Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-30837 Prediction of Preterm Birth in Nulliparous Women Using Logistic Regression and Machine Learning PLOS ONE Dear Dr. McDonald, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the issues raised by the reviewers, please provide the code for AI if possible. It is an interesting approach and might be further improved with new data. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 13 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study Authors constructed by using logistic regression analysis and machine learning technique an algorithm to predict preterm labor defined as < 37 weeks. The argument is of interest, the number of women considered relevant and an elegant statistical approach was used. So I would like to congratulate with Authors for their effort My comments are as follows 1) did Authors differentiate spontaneous from iatrogenic preterm delivery? This is of crucial since women with pregestational diseases (diabetes) or developing medical complications are frequently induced preterm and this may flaw the algorithm 2)although stated as a limitation I suggest Authors to perform their analysis also at earlier gestational age (e.g. < 34 and or 32 weeks) that are more clinical significant 3)it should be acknowledged that data on ultrasonographic measurement of the uterine cervix are missing since at present it is considered the powerful predictive variables. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, Belaghi et al use a database of nulliparous women who delivered in Ontario, Canada to predict PTB using both logistic regression and machine learning techniques. They found that using data available from the second trimester improved their prediction models using both approaches. The paper is well-written and easy to understand. However, several important questions arise from this study in its current form: 1. Spontaneous PTB: How was this defined? This is not clear from the manuscript. This should be clarified. Further, as the authors allude but do not directly discuss, PTB can be broadly classified into provider-initiated PTB and spontaneous PTB. The pathophysiology of spontaneous PTB is very different than that of provider-initiated PTB. Although this study is by no means the first study to group PTB broadly into one category, it should directly address the reality that PTB has many phenotypes and that a prediction algorithm that is trying to predict all PTB inherently has many limitations. An algorithm that predicts spontaneous PTB may be of greater utility and greater accuracy than an algorithm that tries to predict both spontaneous PTB and HELLP syndrome necessitating provider-initiated delivery. Further, in the abstract, the authors compare their model to the negative predictive value of a fetal fibronectin test. A fetal fibronectin test is ONLY used to predict spontaneous PTB, not all PTB. Consequently, this comparison is of little utility. Further, what percentage of PTB included in this study was spontaneous? This is not clear from the manuscript. If possible, the authors should provider information on the various phenotypes of PTB and how they were ascertained. This information is of significant clinical utility. 2. PAPP-A: In the abstract, the authors mention "abnormal pregnancy-associated plasma protein-A contractions" as being strongly associated with PTB. However, how a PAPP-A contraction was defined is unclear, as this contraction is never mentioned again. Is this meant to read concentration, not contraction? 3. Complications during pregnancy: No definition of moderate complications is provided in the manuscript. Additionally, what percentage of women had each of the severe complications listed on page 6 is not clear. The only clarity regarding this variable is provided on page 6: "The variable, complications during pregnancy, had more than 600 categories and we classified those data into three groups based on the expert opinion of our in-home maternal-fetal specialist, including no complications, moderate complications, and severe complications (including hypertensive disorder, placental abnormalities, and maternal complications during this pregnancy, such as antepartum bleeding)." As severe complications of pregnancy were highly associated with PTB, it would be helpful to better understand this variable. Further, if possible, these complications should be separated and included in the model, as one would expect preeclampsia and HELLP are more likely to lead to provider-initiated PTB and antepartum bleeding to be associated with abruption and preterm labor, which would likely lead to spontaneous PTB. 4. Aneuploidy: This study does not directly address aneuploidy or trisomy pregnancies. However, the most significant predictors of PTB in this study were diabetes and PAPP-A. Diabetes and low PAPP-A are both associated with trisomy pregnancies, and trisomy pregnancies have increased risks of PTB. Consequently, this should be addressed/clarified in this manuscript. 5. Grammar: Please carefully review the manuscript at length for typos. Below are several that were identified on my review: - A parenthesis is missing after "(Supplemental Table 2" on page 6. - In the last paragraph on page 9, the first sentence should include an "s" after "other model." - An extra parenthesis should be removed after "(logistic regression, Supplementary Figure 2))" and "(logistic regression, Supplementary Figure 3))" on page 10. - "Table S8" should be renamed "Supplemental Table 8" to be consistent with the rest of the manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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