Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJanuary 17, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-01757 Neural correlates of the improvement of cognitive performance resulting from enhanced sense of competence: a magnetoencephalography study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ishii, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers bring up a number of suggested revisions that can likely be dealt with by the authors. I will also warn that if the justification for male only participants is not strong, I will require for female participants to be added in order to agree to publishing this work in PLOS One. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript. Title: Neural correlates of the improvement of cognitive performance resulting from enhanced sense of competence: a magnetoencephalography study The present finding of study is that perception of an academic reward induces increase in motivation and task-related activity during processing of executive function. This paper is well written and addresses an important topic and provides a new concept of educational neuroscience. I think that the paper is acceptable for the publication of PLOS ONE. However, there are several concerns to be improved. Finally, MEG data analysis might have be conducted in 15 participants. In this situation, the results of subjective motivation, task performance, and these correlations including the neural activations of right IFG (BA47) and left precuneus (BA7) should be mentioned and discussed. In Figure 5, it is difficult to identify or visualize the activated regions of this SPM map, and thus, I recommend use other versions of map such as a render map. Reviewer #2: Comments to Editors/Decision: Reject. Poor theoretical motivation. Methods details lacking. Analysis could be improved. Comments to Authors: Overall, the study seemed to not be motivated well from a theoretical point of view. It was not clear to the reader what the implications of these data were for the academic setting. The 1-back Stroop task is an interesting activation task. What is the justification for its use to evaluate motivation and academic performance? Has this task been validated previously using behavioral measures related to academic performance specifically? Diversity & Inclusion concern: Why were only male subjects studied here? This was a study of healthy individuals. What is the justification for exclusion of females in this study? This is a major concern for a study such as this in the 21st century. Omission of many critical methodological details. The manuscript was missing many critical details – the reader should not have to go hunting for them in another paper. [See my specific comments below.] Please also see the COBIDAS MEEG white paper for what details should be included in reporting methods for data acquisition and analysis for MEEG studies: Pernet P, Garrido M, Gramfort A, Maurits N, Michel C, Pang E, Salmelin R, Schoffelen JM, Valdes-Sosa PA, Puce A. (2018) Best practices in data analysis and sharing in neuroimaging using MEEG. https://osf.io/a8dhx/ And also see: Pernet P, Garrido M, Gramfort A, Maurits N, Michel C, Pang E, Salmelin R, Schoffelen JM, Valdes-Sosa PA, Puce A. (2020) Issues and recommendations from the OHBM COBIDAS MEEG committee for reproducible EEG and MEG research. Invited Perspective, Nature Neuroscience, 23(12):1473-1483. doi: https://10.1038/s41593-020-00709-0 Finally, I have a number of specific questions from reading the manuscript. Most of these are methods related: 1. Stimuli. ‘…one of four words (Red, Blue, Yellow, or Green in Japanese)…’ What was the stimuli? Were these Kanji pictograms or Kana characters etc? ‘…the color of the present word…’ Do you mean the color in which the word appeared in? What was the visual angle subtended by the stimuli (horizontal & vertical)? 2. Control task. ‘…image indicating the temperature of the fingers was the same for every participant…’ How was the image changed during the course of the task to make the control task seem real for the subject? 3. Stimulus presentation software details are missing. What software was used to present stimuli? 4. Data acquisition details are missing. What was the location of the reference coils? What was the low pass filter setting for data acquisition? High pass is reported, but low pass has been omitted. 5. How were eye movements & blinks monitored? These details have been omitted from the manuscript. 6. How were the fiducials digitized? Polhemus system? These details should be described in the manuscript. 7. Were ‘empty room’ recordings used to help reject non-brain artifacts? This should be explicitly stated. 8. ‘Epochs of the MEG data, including artifacts, were identified visually and excluded from the analysis.’ What artifacts exactly were excluded from the data? What was the total length of the data epochs? Was the pre-stimulus baseline 300 ms? 9. All version numbers of named software should be included in the analysis. 10. It is not exactly clear if individual structural MRIs were or were not performed in the subjects. Or was an MRI group template brain was used for the analysis? The description is not clear. If individual subject MRIs were performed in each subject & fiducials were digitized in the MRI images, was the MEG study performed prior to the MRI study to make sure that no additional magnetization was present? 11. Statistical analysis overall. It is not clear to me why a generalized overall analysis for main effects and their interactions was not performed in SPM. Main effects of say Task [Stroop, Control] and Iteration [1-4] should have first been performed before resorting to individual t-tests. 12. ‘The MEG data were superimposed on the MRI images using information obtained from these markers and the MEG localization coils.’ So what method was used to achieve the co-registration? 13. The reporting of the data should include individual subject data points in the histograms & not just means. Effect sizes should be described together with all results in the text. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-21-01757R1 Neural correlates of the improvement of cognitive performance resulting from enhanced sense of competence: a magnetoencephalography study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ishii, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Oathes Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Although the new reviewer recommended rejecting the manuscript, the critiques seem to me to be potentially addressable. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The results of this study were not strong enough and the number of participants was not big enough, therefore the significance of this work is limited. Personally, I think the results of cortical source level study based on MEG data is doubtful. I prefer sensor level analysis of MEG. The brain activity could be studied by analyzing the sensor level event related response. 1. In page 10, the logical of this sentence, “……caused by magnetization if the MRI study were not able to be performed before the MEG study,” is wrong. 2. In the result section, I don’t know why authors used the description of “paired t-test without/with the Bonferroni correction”. The Bonferroni correction itself should be performed equally to all the significant test of one study. 3. Since, two conditions were performed by all participances. It is difficult to say this kind of experiment design will induce bias. The participance may intend to probe the feedback of “finger temperature and competence of their work” due to the curiosity of why two different experiment conditions they faced with. Which condition was first phase of the experiment of each participants may also affect the outcome of their performance. 4. It is also difficult to ensure the improvement of cognitive performance was not the result of the attention which arise by the performance relate feedback. Current control condition is not performance related condition, any performance related feedback may induce similar results like target condition. 5. Authors should also perform sensor level analysis of MEG data to confirm the relation between enhance sense of competence and the improvement of cognitive performance by neural rhythms. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: DUAN Fang [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-21-01757R2 Neural correlates of the improvement of cognitive performance resulting from enhanced sense of competence: a magnetoencephalography study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ishii, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== To be considered for publication, please provide the details and rationale requested by Reviewer #3 for the source analyses. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 13 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Oathes Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Author answer most of my questions. But on the issue of source level study, as I said, in my opinion the results of cortical source level study based on MEG data is doubtful. Clarify the precise brain region is a good will, however 160 channels of MEG may be can not provide adequate information to reconstruct source level estimation. If authors insist on source level, at least, they should select proper parameters to ensure they could avoid ill-pose issue during the source level studies. Therefore, I suggest authors descript detail of the parameter setting of source level study. And discuss on the aspect of why they set those parameters, only based on other references? Or based on the theory of source reconstruction. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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