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PONE-D-20-29867 Dating apps: Good for hooking-up, not bad for finding long-term love PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Castro, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers point our several methodological, sampling, analytical, and theoretical concerns. For example, Reviewer 1 points out that your sample has a particularly high number of non-heterosexuals which may (1) influence the representativeness of the sample but (2) also encourage more detailed analyses. Reviewer 2 points out conceptual issues like treating having downloaded the app as a behavior when it is behavioroid at best (i.e., self-reported behaviors). Despite these shortcomings, I am confident you can improve your paper from their comments and thus I rendered this decision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Title: Dating apps: Good for hooking-up, not bad for finding long-term love Using a large sample of single Spanish university students (n = 902) this paper investigates how individual differences in mating orientation differs between those using dating apps and non-users. My reading the of the introduction is that they want to examine the relationship between mating short-term and long-term orientations and the use of dating apps. Instead of looking at factors that may affect the use of dating apps as studied in the prior literature, they predict preferences for long-term and short-term mating orientation from the use of dating apps. Specifically, they regress age gender, sexual orientation, and the use of dating apps on SOI-R, SOI-Behavior, SOI-Attitudes, and SOI-Desire, and Long-term Mating Orientation (LTMO). E.g., in the abstract they claim that there were no differences in the long-term orientation as a function of use/non-use. I find this problematic from a theoretical point, because they seem to assume that dating app use may affect mating orientation rather than the other way around. Mating orientation as measured with SOI-R and MSOI are measures of preferences and personality characteristics. It is very unlikely that such preferences are a result of the use of dating apps. The method section gives a good impression of the sample characteristics. The sample of students seem to diverge notably from a general student population with regard to the proportion of non-heterosexual students. In the study almost 1/3 of the students were categorized as being sexual minority. This is not discussed in the study limitations (lack of representativeness). There is also reason to believe that heterosexuals and sexual minorities differ with regard to their various short term and long-term mating strategies, possibly moderated by gender (sex x sexual orientation interaction). There are to date not many studies on mobile app use. Unfortunately, the authors have missed several of them. There are some studies on the motives of use (Botnen et al., 2018; LeFebvre, 2018; Timmermans et al., 2017) and there is one study on the effects of app use on having casual sex (Grøntvedt et al., 2019) and on likelihood of getting into long-term relationships (Erevik et al., 2020). A very central finding is that sociosexual orientation (the three SOI-R components) is found to predict current use of dating apps over and above the effects of other relevant factors (Botnen et al., 2018). Where relevant, several of the above studies need to be included in the introduction part of this study. I have listed the references below. Given the solidity of the measurements used for this study, and the high number of sexual minority students, the authors should be able to re-analyze and present their findings more in line with the prior studies and theoretical models with particular focus on possible differences between heterosexual and sexual minority students of both gender. However, as the paper reads now, I would not recommend it for publication in PLOS ONE. Minor: In the description of inclusion criteria, I would prefer a more straightforward presentation (e.g., use ‘single’, rather than ‘not having a partner at the time of the study’). Relevant references: Botnen, E. O., Bendixen, M., Grøntvedt, T. V., & Kennair, L. E. O. (2018). Individual differences in sociosexuality predict picture-based mobile dating app use. Personality and Individual Differences, 131, 67-73. doi:https://doi.org/10.1016/j.paid.2018.04.021 Erevik, E. K., Kristensen, J. H., Torsheim, T., Vedaa, Ø., & Pallesen, S. (2020). Tinder Use and Romantic Relationship Formations: A Large-Scale Longitudinal Study. Frontiers in Psychology, 11(1757). doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2020.01757 Grøntvedt, T. V., Bendixen, M., Botnen, E. O., & Kennair, L. E. O. (2019). Hook, Line and Sinker: Do Tinder Matches and Meet Ups Lead to One-Night Stands? Evolutionary Psychological Science. doi:10.1007/s40806-019-00222-z LeFebvre, L. E. (2018). Swiping me off my feet: Explicating relationship initiation on Tinder. Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, 35(9), 1205-1229. doi:10.1177/0265407517706419 Reviewer #2: The topic of the article is of importance for potential as well as actual dating app users, and is of everyday interest. The article tries to distinguish between recent users and non-users regarding the attitude towards short-term mating and long-term mating of a Spanish sample of (single) students. Some general aspects: Behavior is not equal to asking if someone had the app installed during the last 3 months. Differences, like you mentioned out, might Introduction: 49-53: Mating is not limited to (older) youth, further Ranzini and Lutz had a age range from 16 to 40, LeFebvre from 18 to 34 years. Dating orientation is of interest (DAs/tinder) do not differ. You can look for both. 55-56ff: Mating is not limited to youth, esp. not compared to the evolutionary background mentioned by Buss. Following Buss’ idea, which is hard to falsify, maybe, the ongoing concept of looking at short-term and long-term mating as not being opposite poles (as e.g. Kirkpatrick [14]) could already be mentioned in this context or refer to this statement. Further, potential argumentation based on evolutionary psychology often overlooks cultural and social component, explaining the majority of some effects (Eagly & Wood, 1999, Norenzayan & Heine, 2005). Also true for 81-84 [resp. 24 & 25]. Problematic on this is also your big part of non-heterosexuals (maybe more using for motive, mentioned by your literature, and not by evolutionary reasons). (98-100: Using “i.e.” leaves the reader wondering why used three times in a row. Leaving out?) 94-96 & 178-181-: “A condition for being an effective option would be that dating apps users are long-term oriented or, at least, as long-term oriented as the general population.” This question can neither be addressed, nor answered in the sample, see next point. Materials & Methods Participants & Procedure A major point is the claiming for generalizability of the sample while there were two exclusions made: Once: Age was limited from 18 to 26. Second: Only people considering themselves as men or women were included in the analyses (they also could be dropped and considered as missing in the regression). Plus: The considerations seems to be hetero- and non-heterosexual (maybe using the Kinsey Scale next time?), as roughly one out of four of the sample was considering themselves as not completely heterosexual and no other preferences were offered, this label would seem to be more fitting and also look less judging, see also 276-277, were this wording was used. This means: The very limited category of young, studying, hetero- or non-heterosexual men and women is not easy to be generalized beyond itself and it cannot answer the questions about the long-term orientation differences of the population and not answer it in itself. E.g. the preference for older mates is not lacking the older part in the sample. Next: The limited age span is rather a categorical than a metric variable and therefore overemphasizing potential effects of age. People in a relationship are usually typical dating app users (Freyth & Batinic, 2021; Hobbs et al, 2017; LeFebvr, 2018; Orosz et al. 2016), regards Grindr this can be assumed to, as more relationships are considered to be open. Freyth & Batinic further could not find a difference of the relationship status regarding using and not-using dating apps, but also no difference in actual dating app using behavior. Concluding: The assumptions for excluding the data seems arbitrary and partwise odd. The analysis would be easier to generalize if the sample wasn’t reduced this way or theoretical reasons to do so would be offered. Measures The question about using apps in the last 3 months is probably a too short window and giving no information about the way of using the apps. Probably it is useful to talk about “recent users”? Data Analysis/Results 176-181 Users/non-users on long-term mating orientation: “considered as small effect sizes”. As the CI includes zero, no further reports would be necessary. Further, this part of reporting could be headlined separately (descriptive?), before the regression is presented. No conclusions should be drawn in the results, e.g. 184: “short-term behavior”. The analysis is referring to the SOI-R, which is considered to be a short-term mating measure, yet the results should be referring to the scale. Also, the whole section could be shortened, as just the correlation table is reported from 168-193. On the Regression: First, it looks odd compared to Castro (2020), that the analysis was not included in there, and/or second, that is was compared to the results. As Castro did show, differences regarding age, gender and sexual minority/heterosexuality have already be shown in the data set. Next, the SOI-R should be included in one single multilinear regression, including long-term mating orientation. As mentioned before, age should probably be controlled in the model (once excluded and then once included, but maybe as dichotomous variable by e.g. mediansplit). The SOI-R did report differences between men and women (expected). Yet in the presented regression (table 2) the results are unexpected towards Penke & Asendorpf (2008, p. 14). How come? How does this look in the complete model? Discussion: e.g. 222-229: The discussion and also the theory are referring to the motives of users. Yet no motives are analyzed, but attitudes. The link between both is missing in the article, please provide some further literature or concentrate on attitudes. Severe: The reference of single university students is missing before (title or at least in the first half of the abstract). 