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Original SubmissionMay 27, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-15981 Real-time dispersal of malaria vectors in rural Africa monitored with lidar PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jansson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two reviewers have shown strong support for this study and note how it represents an exciting advance in using lidar for the study of vector-borne diseases. Most comments are generally minor but will strengthen the manuscript, such as making the findings more accessible to a generalist audience and in particular those working on arthropod vectors themselves. Both reviewers also flagged some ambiguity about what vector species actually occur in this region of Tanzania; distributions of known mosquito species, or other ground-truthed information on vector species (including not only mosquitoes but also the "other" category of insects), would improve your interpretations. Some comments are also offered regarding how the discussion could describe how this method could improve sampling strategies or control as well as how it could be scaled up across geographies. Plasmodium should also be italicized. From the editorial perspective, the raw data to reproduce the analyses are not included. Note that PLoS ONE requires such data be deposited in the supplemental material or an external repository for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 18 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper describes the use of lidar (laser radar) to estimate mosquito activity along a 589m transect extending from the edge of a rural Tanzanian village. The methods overall appear sound, the paper is well written and the science is creative and exhibits potential to better understand mosquito activity/behavior outside the houses and when mosquitoes are engaged in behaviors other than host seeking. Most of my comments are minor or are related to making this paper more understandable to those who are interested in mosquito behavior but lack knowledge/understanding of the system used to assess mosquito movement in this study (like me). The only somewhat major comment is that the authors seem to largely skirt the question of what mosquitoes species they are detecting. Presumably, it is not possible to differentiate with 100% certainty using the lidar system but there was mention of trapping of mosquitoes at the time along with references to Culex (which seem to be the "high frequency females"), An. gambiae and An. funestus. However, details of the species distribution in this setting are not provided. Furthermore, is there any chance that these lower frequency detections were non-biting midges or Anopheles species that tend to feed on cattle and are therefore rarely detected in standard trapping methods? Could a larger Anopheles species (e.g. An. coustani) be confused with Culex? 1) Line 42. Suggest deleting the word "unprecedented" in this context. It is a bit of subtle bit of self-congratulatory praise that is inappropriate in scientific article. 2) Lines 46 & 47. Italicize Plasmodium and Anopheles. 3) Line 51-52. It should read "Unprecedented reductions...have averted" or "An unprecedented reduction...has averted". 4) Line 94 and Figure 1. The figure is a line graph, not a histogram. 5) Lines 98-99. The authors state that mosquitoes were detected closer on average to the village than other insects. However, other insects were those classified as larger than mosquitoes AND there is a decline in the detection due to distance. Is it possible that this difference is simply due to differences in the detection threshold for different sized insects? This is addressed again in lines 115-118. However, I did not see any attempt to estimate alpha for the different taxa in this study. 6) Lines 108-110. The discussion of fundamental wing-beat frequencies and modulation spectra was not apparent to this reader. I think this could use some more explanation in the text. 7) Line 115. "Nevertheless" is misspelled. 8) Lines 230-231. The authors speculate that males linger around the village as there are more nectar sources at the time of the measurements. While that is a possibility, is it also not a possibility that males remain close to the village as there are resting places, not to mention females in those resting places? 9) Lines 237-238. The authors state that activity near the village at dawn was likley bloodfed mosquitoes searching for oviposition sites. I assume they meant gravid females? Also, it seems a bit risky for females to venture out in the morning as light increases. One would think they are more likely to be predated upon and/or get stuck outside where high temperatures are likely to increase their chances of dying. 10) Line 244. The authors state that mosquitoes responsible for increased nightly activity observed soon after midnight may have been host-seeking An. funestus. I assume these mosquitoes were moving towards the village at that time? Also, how do they know it was An. funestus? 11) Line 271. I believe that WHO prefers the term "larval habitats" over "breeding sites". 12) Line 275. Similar to comment 10 above, why would the spike activity of parallel females after midnight be An. funestus? 13) Lines 285-286. The authors conclude that they "showed that male and female mosquitoes can be identified from their distinct wing-beat frequencies." This may have been shown in some of the references cited (e.g. reference 20) but this study did not generate data that would allow for the separation of males and females. 14) Line 312. The lasesr was focused onto a 2.5 x 23.3cm line on the termination target. Was that length by height? Based on the picture in Figure S2e, the height was 2.5 cm. Wouldn't it have made more sense to have rotated the beam 90 degrees? I would have thought you would capture more events in that orientation. 