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Original SubmissionSeptember 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-30062 Factors affecting mortality in REBOA-managed severe trauma patients PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abu-Zidan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 17 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: GENERAL COMMENTS The use of registry-based real-World data to further inform on the role of REBOA in the injured patient is very welcome. It appears from this study that the previously validated RISC II scoring system is reasonably accurate in predicting outcomes in REBOA patients once a predicted score of 54% is reached. Further clarification is needed regarding the utility of this finding and the confidence in using it to informing decision-making for injured patients. SPECIFIC COMMENTS INTRODUCTION P3L59 ‘surgical bleeding control’ may not be a term well-known to some readers – suggest replacing with time to ‘definitive surgery for bleeding (or haemorrhage) control’ or similar P3L60 – ‘improvement in coronary and cerebral perfusion pressure’ – were these physiological observations demonstrated in human studies or animal studies? This statement is embedded in a sentence combined with the statement of ‘possible positive survival benefit’ implying human studies. Suggest being more clear surrounding the evidence supporting REBOA in terms of separating pre-clinical animal studies and human hospital / registry data findings. P3L63 – ‘A recent study……survival significantly improved’. Again more background on what kind of study this was is required. P3L68 – ‘could not ALSO demonstrate’ – suggest removing ALSO P3L72 – ‘ABOTrauma Registry’ – a line or two here about what this registry is, describe acronym here for the first time rather than in the Methods section, to complement further details given in Methods section METHODS Nowhere in the Methods section is there a clear description of which variables are being studied. We are told that ‘Data from the ABOTrauma registry were analyzed’ and that ‘Inclusion criteria were complete data to calculate probability of survival using….RICS II’. Therefore the reader is left wondering were ALL the data points from the ABOTrauma registry analysed? If so how many are there and what exactly are they? Or was it just the variables that make up the RISCII score? However if this is the case when we come to look at the results there are variables reported that are not part of RISC II, such as SPO2, total packed RBC, total FFP, but also an absence of reported variables that do comprise RISC II, such as worse and second worst injury by AIS, or motor function (total GCS instead is presented). Therefore it is unclear what the authors initially set out to study - this needs complete clarity with an unambiguous description of the variable studied from the outset and the rationale explaining them. P3L97 - What is the definition of ‘REBOA performed early after admission’. ‘Early’ is a vague and ambiguous description of time without definition. P4L90 – More detail about the ABOTrauma registry is required, where is it hosted / administered / based – an abridged version of that provided within reference [8] would be ideal. A large number of centres contribute from numerous countries all with presumably varying levels of experience and expertise with REBOA. In order for the reader to get a richer idea of the types of healthcare systems / % blunt vs penetrating trauma in each population etc contributing to the registry, could the authors please consider providing the principal 3-5 countries (or all of them) that contribute to the registry and what is each country’s % contribution to the database? I would guess that the top 3-5 countries would account for the majority, or at least over 50%, of the database entries? P4L90 – Furthermore additional clarity is required regarding the registry - this is important because the reference given [8] regarding the ABOTrauma registry refers to a registry comprising of 11 centres from 7 countries between 2014-2019, whereas this manuscript, which states is using the same registry within a very similar timeframe (2014-2020), is using a registry of 22 centres from 13 countries. Thus the same registry appears be comprised of very different contributors across both manuscripts. If the additional 1 year of data capture in 2020 accounts for this difference then the data in 2020 will presumably significantly skew the data, unless the additional 11 centres and 6 countries all have very similar REBOA practices? P5L104 – Although discussed in the Discussion, a brief line or two is required here regarding RISC II and why it was chosen – what is the proven utility thus far in the published literature? In a previous paper the authors state that in their opinion it is the best trauma score for predicting outcomes currently available. Please furnish this manuscript with a similar level of detail and justification. P5L108 – Why was 30-day mortality chosen rather than in-hospital mortality? RESULTS P5L123 – ‘253 patients’ suggest adding ‘253 that underwent REBOA’ or ‘253 REBOA patients’ or similar P5L123 - What is the denominator? Need to know the what % of the total registry the REBOA patients comprised P5L124 – 25.3% of REBOA patients were excluded due to lack of data. This raises two points worthy of further comment in the Discussion please: (i) the RISC II model requires some data points that are not readily immediately available by the bedside (laboratory results, pre-injury health status can be vague etc) and some have argued that this represents a weakness of such scoring systems that require many data points – the larger and more predictive they are, the more unwieldy and less user-friendly they become. A scoring system that is unusable in a quarter of a population from a well-established and well-maintained international trauma registry is likely to be far less useful in the real-World setting outside of trauma registries. (ii) The second point is more relevant to this paper and is touched upon in the discussion but needs further explanation and that is regarding the management of missing data. The RISC II authors spent a lot of time exploring how best to manage missing data and in fact one of the key messages from the updated RISC II model was that missing values are not excluded or assigned, but in fact included. Therefore why have the authors decided to exclude data from a model designed and validated to handle such inconsistencies? P6L126 – The age range of the patients is vast (4-96). If we assume that the age range presented in Table 1 is in fact IQR and not total range (it is potentially incorrectly labelled as range) – this is still 15 – 88. Such wide age ranges suggest a very heterogeneous group and I wonder how comparable they are. I am surprised that the authors have not made some discussion regarding age trending towards being a predictor of mortality (P=0.06) in the initial comparison. P6L131 – Blunt trauma is significantly associated with mortality compared to penetrating. Presumably this is a reflection of multi-organ polytrauma that normally accompanies blunt mechanisms? However there is no presentation of ISS / AIS or similar for the author to make this