Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMarch 28, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-10209 Factors affecting uptake of the levonorgestrel intrauterine system: A mixed-method study of social franchise clients in Nigeria PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rademacher, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Study setting: It would be helpful to provide more information about the location of the 18 states where SFH has been distributing hormonal IUS - which regions of the country? 2. Were injectable users all using DMPA-IM? Probably worth noting availability of DMPA-SC/SI at the time of the study as a background contextual factor. 3. I'm surprised that assumed continuation rates for the copper IUS and the LNG IUS are the same, is that really widely borne out in research? 4. The fact that a lower proportion of injectable users were told about bleeding changes (and really, side effects generally) seems worth mentioning somewhere in terms of programmatic implications, especially given all the literature on the importance of counseling on this issue. Or do you think it's because many were continuing/previous injectable users who were already familiar? 5. Discussion: "Appealing characteristics that were shared with other LARCs but not injectables include duration of protection against pregnancy and very high effectiveness." In order to avoid misunderstandings/misperceptions among readers, I wonder if it's worth adding something like "(although injectables are generally very effective, that did not seem to be a motivator for their use in this study") or something along those lines. I also wonder if it's worth noting that affordability and discretion were downsides for LARCs in the study in terms of the importance of reinforcing the importance of method mix. 6. Curious why demand generation efforts have been so limited, can you briefly explain? 7. Probably worth mentioning the results on removal in the discussion and what these results add to that important area of work on LARCs. 8. The age profile of the population in this study is an important limitation, and could reinforce misperceptions that LARCs are not good choices for AGYW. Please add to limitations and flag as an important area for research and evidence generation in settings like Nigeria (or link to research/evidence that exists). Reviewer #2: Review: Factors affecting update of hormonal IUS in Nigeria PLOS ONE This study captures information on the socio-demographic profile and experiences of women receiving LARCs or Injectables at private facilities in Nigeria, combining quantitative and qualitative methods. The study aims to provide a quantitative comparison of Hormonal IUS users as compared to other LARC users, and then probes for particular details on experiences before and after the method was accepted. The study is sound, if limited in its generalizability. Some requests for revision are provided. 1) Line 61-64: The summary of findings form 4 other studies, grouped together with wide ranges in the values, is confusing. Present it in more detail. 2) Line 104-106: Upon reading the results, I expected to see statistical comparisons between LARC and injectable users. Going back to methods, I see why this may not be possible. But in this case, it seems that there is not enough emphasis on how or if LARC users in this study are similar to, or different from, other contraceptive users in Nigeria. How do the injectable users at the franchised facilities compare to other urban contraceptive users, as per DHS data? How are the clients of these facilities similar to or different from other contraceptive users in Nigeria? This context is important – can be provided in intro, or discussion. 3) Line 148: Specify that means are presented by method, else we would expect a single mean. 4) Table 1: Mean(SD) for age is not a percentage. The EquityTool is written thus. 5) Table 3: Consider using age categories. Wealth category descriptions are misleading – rename ‘middle’ to 4th, lowest to (1st-3rd). 6) Table 4: Is it possible from the data to calculate the Method Information Index? If so, this should be reported. If not, add as limitation. Further, please comment further in discussion on how some of the side effects and bleeding changes reported by clients in relation to the method they received are not considered as known side effects of that method (ie – weight gain w copper IUD). 7) Line 279: Do you have any information in the IDIs regarding cost of the method as a criteria for selection? Given that the hormonal IUS used by SFH were donated commodities, can you further describe or reflect on the implications of their pricing strategy? Why would they be priced at 3x that of the copper IUD, when, presumably, the profit for the donated commodity would be greater even if priced equally? How does price influence use? What does that mean for Nigeria’s public sector strategy? 8) Line 334-335: This seems to be a good place to provide context, comparing study participant profile with that of users from DHS data. 9) Line 345-346: Check grammar. 10) Line 366-369: Consider explicitly commenting on provider knowledge related to LARCs, and reference other literature in this area. 11) Line 382-386: Greater discreet use for the more expensive method, and financial support from partners, seem in contradiction. Elaborate. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Factors affecting uptake of the levonorgestrel-releasing intrauterine device: A mixed-method study of social franchise clients in Nigeria PONE-D-21-10209R1 Dear Dr. Rademacher, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Federico Ferrari Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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