Peer Review History
Original SubmissionApril 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-12624 Prevalence of sexual violence and its associated factors among housemaids attending evening schools in urban setups of Gedeo zone, Southern Ethiopia: A school based cross sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shaka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please address the following: - Please include additional information regarding the interview guide used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a guide as part of this study and it is not under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information. In addition, please include the details of the pre-testing of this tool, i.e. the number of participants and where they were recruited from. - Please refrain from stating p values as 0.00, either report the exact value or employ the format p<0.001. 3. You indicated that you had ethical approval for your study. 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Please ensure that you refer to Figure 1 in your text as, if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the figure. 7. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 1 and Table 2 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. 8. Please include a copy of Table 3 which you refer to in your text on page 6. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Many expressions of the author are not standard, including the display of the table. For example, when the author expresses the result, sometimes the numbers are expressed in Arabic numerals, sometimes in words, and some sentences are not clear.Please refer to the published article format and expression for revision. Reviewer #2: Does the manuscript adhere to the PLOS Data Policy? Additional details can be found at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/materials-and-software-sharing. (Answer options: Yes, No "I don’t know" 1. It is obvious that the writing need to be improved. I suggest the authors ask for a help from someone whose native language is English. 2. Section of “sample technique”: 1) The author described that a random cluster sampling was used to choose the evening school and then assigned the study participants according to the class grades. We didn’t find the class distribution of participants. Among the participants, “279 (70.8%) were adolescents (15-19 years old) whereas 115 (29.2%) were young adults (20- 24 years)”. Does the unbalanced sample exist? 2) “random sampling technique was used”, “data collectors were revisited the class room two times at different time intervals and for those who were absent after two revisits, the participant was replaced by another in the sampling frame”. How many women were replaced? Does the replace strategy have any effects on the study results? 3. Section of “measurement” 1) The sexual harassment is the most common of sexual violence experience for housemaid have experienced in this study. The author didn’t explain sexual harassment in detail, has one appropriate joke related to sex been included? If this, the proportion of sexual violence might be overestimated. 2) The alcoholic use has not been evaluated semi-quantitatively or quantitatively. This is a common-sense question: What time and how much of the alcohols consumption is the most important for the victim suffer from sexual violence. 4. Section of “results”: 1) In the descriptive analysis section, the author only needs to reveal the proportion of some important variables, for example those covariates lead to significant changes in the logistic model or other characteristic variables related to sexual violent founded from previous study. 2) Are the forms of the tables’ correct? Please refer to the author guidance of PLOS ONE. 5. Section of “Discussion” 1) The author discussed the results in comparability instead of analysis. 2) “This might be due to…”, “The possible explanation for this finding…”, “The possible suggestion might be…”, “This result might be due to …” were used by authors to explain the association between the related factors and sexual violence. It is suspicious that the author’s knowledge for the study field or the amounts of reference the author has read. 3) It is interesting for the findings that the educational attainments of fathers were associated with the sexual violence for the housemaids suffered. A health education system should be considered to help establishing an intimate father-daughter relationship in these districts. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-12624R1 Prevalence of sexual violence and its associated factors among housemaids attending evening schools in urban settings of Gedeo zone, Southern Ethiopia: A school based cross sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shaka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Nülüfer Erbil, Ph.D, Prof. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authours have addressed my previous comments. I am satisfated with their hard working on the field. Reviewer #3: I think, this study is an important addition to the literatüre, but I have some minor concerns. Data collection The authors used the face to face interview how did the participants feel comfortable such a sensitive issue? How did they prevent the bias and protect the correct of the answer? why did the author create the survey English language? Are these instruments available in their language, if not, did you make content and language validity of them? Ethical Consideration The main concern has protected minors, how did you protect them, when they disclosure sexual violence. What is your legal responsibility for the researcher? Is it any mandatory report about disclosure about SV. Please give your legal policy about this concern.. Discussion some findings haven't discussed, if they don't discuss, you should eliminate some findings based on your discussion. Please give the broader literature by supporting international and national studies. Please give some other references. for the international audience please give the other global studies results too. the whole discussion should support the international and national references some findings haven't discussed, if they don't discuss, you should eliminate some findings based on your discussion. The main limitation in this study seems that it was neglected to child protection I found the other review changes satisfactory for manuscript . ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Prevalence of sexual violence and its associated factors among housemaids attending evening schools in urban settings of Gedeo zone, Southern Ethiopia: A school based cross sectional study PONE-D-20-12624R2 Dear Dr. Shaka, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nülüfer Erbil, Ph.D, Prof. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-12624R2 Prevalence of sexual violence and its associated factors among housemaids attending evening schools in urban settings of Gedeo zone, Southern Ethiopia: A school based cross sectional study Dear Dr. Shaka: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Nülüfer Erbil Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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