Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 21, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-33057 Proximity Can Induce Diverse Friendships: A Large Randomized Classroom Experiment PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rohrer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I agree with the reviewers that the paper covers an interesting topic and it is overall well executed. However, both reviewers have some concerns about your research design and/or the interpretation of the results. Furthermore, they suggest a number of ways to improve further your analysis. More specifically, I agree with Reviewer #2 that you should provide, if available, ex-ante information on pre-treatment students’ friendship and pre-treatment seating rules. This piece of information is crucial especially for pupils in higher grades. Furthermore, you specify in the paper that the students were randomly seated in three main subjects, but t is not clear how you chose these subjects and, most importantly, what happens during the other subjects. I also recommend to discuss more in detail the issues of unobservable teacher characteristics and sample selection raised by the same reviewer. Finally, as suggested by Reviewer #1, it may be interesting to investigate the existence of heterogeneous effects by class size. Regarding heterogeneous effects already discussed in this version of the paper, the reviewer provides a number of suggestions to clarify your results. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper reports results from a field experiment conducted on a sample of Hungarian pupils enrolled in primary school. It shows that exogenous induced physical proximity might increase the likelihood of friendship formation. This effect seems stronger when the physical proximity is induced on students with a higher degree of "similarity". I find this paper quite interesting and generally well-executed. Overall, I see the potential for publication. I have just a couple of comments, which are reported below. 1) I would suggest moving the section "Modification-by-Similarity Hypothesis: Moderating Influence of Gender, Educational Achievement and Ethnicity" before section "Modification-by-Similarity Hypothesis: Moderating Role of Overall Similarity". I feel it is better to understand first the characteristics driving the effects' heterogeneity and then an overall assessment via a comprehensive measure of similarity. 2) Looking at the results for each dimension of similarity separately, it seems that gender is the only characteristic that matters in altering the primary effect of being a deskmate. Indeed, the grouped GPA and ethnicity marginal effects are never statistically significantly different from each other (Fig 1, H and F). This aspect should also be clarified in the text. For instance, the last sentence in the abstract gives the impression that ethnicity seems to be a relevant character but is not that clear from the results. 3) With the class fixed effects, you control for the unobservables related to the class. However, could you highlight how the effect changes depending on the size of the class-size? Is the effect stronger in larger classes? It should be appropriate to run an interaction model with an indicator for sample size (for instance, being in the top or bottom tertile of class-size distribution), but given how the results are presented, it could also work a sample splitting. Reviewer #2: Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? I have some concerns on the design: - ex-ante information: we miss information on students’ ex-ante friendship relationship within the class. This would have allowed a much cleaner design and test of the research hypotheses. Do the authors have such information? - how are students’ seat decided usually? Do students choose? Are they in alphabetical order? Do the authors have information on the previous seating scheme within each class? - why do the authors choose only three subjects? I imagine they are the subjects who represent most of the teaching hours. But, wouldn’t be better to ask to fix students’ seat for all the teaching subjects? It is not clear what happens during the other subjects. Do students change their seating when the subject changes? Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? I list here some concerns: - selection: it can happen at different levels. First, line 127, recruitment depends on teachers’ decision to implement the protocol. Teachers deciding to take part to the study may have unobserved characteristics that also influence pupils attitudes towards - let’s call them - “several kinds” of friendship. Second, some schools are then dropped because they did not meet the inclusion criteria; third students and schools are dropped from the sample because they did not answer the friendship-nomination item which is used to create the outcome variable. The authors should show that selection is not an issue. The first step in this direction would be to compare observable characteristics across samples. - can the authors check the robustness without students with self reported measures? - line 149: have you checked the robustness of results without such 5.6% - line 329: can the authors comment on the size of the effect? 1.6 compared with 7 percentage points seems quite a relevant difference - the authors can include equations of the estimated models and tables with the estimation results. This would help to understand their econometric technique and make the reading of the paper more fluent Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? - the authors can include equations of the estimated models and tables with the estimation results. This would help to understand their econometric technique and make the reading of the paper more fluent - Please, spellcheck the paper because I have spotted some typos: i.e. line 154 “students”; line 155 “with”; line 250 “be friend”; line 461 “replicating” ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Revision 1 |
PONE-D-20-33057R1 Proximity Can Induce Diverse Friendships: A Large Randomized Classroom Experiment PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rohrer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. While one of the two reviewers is happy with how you dealt with her main comments in this version of your paper, the other reviewer has raised a couple of concerns that I fully share. The main issue that can threat your identification strategy remains self-selection, which may be influenced by treatment status. The reviewer provides an illuminating example on this. If you do not have data to provide further robustness checks on this issue, you should at least discuss whether and how this may influence your estimates. Similarly, you should discuss more clearly the role of pre-existing friendships in driving your results. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 21 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Federica Maria Origo Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I think that the authors have done a good job in addressing the reviewers’ comments and the revised version of the paper is much clearer. I still have some comments: - about selection: first, I think that, if the authors do not want or can show the observable characteristics of the teachers and schools that selected out of the study, at least they should discuss the external validity of the study; second, as regards selection on the outcome variable, my concern is that selection may be influenced by the treatment status. Just as an example, it may happen that parents whose child was not happy with the intervention because he could not establish a good bond with the deskmate, are more likely to avoid giving consent. This in turn may be more likely to happen among dissimilar pairs. For this reason, it is important to see the characteristics of these observations and make sure that parents’ decision to deny consent (or generally the missings in the outcome) is not related to treatment status. - related to the above point and to the identification of the effect: I was asking about pre-existing friendships because it is more likely that, within a class, pupils tend to befriend similar peers. Thus, the strongest effect for similar peers may be due to higher likelihood of a pre-existing bond. Since the authors do not have such information, they should acknowledge this caveat when describing their design and above all their results. - I better explain the question in R.2.6 (I apologise for the mistake, it was line 169): the authors state “94.4 percent of the dyads in which students actually sat next to each after the second week of classes comprised students who were supposed to sit next to each in the intended seating chart” (line 180). Given that the authors have information on compliance, are the results robust (stronger?) if the authors exclude the 5.6% (100-94.4) of the dyads who were not compliant. What if they exclude also the dyads in which students did not actually sat next to each? - I suggest again to spellcheck the paper: line 207 “1if”; line 512 “the transformations of latent propensities into manifest friendships remains” ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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