Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-33423 Added value of clinical prediction rules for bacteremia in hemodialysis patients: An external validation study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sasaki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The topic is potentially interesting and important issue. The three experts raised some concerns and points to be clearly described. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Predicting bacteria in in HD patients is important clinical tool to care for this patient population. The methodology is standard and statistical analysis is robust. Minor comments are as follows. 1- Why was the study design as a basic model and added models? Why not the comparison between the 2 final models? Was the basic model validated to start with? (To assess the value of reclassification) 2- A typo in second line of introduction (Key should be keys). 3- How does the lack of standard criteria for blood cultures make the 2 cohorts different in characteristics? 4- How did the expert panel exclude the contamination from retrospective data? 5- Please explain why difference in etiology (Gram-negative vs Gram-positive) between genera population and HD patient will render Shapro's score ineffective in predicting bacteremia. 6- Please explain the calibration plot. Regards Reviewer #2: This is an interesting study addressing the external validation of a novel clinical prediction rule (CPR) for bacteremia (BAC-HD score) which the authors have previously developed specifically for hemodialysis (HD) patients. They compared the diagnostic accuracy of BAC-HD score and the Shapiro’s criteria and reported that the former was better in the discrimination ability to predict bacteremia than the latter. The article is well drafted and certainly provides valuable information to supplement clinical judgment and treatment decision in the dialysis unit. The reviewer has a few comments as follows: 1) The indications for obtaining blood cultures are not presented, and the patient selection for the two cohorts cannot escape a certain degree of arbitrariness. There may have been patients with bacteremia who did not have a blood culture obtained and therefore were not included I the patient population. This point should be clearly stated as limitation in the manuscript. 2) The authors refer to the uniqueness of bacteria etiology of HD patients. Can the authors present data of the frequency of the organisms actually cultured from the blood culture of the patients? Can the authors present data concerning the suspected infectious foci of the patients as well? 3) Concerning the ‘false negative’ cases (i.e. score did not suggest a culture but the patient was found to be bacteremic), there seems to be seven patients in Model 2 and eight in Model 2. Do these patients of the two Models show considerable overlapping? Can the authors describe the clinical circumstances of these patients and comment on the reason why the patients were missed by the prediction rule? Reviewer #3: This study intends to provide exteral validation to a recently described prediction model for diagnosing bacteremia in hemodialysis patients. Further, the diagnostic yield of the new model is compared to an established model by Shapiro et al. Since bacteremia is an important problem and the diagnosis is not straight forward, this approach is relevant and interesting. The paper is well written. The study is retrospective in design, two validation cohorts were formed at two different hospitals. Patients were included if they were on maintenance hemodialysis and two blood cultures were drawn at hospital admission. The prediction models were compared with the results of the blood cultures. Both additive models improved prediction of positive blood cultures. The authors claim that their new score performed better than Shapiro's rule, however, the data suggest that both rules add similarly to the basic model. The authors should check if they really can assume superiority. Some suggestions to the authors: 1) line 61: fortunately bacteremia is not identical with sepsis, although it may lead to this severe complication. The mortality rates cited in #18 and #19 are for Sepsis. 2) lines 65 f: please consider rewording, this sentence is hard to understand. Further, at least with CVC the time point of dialysis is most likely irrelevant for the diagnostic yield of blood cultures when drawn from the catheter. 3) Would the addition of the condition "CVC present" further improve the BAC-HD score? This seems most likely given the numbers in Tbl. 1 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-33423R1 Added value of clinical prediction rules for bacteremia in hemodialysis patients: An external validation study Dear Dr. Sasaki: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Tatsuo Shimosawa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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