients' motivation for rehabilitation [15,43-46]. “ These paragraphs seems to be strange, because the authors grouped each items and named it, without support by results. Lack of scientific evidence does not support the meaning of this article “This study also investigated the cutoff point of the MORE scale”. There seems no description about the cutoff point of the MORE scale in the result section. Please amend it. “The results showed that the MORE scale can evaluate patients’ motivation for rehabilitation specifically, regardless of depression and apathy.” needs evidence from results. If there is relevant result from this study, please describe it and explain with explanation. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ninuk Dian Kurniawati Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-21-29804R1Development and validation of new evaluation scale for measuring stroke patients’ motivation for rehabilitation in rehabilitation wardsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Otaka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You will note that there are only comments from one reviewer, which is because I am happy to accept the original reviewer 1's recommendation. The final comments are located at the end of this email, but can be summarised as clarifying the abstract in relation to the objective and methods (relating to reliability and validity). I appreciate how difficult it is to keep the abstract within the 300 word limit; my suggestion would be to remove the first two sentences of the objective section as these can be described as background rather than a statement of objectives. This would also help to address the comment about needing to tone down the 'no reliable tools'. Of course you don't have to follow my suggestion, but please do address the comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 27 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I really appreciate for the detailed and elaborative answer for my recommendation. The main article is excellent enough to be accepted. I have few recommendation for the quality improvement in abstract, as follows "No valid and reliable tools~": I hope the authors tone down this sentence. ex)It lacks of study about- Results: -There is no sentences about reliability, thus please add contents about reliability. -The readers might have difficulty to find results relevant to convergent, discriminant and criterion validity. Thus please add more explanation in results for those validity. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Joon-Ho Shin [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Development and validation of new evaluation scale for measuring stroke patients’ motivation for rehabilitation in rehabilitation wards PONE-D-21-29804R2 Dear Dr. Otaka, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jason Scott Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-29804R2 Development and validation of new evaluation scale for measuring stroke patients’ motivation for rehabilitation in rehabilitation wards Dear Dr. Otaka: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jason Scott Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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