235: “Conclusions”. As correlations are presented and hypothesis tested in a cross-sectional study, the wording might be chosen more thoughtful. And: The sample was heavily reduced compared to the presented references. 250-254: Better part of the sample section. The differences to other samples should then be mentioned in the limitations. 255-263: Might it be possible, as pointed out before (e.g. Ranzini) that male users misrepresent themselves in the apps and also in the questionnaire as a tactique? See Freyth & Batinic (2021). 263ff: Age correlations might be arbitrary (see above). 94-96, 290: One might wonder why the motivation and the attitude are sufficient to report successful behavior on finding long-term partners, as looking, searching and finding are different behavioral styles. If further variable are available in the data, please include in the analyses and results. Mentioned sources: Eagly, A. H., & Wood, W. (1999). The origins of sex differences in human behavior: Evolved dispositions versus social roles. American psychologist, 54(6), 408. Freyth, L., & Batinic, B. (2021). How bright and dark personality traits predict dating app behavior. Personality and Individual Differences, 168, 110316. doi.org/10.1016/j.paid.2020.110316 Norenzayan, A., & Heine, S. J. (2005). Psychological universals: What are they and how can we know?. Psychological bulletin, 131(5), 763. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Lennart Freyth [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-29867R1 Do young dating app users and non-users differ in mating orientations? PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Castro, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I was unable to secure the same reviewers but the third reviewer felt favorably towards your paper. She thought you did a reasonable job addressing comments but asks for several more changes. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 14 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: This is an interesting study conducted on a large sample assessing dating app use and mating orientations. Of particular interest is that the authors find no correlation between dating app use and LTMO. The authors have demonstrated a good attempt to address most of the reviewers feedback. However, I do have some recommendations for minor revisions. The analysis is appropriate to answer the research question - however, what was the rationale for not including STMO? Inclusion of this measure would have provided additional, interesting information (e.g., as the author themselves notes, that STMO and LTMO do not exist independently). Although I appreciate sociosexual might share variance with STMO, my understanding is: Restricted sociosexuality (i.e., preference for sex within long-term and committed relationships) and unrestricted sociosexuality (i.e., preference for short-term and no-strings-attached sex). Thus, we could argue that sociosexuality will also share variance with LTMO. Given the low(ish) correlations between sociosexuality and LTMO in Table 1, clearly they share variance but are still distinct. Thus, STMO could also have been included in addition to SOI-R. The inclusion of a measure of STMO could have added richness to results. Apps used and SOI-B behaviour have a particular high correlation (Table 1). It is interesting that LTMO is not correlated to app use, but they are sociosexually unrestricted in their behaviour. All other SOI scales are correlated quite highly too. Theoretical implications of this suggest to me that perhaps it is time researchers step away from the conceptualisation of unrestricted = STMO, restricted = LTMO. People might be looking for a long-term partner, but also have an unrestricted sociosexuality. In sum, if the authors did not include the STMO in a larger data set and it cannot be included, I think a discussion of why SOI is included and not STMO is required. It is not a problem to have sampled young adults (or adopting Arnett categorisation, emerging adults); however, the rationale for this sample needs to be stronger. The choice for this age range needs to be embedded in the introduction discussion of orientations. Why, in particular, are you interested in young adults? Does their app use appear to be different? Their mating orientations? Given the evolutionary perspective applied, it could be particularly important to provide a rationale for assessing orientations of emerging adults (e.g., fertility?) Finally, the authors have adequately addressed reviewer concerns about generalisability. The authors include good discussion, particularly in relation to the increasing % of sexual minority participants. However, although this trend is applicable in Spain, the authors have not really addressed if this is generalised to other countries? I also do not understand the statement (line 335): 'the problem of representativeness is more apparent that real'. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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