Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-07279 COVID-19, Government Measures and Hospitality Industry Performance: An Event Study Approach PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Aharon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The paper shows merit, but several shortcomings should be fixed. For instance, the contribution of the manuscript should be strongly argued. As well, there is required an extended discussion of the existing literature regarding the influence of COVID-19 impact on hospitality industry, alongside other clarifications (e.g., hospitality sector vs tourism and hospitality). Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I commend the authors on providing timely analysis of policy interventions on hospitality stocks. The paper was very clear and flowed very nicely. My only suggesting would be to have some discussion related to using market prices as a proxy for the overall health/state of the hospitality industry. Its a solid measure, but implies some limitations worth mentioning in my opinion. Reviewer #2: 1. The introduction talk about COVID-19 impact and it is need to express health impact of COVID-19 in terms and people and died and people detected. It must use the information of WHO (https://covid19.who.int) 2. In Literature review it must include goverments interventions to control fake news which affect usual commerce in a country (https://doi.org/10.4269/ajtmh.20-0536). 3. One of the first evaluation of impact in hospitality workers by COVID-19 must be included (https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ijhm.2021.102935) 4. Explain in which country was developed the analysis by Kizys et al. (2020), Huang et al. (2020), Adda (2016), Pennathir (2014). Reviewer #3: I do not like the way in which Authors explain their contribution. This is relatively obvious that they work contributes to the COVID-19, Hospitality industry and asset pricing or government intervention literature. What I expect from the publication at this level is to clearly state HOW they contribute. What I mean more specifically is that Authors should say: we contribute to the research dealing with impact of COVID-19 (…) on hospitality and tourism sector BY …. [PLEASE SPECIFY]. Please specify in similar vein you contribution to the remainder streams of the literature mentioned in the contribution. I suggest to combine this with the results you discuss briefly in the introduction. The literature review is missing the context of hospitality & tourism industry perspective. Please consider re-naming section 2.2. (by adding the reference to the sector in focus). Apart from one study cited in this section (Chen et al. 2007) all other references are related to the COVID-19 and stock performance. I recommend to add the literature on overall COVID-19 impact on hospitality industry. This will help you (1) to explain more in depth of what you observe in stock reurns and (2) highlight an important contribution of your work in terms of hospitality & travel sector (they are very much concerned about tourism arrivals, far less about the financially-oriented perspective, such as link to economy and strock market). You will find plety of sources in the thematic journals in the field, such as Tourism Management or International Journal of Hospitality Management I recommend also to carefully revise the text to use unified reference to the sector in focus. You use the term „hospitality sector” interchangeably with „tourism and hospitality”. At the same time there are sentences that pose hospitality as a separate sector from travel and leisure (e.g. in the introduction „travel, leisure, hospitality and tourism industries”). Sometimes you even report reserach or data from „travel and tourism” sector. In my opinion you should inform a reader how you understand „hospitality industry” and whether you adopt a very broad defininion placing under this umbrella the whole travel and leisure sector. Given the sample construction (and the SIC codes you listed) – this need to be clearly stated in this paper. Good luck! ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-21-07279R1 COVID-19, Government Measures and Hospitality Industry Performance PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Aharon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The submission improved in a proper manner, but there are required further revisions towards literature review and policy/practical implications. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 26 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Stefan Cristian Gherghina, PhD. Habil. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciate the authors' effort to incorporate changes based on the initial reviews. I do however think that some clarity was lost in effort to broaden the hospitality sector impacts from COVID-19. It became less clear what challenges were brought on by COVID-19 itself and which were directly related to particular governmental interventions. The main finding seems to be that governments should reduce uncertainty, but I did not walk away from the paper knowing precisely how that might have been done, or could be done in the future, given that there was such a tremendous amount of uncertainty related to a novel virus circulating. The authors also included information about the negative effects of the impacts of lay-offs and employment instability on hospitality employees in the lit review, but