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Original SubmissionOctober 6, 2020 |
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a fascinating and overall excellent paper, that is hampered in places by poor and unclear writing. I would strongly recommend the authors have a native english speaker or copy editor carefully review it before resubmission. That said, the content is excellent and fascinating, and I think this manuscript will be of wide interest to researchers interested in megaliths, social complexity, feasting, and archaeological theory more broadly. The concluding argument seemed very resonant with "practice theory" approaches examining the relations between structures and behavior and that might be referenced. A few more specific comments/suggestions: 1, The sections "Stones connected to specific actions and/or social roles" is very cursory and I had to read it multiple times to understand what “this last group” was meant to refer to. you may want to expand the discussion of what this group is with some examples. (I was confused if you were referring to the previous paragraph or introducing a new kind of monument) 2. p. 11 line 238: Despite the lack of a clear and singular definition? (abundance seems the opposite of what your trying to say here) 3. word use: use of the word “aspects” throughout: “dimensions” may be a more appropriate term in many places. Mechanism – is also used frequently; should be plural in most of the contexts it is used. 4. Finally, I would recommend moving the section "The Village: A social arena" before your detailed discussion of megalith distribution and feasts of merit. The discussion of megaliths and feast is very powerful and effective and is the main focus of the article. I think setting up the village layout as the background to discussing megalith building and feasts would better build the argument and leave a stronger impression of the main issues with readers. Overall this is an excellent article and with minor revisions and a lot of copy editing will be an excellent contribution Reviewer #2: This article is a highly informative documentation of the megalithic constructions in one particular village in NE India in conjunction with interviews with informants regarding individual and collective feasting activities in which monumental construction was embedded in the context of a relatively non-hierarchical social structure. The parameters of the study are presented in detail as are the social practices associated with megalithic construction and physical details of the constructions themselves. This will be a valuable ethnoarchaeological case study of megalithic building practices in a relatively non-hierarchical society. It should be published with just a few minor revisions: Given the prominence of sitting platforms with in terms of their frequency as well as size and social significance, I would very much like to see at least a representative example illustrated. I would also have liked to have seen photographs of the other types of stone rows with and without platforms, stone clusters, etc. This is especially true for the "head stones". The models and drawings of the "head stones" are fascinating, even if they do not figure into the argument of the article to a great degree. But the illustrations left me confused. Were they part of a single installation as implied by the digital model, or were they separately located? Where exactly were they located? Regarding the location of the sitting platforms, head stones, and other types of megalithic constructions--it would have been useful to show the location of these in figures 4, 5, and 17. As it stands, it is difficult to discern which types are located where. Similarly, would it be possible to demarcate on the maps the spatial locations of the two khels of the village? What is a "tehuba"? It is not defined in the text as far as I can see. Is this a sitting platform? These are minor points that would make this really good article stronger and even more informative. Reviewer #3: The manuscript titled “Societies in Balance: Monumentality and feasting activities among Southern Naga communities, Northeast India” is indeed an interesting read. Northeast Indian megaliths are well known for its diversity and as a living tradition (until recently) among many communities. People’s memory associated with these monumental structures need to be recorded as the older persons in a community who have witnessed or were involved in the construction are decreasing in number with the passage of time. Twenty interviews conducted in Nagaland among some of these people (both male and female) have provided some interesting facts about the linkages between feasting and megaliths and the associated complexity of social and political contexts in the Naga society, particularly the kinship and its association with megalithic building. Three important questions have been raised and the authors seek answers using ethno-archaeological methodologies. The following points in the paper need clarification and attention of the authors: Page 5: “The remains of extensive megalith building activities can be found all over the different areas of Northeast-India … built by the Khasis, the Nagas, the Garos, as well as the Kuki-Chin-Mizo-groups … states of Meghalaya, Nagaland and Manipur ...” Karbis and Tiwas living in Assam and Meghalaya are also known for erection of megaliths of varied shape and size. The recent volume by Q. Marak on Megalithic Traditions of North East India may be referred for further details. Page 5: “A common characteristic … megalith building is a recent phenomenon which was almost exclusively abandoned within the last decades due to the rise of Christianity”. Several groups/communities are still involved and continuing with the tradition in certain pockets of Northeast India, i.e. Karbis (see K. Choudhury and D. Bezbaruah) and in Manipur (see P. Binodini Devi). Page 6: “Although many aspects, such as the age and origin of these traditions ...” The sentence “While in some societies exhibiting recent traditions megalith building traditions these are linked to mortuary practices…” needs modification. Recent archaeological investigations conducted in Nagaland may briefly be included for an idea about the problems of determining the age and providing an estimate of the time range of the megaliths in question. Page 23: Mithun (bos frontalis) should be Bos frontalis (in ittalics) Page 38: “The cooperative … allows variation, but no significant differentiation (… size of the erected stones).” This is particularly important to note that besides social complexity involved in the tradition, there is not much of difference in the size of the erected stone structure. Based on the observations made in the paper, can any generalisation be made regarding the form and type of the structures applicable for megaliths found in the neighbouring areas of Northeast India? Is there any other archaeological material like pottery, stone and metal artifacts observed in the surveyed villages for understanding the nature of habitation and possible links with the megaliths? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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