Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJune 25, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-19631 Cardiovascular morbidity in patients with Chronic Kidney Disease of uncertain aetiology in Sri Lanka: a tubular interstitial nephropathy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hettiarachchi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have raised important issues which need to be addressed to strengthen the paper. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 12 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please amend your current ethics statement to address the following concerns: a) Did participants provide their written or verbal informed consent to participate in this study? b) If consent was verbal, please explain i) why written consent was not obtained, ii) how you documented participant consent, and iii) whether the ethics committees/IRB approved this consent procedure. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study addresses an important yet unaddressed topic - Cardiovascular risk in CKDu. The authors outline the study aims as identifying the prevalence and the risk of CVD in patients with CKDu, however the methods described in the study and sampling approaches would need to address the following Mean duration of hospital based follow up of patients with CKDu at the study sites as this are likely to have an impact on the findings on the cardiovascular risk profile. Sample size calculations ( taking into consideration the prevalence of CKDu in the endemic regions of Wilgamuwa and Giradurukotte). Any attempts to document history of first degree relatives with cardiovascular events or inherited disorders of lipid metabolism ( Familial Hypercholesterolemia). Cardiovascular risk calculation - Prior studies from Srilanka have indicated that Framingham Risk / UKPS risk engines are better for CVD risk screening for detecting subclinical Atherosclerosis as compared to the WHO Risk tools (Journal of Clinical and Diagnostic Research: JCDR. 2016 Jul;10(7):OC09.) More details on the following would be useful Line 164: All 132 CKDu confirmed subjects - Where these newly confirmed CKDu during the study period at these two referral centres?. It would also be useful to understand the proportion of CKD patient pool from which these were confirmed and if there were any similarities in the baseline risk profiles as the manuscript restricts the analysis to CKDu with or without IHD however draws inferences comparing with CKD in general. Line 193 Table 2 : Self reported IHD, Myocardial Infarction in 5 participants - was this validated with hospital records, discharge summary or EKG/ ECHO findings during the evaluation. Line 336: Hyperuricemia showed a substantial risk for IHD. There have been reports on the potential association of Hyperuricemia as a risk for CKDu in the Mesoamerican Nephropathy ( Line 341) suggesting that repeated episodes of AKI might be resulting in CKDu. Is the study adequately powered to draw the inference the significant association? Line 348 17.65%,(n=21) of later onset of diabetes or HbA1c ≥ 6.5% was identified, would be important to establish what proportion of the subjects had HbA1C values qualifying for Prediabetes at the time of CKDu diagnosis? Line 353 The study did not show a similar association between IHD and HbA1c level, Neither does the study show any association with respect to an increased BMI between those with IHD in the CKDu and those without IHD ( Table 2 , BMI > 23 p =0.686) , it might be important highlight if there are any such differences in among the CKD populations with or without IHD in the Sri Lankan context. It would be important to also know what proportion of the subjects were on ACE inhibitors, angiotensin receptor blockers, ß blockers, ASA and Statins and duration of being on these as the cardiovascular risk assessments are likely to be impacted by these interventions. Reviewer #2: PLOS ONE Cardiovascular morbidity in patients with Chronic Kidney Disease of uncertain aetiology in Sri Lanka: a tubular interstitial nephropathy This is an interesting piece of work and relevant for clinicians globally caring for patients with CKDu. The question of whether the risk of cardiovascular disease/morbidity in patients with CKDu is the same as those with CKD is important for patients, clinicians and health care providers. The authors have conducted a study with reasonable scientific rigour, but the writing needs some more work to make the results easy to understand. The discussion needs to be reframed to focus on the main finding that the rates of cv events are lower and patients are likely to survive to needing treatment for eskd and delaying the onset of eskd is crucial to their management Please see specific comments below. Abstract Line 30 – I suggest re-write as below Cardiovascular disease (CVD) is the leading cause of morbidity and mortality in patients with ‘traditional’ chronic kidney disease (CKD), however, chronic kidney disease of uncertain aetiology (CKDu), a tubular interstitial nephropathy is typically minimally proteinuric without high rates of associated hypertension or vascular disease and it is unknown if the rates of cardiovascular disease are similar. Line 33 - This study aimed to identify the prevalence and the risk of CVD in patients with CKDu. Delete the rest of the sentence. Line 36 remove the word ‘to.’ Instead of the work current use baseline Perhaps rewrite the sentence starting with in order to – A detailed medical history, blood pressure, electrocardiogram (resting and six minutes vigorous walking) and echocardiograms, appropriate laboratory parameters and a medical record review was used to collect data at baseline. The WHO/Pan American Health Organization, cardiovascular risk calculator was employed to determine the future risk of CVD. Line 41 – rewrite to – The clinics had recorded xx number of patients with CKDu, of these 119 consented to participation in the study. Line 44 – add years Line 49 – add planning for eskd services or something along those lines. Introduction Line 55 – Perhaps say tat all stages of CKD are associated with increased cvd risk Line 57 - ?delete the sentence starting with structural and …. Line 63/Paragraph 2 – should discuss the international findings a little more so its more relevant to a global audience such as PLOS one. Line 84 – the sentence starting – in order to …. Is methods – please deelte Line 90 -across rather than in How were patietns invited? Need to say somewhere that they were consented and by who. Line 102 – what do you mean by later onset of diabetes? Subsequent perhaps? Line 122 – reorder the sentence starting with according to kdigo, Could just say that the KDIGO definitions were use for stage of ckd and anemia. And reference to a table with all the definitions in the table. Will be easier to read Line 129 – who assessed the ECGs and was this standardised? Who performed the echo’s and was any sort of standard criteria used to record abnormalities? Results Needs a study flow diagram that shows how many people were invited, how many consented. Line 172 can be removed and table 1 in brackets can be added at the end of the first sentence. Was age normally distributed? If not, best to report medians. Line 181 is a key finding and should be given more prominence. It suggests that proteinuria is a negative marker even in a disease not characterised by proteinuria. Line 185 – please re-write, I found it very difficult to understand. I also didn’t understand if the 1 patient (line 187) was from the 119 or out of the 39. Table 2 – need a total at the top – was this out of 119 patients or 39 with abnormalities Line 201 – might be easier to say no incidence of ….. Regarding the figures – it might be helpful for the readers to have some context in terms of the rates of smoking and diabetes in Sri Lanka or among ‘traditional’ CKD patients. It might be easier to describe this as a group of rhythm abnormalities – easier to read and understand Line 242 – important point – move up; Table 3 Best to avoid abbreviations as much as possible such as LVH, K, P, Na, Ca HCO3 – use the words instead Line 272 – instead of overall risk factor better to call it risk calculator or something like that Start the paragraph with line 281 rather than the tables. My earlier comments about abbreviations apply to all the tables. The discussion needs to re-written so it is focussed on the main findings of the study. Every finding of the study does not need to be discussed. The key finding is that patients with CKDu have lower risk fo CVD. There is no mention of the outcome of mortality anywhere and that would be useful to discuss and report on in this group. The first 3 paragraphs especially should be re-written. Line 325 – is not was Line 334 – How common is BMI>24 in SriLanka? Line 356 proteinuria is an important finding and should be given prominence The limitations and strengths should be addressed openly. Line 365 - please rewrite. I did not understand ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Sradha S Kotwal [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-19631R1 Prevalence, risk factors and predicted risk of cardiac events in Chronic Kidney Disease of uncertain aetiology in Sri Lanka: a tubular interstitial nephropathy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hettiarachchi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please respond to the Reviewers comment regarding the rationale behind using PAHO/WHO criteria and the other edits requested. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Rohina Joshi Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Please include the rationale for using the PAHO/WHO (Pan American Health Organization/World Health Organization cardiovascular) Risk Calculator over the other risk prediction tools. Reviewer #2: Abstract The sentence starting The cross-sectional study was conducted on patients with confirmed CKDu who were attending two renal clinics in CKDu endemic-area. Consider re-writing to This cross-sectional study included patients with confirmed CKDu who were attending two renal clinics in CKDu endemic-area The sentence starting – left ventricular hypertrophy is missing ‘in’ Line 98 – consider hypothesizing that the risk profile is different to CKD Lby the study investigators. How were patients invited? Line 250 – please rewrite this sentence. Line 334 – please rewrite the sentence – it has been reported. Line 337 please rewrite the sentence – this lower prevalence of IHD in CKD Line 354 – please rewrite the sentence – hence, it attributes to cardiovascular diseases Line 360 – please rewrite the sentence – we found… Line 381 – ECG is a widely …. Line 382 – Ecgs were used not was. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Sradha S Kotwal [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have addressed the clarifications sought. The manuscript covers the importance of accessing cardiovascular risk in CKDu. Reviewer #2: Introduction Line 58 – multiple studies around the globe have reported… Line 62 – at instead of as Line 71 re write to – Novel risk factors of inflammation, bone and mineral disorders, hyperphosphatemia, hypercalcemia, secondary hyperparathyroidism, and oxidative stress, all of which are attributed to compromised renal function, are highly associated with elevated cardiovascular risk in patients with kidney disease Line 90 – rates of inadvertent exposure…. Line 93 have not rather than were not Line 108 – rewrite to - written informed consent was obtained from all recruited participants. Line 166 and its use of readily available. Line 169 – the following parameters Line 250 a normal pericardium Table 4 – the p values should be to 2 decimal places unless they are 0.001 All other values can also be to 2 decimal places. Avoid abbreviations. Line 310 denoting rathe than denoted. Table 5 – comments as for table 4 Line 350 add years after >50 ********** 7. 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PONE-D-20-19631R2 Prevalence, risk factors and predicted risk of cardiac events in Chronic Kidney Disease of uncertain aetiology in Sri Lanka: a tubular interstitial nephropathy Dear Dr. Hettiarachchi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Pasqual Barretti Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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