then does not discuss this in the discussion or findings alongside of their results. Instead, the authors directly suggest that cutting costs (does that not mean labor?) is a recommendation to the industry to perform better post pandemic. As I initially suggested, market prices leave out these types of non market human/environmental impacts. I think expanding your lit review to discuss some of these impacts requires a more thorough discussion alongside of them and this discussion should inform your recommendations. I also think your recommendations could be more specific, particularly, if government interventions somehow directly increased uncertainty, what would uncertainty reduction policies have looked like or could look like in the future. Also, it isn't your fault necessarily, its a peril of trying to do timely research in rapidly fluctuated time period, but now we are seeing a rapid recovery in tourism and hospitality, particularly so in domestic hospitality. Can anything be gathered through an understanding of what sub-sectors or industry types are flourishing in this environment? Is it much of the same as the pre-pandemic or has their been any shift? Reviewer #2: I have reviewed the article and it fullfill all the suggestions sent previously. It is ready for publication. Reviewer #3: What I meant in my comment was (a) specification what do you understand by hospitality industry [and it was done], and (b) correction of the reference to hospitality industry in the whole body of the text [this still needs to be revised]. Please consider the examples of the mix of terms you use through the text (and this is only from a part of the text!) Title: hospitality industry Abstract, line 53 „hospitality and tourism industries” Then, line 55 “tourism and hospitality” 87 “hospitality and tourism sectors” 93 “tourism and hospitality stocks” but in line 98 “hospitality stock returns” And then in the empirical section: 250 “firms operating in the hospitality industry” I have also some reservations to the literature review. Although it was expanded (to meet the review comments), still the literature review in the section “COVID-19 impact on the hospitality industry” (line 195 and the following) could be much better. My first suggestion is to remain more concerned on hospitality industry itself (as this is the central point of your work). This section begins with the reference to statistics by WTTC, which is fine, but provides some general information on COVID-19 impact on TRAVEL AND TOURISM sector. Please try to add some statistics & data that refer directly to hospitality industry itself (e.g. https://hoteltechreport.com/news/tourism-industry-statistics#hotels, empirical works or industry reports) My second suggestion is the revision of the empirical works cited in this section. Overall, it is good that on the literature review you provide examples directly tied to hospitality industry (not travel & tourism). However, still, given the extent of the current debate on COVID-19 impacts on hospitality industry, the evidence you provide in literature review seems scarce. Moreover, it is not convincing why these specific works have been revised in the literature review. As a reader, I am missing a clear “story behind”. What I mean more specifically, you refer to selected works, of very different scope, but there is no clear map that could guide us through these exemplary works cited within. You summarize this by stating (line 243): detrimental effects on the hospitality industry. But for me the employees job security (line 203), fake news (line 224) or depressive symptoms of workers (line 236) seem far away from the main problem (stock returns). As your study highlights the context of performance, you should search for the examples of prior works that conform to the performance-related perspective (loss of income, additional costs, overall – what increases the anxieties of investors). The examples of Hao et al. (line 212) or Zheng et al (line 225) are the right direction. Please try to add some more works of this kind, from a business and performance oriented perspective, to make your discussion more substantial. I recommend also to address the works that have revised the impacts of prior pandemic (SARS in 2002-2003 in particular), as these were the first to communicate the possible extent of the pandemic impact on hospitality industry (given the customer outflow and loss of income). Good luck! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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COVID-19, Government Measures and Hospitality Industry Performance PONE-D-21-07279R2 Dear Dr. Aharon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I think this manuscript is greatly improved. I commend the authors' for their effort and recommend for publication. Reviewer #2: Congratulations. The article have been improved ad have enough academic support to be ready for publication. Reviewer #3: Dear Authors, in the resubmitted manusript my suggestions have been included. This is an interesting study, congratulations! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Leon Mach Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-21-07279R2 COVID-19, government measures and hospitality industry performance Dear Dr. Aharon: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Stefan Cristian Gherghina Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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