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Original SubmissionJanuary 25, 2021 |
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The introduction is clear and makes relevant points and make a reasonable case for their study. The authors discuss the Adult Attachment Scale but not the The Relationship Questionnaire – clinical version RQ–CV, which does have capacity for dimensional and categorical categories, although albeit as a fairly simple measure. There is a variant with two different ‘dismissive’ categories, which I have found useful in clinical work (Holmes B, Ruth-Lyons K. The Relationship Questionnaire – clinical version RQ–CV: introducing a profoundly distrustful attachment style. Infant Ment Health J 2006; 27: 310-325). I note the authors cite research where they say there are problems with people wanting to elect several different RQ categories. I use the RQ-CV routinely in clinical practice and in the CV version, people can assign themselves to different styles dimensionally but then choose one category. I have used hundreds of times and not experienced problems with people wanting to choose multiple categories. I do agree with the authors that is useful to be able to do both. The findings were consistent with their hypotheses and earlier studies. The authors note consistency with the findings of Wilhelm et al’s paper that found gender differences in impact of childhood experience on adult attachment style. This wasn’t considered in this paper, but would be worth exploring. Can this be added to the paper? In the results, while the study was able to differentiate normal/secure and anxious/avoidant styles, which are important, it was not able to do the same for a dismissive/independent style, which is problematic as it has important interpersonal and health service utilisation implications. Nonetheless, the discussion does make some useful points about what the various attachment types are conveying. Having ‘students only’ participants is a limitation in terms of generalisability, as noted by the authors. Perhaps the authors could speculate on what differences (if any) a wider group might make. Style The writing is coherent and clear. It would be possible to cut down some words as there is some repetition, e.g, text on page 18 lines 386-389 is pretty repeated on page 23 lines 505-513. The tables are clear and well-presented. Reviewer #2: The manuscript uses modern, sophisticated, and powerful analytical strategies and tools, and this is, in my opinion, a strength of the proposal. It is not usual to start with the strict FA approaches previous to the FMA and even less usual is to assess validity evidence using a full structural equation model. With regards to FMA in particular, I believe it is a more powerful and appropriate tool than more approximate approaches such as latent class or taxometric analysis. However, the complexity of the method also implies limitations. In particular, imposed constraints within class (measurement invariance) might impair the relative fit of models with more classes. In this respect, however, I agree with the authors’ choice and believe that these constraints are unavoidable: the more flexible and complex a model is made, the more unstable it becomes, and, even with the invariance constraints, the FMA models used in the study are very complex. Furthermore, the two-class solution fits clearly better than the competing alternatives, and the results (including those concerned with validity) are sound. In the same line of the comments above, it is at first sight somewhat disappointing that, after so many previous multi-classes an taxometric proposals, the FMA results suggests here a quite simple, quasi-dimensional solution consisting of a general class and a relatively minor (insecure attachment) class. In principle, I believe that this parsimonious solution is essentially correct and well- supported from the data, but also believe that it has to be considered as a starting proposal that warrants further research. Thus, it is possible that the use of a psychometrically superior instrument, perhaps with a simpler factor structure, might allow to fit FMA models with less constraints, making possible a more fine-grained analysis and, perhaps, the identification of further (although possibly minor) classes. On the other hand, in order to generalize their findings, the analyses of more heterogeneous samples than the one reported in the future is needed because it may determine if the two profiles founded in this study are enough or if in this case other ones may appear. To sum up, although this study represents a good starting point, with an appropriate methodology as well as clear and sound results for the stated objectives, it is not sufficient to provide a definitive answer on the number and kind of adult attachment profiles. Further studies are needed, using this methodology in other more well-known instruments in this field, such as the Relationship Questionnaire, using more heterogeneous samples, to know whether if the results are generalizable to other instruments and samples. The authors should discuss this more in deep in the Discussion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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