15) Line 328. The text indicates a probe volume of ~2m3 was monitored. Is this the 2.5cm x 23.3cm height and width of the beam multiplied by the lenght of the transect (589m)? Would be good to be explicit for the reader. 16) Line 346. For those not familiar with the lidar technology, it would be helpful to indicate what is meant by modulation spectra estimation so that the reader can understand more clearly why nearlyl half of all observations of insects transiting the beam were discarded. 17) Line 417. Similarly, it is unclear how these spectra were sorted by Euclidean distance. A bit more detail on how this was done would be helpful. 18) Line 421. Presumably, it should read "Male and female mosquitoes were differentiated from other insects..." 19) Line 444. The authors note that a female Anopheles weighs approximately 1.7mg. Is that An. gambiae or An. funestus? An. funestus are generally much smaller than An. arabiensis which is reported to be the primary Anopheles species detected in this site. 20) Line 629. The caption to figure S1 indicates that the beam was 102 mm in diameter. How does this correspond to the 2.5 cm x 23.3 cm measurements mentioned earlier in the manuscript? 21) Figure 3. I really like the creative display in Figure 3 but am wondering if there is a way to make the individual data points a bit more distinguishable from each other. 22) Figure 5. I noticed that the error bars do not correspond to what I would have expected. For example, the smallest confidence interval is for males during the day. Given that their numbers were very low during this period, it was unexpected that the confidence interval would be so tight. Any explanation for this? Reviewer #2: In this manuscript the authors present an innovative tool and series of methods which may be standardized to monitor malaria vector populations using lidar. This study is exciting as is the potential application of a lidar tool for malaria vector biology and control. Further, the in situ behavioral observations presented here have the opportunity to fill a large knowledge gap in terms of understanding high resolution spatiotemporal behavior of malaria vectors. Vector control tools are hypothesized to have altered feeding and resting behaviors and it is hypothesized that selective pressure on behaviors may exist. A standard behavioral assay has not been used with the implementation of vector control tools to understand whether these tools lead to behavioral resistance. With an "increase" in reported exophagy in many locations it seems as though there was a missed opportunity to determine the impact of vector control tools on behavioral selection. With the roll out of new vector control tools there is an opportunity to address this problem and not run into a similar issue with new vector control tools that target exophagy with the proposed lidar tool. This manuscript will be a significant contribution in the literature and I look forward to reading more about this in the future A few minor comments: Introduction LN 62: and baseline behavior of vector populations? LN 69: please specify whether this is during a rainy or dry season It is unclear if male mosquitoes refers to Anopheles spp. or mosquitoes in general. Were wingbeat frequencies determined in the field prior to this study? Is there geographic variation in wingbeat frequencies which may contribute to potential inaccuracies in insect determination? Is there any way to combine this method with a collection strategy to further validate these data? There is mention of vehicle mounted sweep net drives, but is there another method which could be used throughout the lidar sampling period? sweep net drives may limit collection times. Is there any way that this method can be used to improve collection strategies? Similarly, can this approach be combined with new vector control tools like ATSBs to improve targeted approaches for exophagic mosquitoes? The weather, weight, and feeding influences on wingbeat frequencies are significant, and the authors do describe the limitations of this, but it is concerning that these minor environmental factors could shift the interpretation of the data significantly. Further discussion and elaboration on these limitations in the discussion would be beneficial. Is there an approach the authors can think of to classify local insect population wingbeats prior to the implementation of this method? Biological and environmental factors influencing wingbeats across taxa is my major concern with this method and other audio, wingbeat recording based vector tools, especially if frequencies are based on recordings from laboratory populations. How could this tool be scalable across different nations where environmental factors will be variable? Can this be used on a much smaller scale to develop behavioral assays classifying population-wide anthropophagic or zoophagic feeding preferences? The reconstruction of host seeking behaviors is intriguing, but the interpretation seems as though a stretch with the assumption that high frequency females are hungry and host seeking. Is there variation in age structure and wingbeat? The ecological contribution of potentially understanding temporal and spatial niche partitioning using this method across taxa are intriguing. The crepuscular dispersal activity of mosquitoes here is really interesting, but to use these data for contradict HLC measurements may be a stretch given the potential margin of error in interpreting behaviors at the genus and species levels. There is a lot of speculation in the discussion interpreting the behavioral observations, when it does not seem as though there is evidence for may of these (for example: Lns 237-24, Lns 264-268). 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