association. Please provide / discuss. P7 Table 1 – 5.4% of REBOA inflations are in Zone 2 – an area conventionally contraindicated for inflation within the visceral segment of the aorta. No discussion is provided on this an is required. Were these inadvertent inflations? P7 Table 1 – Explain what the variable ‘previous disease’ encompasses. As it stands it is vague and difficult to know how discrimatory it can be as a variable. P7L139 – “Data presented as the median (range)”. The age ranges differ from text (4-96) to table (15-88). Presumably IQR are being presented in the table but it is not stated as such. P9 Table 3 – Why present ‘SBP before insertion’ if this is not significant P9L170 – Remove ‘This is the’ and ‘Title’ from Fig 1 P9L172 - Explain how the best point for predicting 30-day mortality is 53.7% is usuable clinically. P10L174 – RISC II was removed from the analysis. There is no explanation in the Methods that this was planned or the statistical or methodological reason for doing so. Please justify P10 Table 4 – Why present ‘SBP before insertion’ and ‘Blood haemoglobin level’ if these were not significant DISCUSSION P10L184 – Would add to this statement that the most important factor ‘that was measured’…. P10L189 – Do the authors use ISS and survival probability models to make decisions for individual patients as implied here? The next sentence implies that such predictive models are used for clinical decision making at the most challenging time of assessment of a trauma patient’s care when they are in extremis and one is working with limited information. Clear explanation needs to given here regarding the utility of such scoring systems and models – the implication is that they can be used at an individual level on admission to the ER – rather than their more established role in comparing institutions, trauma systems and benchmarking. P10L190 – Do you mean ‘in extremis’ rather than ‘in extremes’ P11L195 – The statement regarding shock status needs to be clearer - It is stated that base deficit was higher in those that died – whilst there is a non-significant trend it is discussed in combination with factors that were found to be significant such as SBP and lactate. P11L196 – The statement regarding REBOA inflation time not having a significant impact on mortality needs to be made in combination with highlighting that the times were almost identical in both groups, in addition to the comment that inflation time was relatively short. I have commented on Zone 2 inflation above and I suspect numbers are too small to make any meaningful comparison. Similarly partial / intermittent inflation times are roughly similar in both groups. Whilst stating that none of these had any significant impact on mortality is correct within this study, such statements need to be put in the context of the data from which they are gleaned. P11L202- Are pain, anxiety and beta-blocker use really thought to be the most important factors of variations in heart rate in hypotensive trauma patients, rather than haemodynamic drivers due to hypovolaemia? P11L207 – Does a specificity of 82% and sensitivity of 64% once a RISC II score of 53% is reached warrant the phrase ‘extreme strength’ for survival predictability? How do these figures compare to other established trauma predictive models / scoring systems such as RISC II for all-comers (not just REBOA), TRISS, ISS, wISS etc). How does a ROC AUC of 80.2% compare with other models? LIMITATIONS Suggest removing italic numbers throughout P12L222 – When discussing sample size type 2 errors should be discussed for some of the results that demonstrated trends but failed to reach statistical significance P12L225 – Need to discuss the variation in trauma epidemiology / trauma networks and systems / type (% blunt) / pre-hospital care / REBOA practices etc across the 22 centres and 13 different countries. This will complement the suggestions made above regarding explaining the registry in more detail in the Methods section. Heterogeneity is not necessarily a bad thing, particularly when informing real-World practice, and unavoidable in such settings, but this needs discussing. P12L227 – What is meant by the group in whom ‘intention to insert REBOA’ failed? Is this a group who arrested pre-hospital, or a technical failure to gain access and deliver the device? This is a potentially interesting subgroup. P12L230 – See earlier comments regarding the discordance between how missing data was managed in the present study and the inclusion of missing data in the original description of the RISC II model (Ref 10). Please explain why the authors have high confidence in the validated RISC II model where missing data is included, but confidence in the current analysis with inclusion of missing data would be weak. P12L230 – remove the semicolon (;) DISCUSSION P13L243 – Clarify and simplify the clinical significance of the findings. Is it that if a severely injured trauma patient has a RISC II score of 54% or more then RISC II is useful to predict survival if REBOA is used? Does this mean that if their RISC II score is 54% the utility of the scoring system in this scenario is only slightly better than tossing a coin - but gets more predictive the higher the number (the worse the predicted survival is)? If possible please put this into clinical context – what does a RISC II score of 54% look like clinically – perhaps correlate with ISS to aid readers understand how this fit’s with their trauma cohort. Perhaps in the REBOA population the majority of patients have a very high predicted mortality anyway and therefore loss of prediction in the lower % cohorts is clinically negligible? SUPPORTING INFORMATION P20L352 – Remove ‘This is the S1 Table Title’ Reviewer #2: Nicely written work. Please find some comments/questions below. 1. you state data collection methods are described in Ref 8, but I was unable to identify a summary description outlining what data is actually collected in the ABO Trauma Registry. making this information clearly available might be relevant given the rather noticeable number of patients excluded and therefore the relevance of this aspect of your methods. 2. in your inclusion criteria you say "early" after admission. if possible defining this somehow more precisely would benefit the manuscript. 3. your mentioned exclusion criterion is just the opposite of your first inclusion criteria and seems redundant. 4. typographic error page 7 line 147, GCC. 5. The selection bias that this work carries, yet acknowledged as a second limitation by the authors, possibly remains the main concern of this work. Any additional information that might tame this, might lessen the readership's concerns on the manuscript. 6. why the need for the second logistic regression model presented in table 4? 7. adding standard paragraphs to the abstract may add clarity to the manuscript. 8. the manuscript reads in a way that it seems that since inception ( i.e. the chosen selection criteria) this work was aimed at validating the RISCII score rather then defining aspects influencing care in REBOA candidates, it that is indeed the case the authors might want to consider rewording their title and the focus of their introduction accordingly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-20-30062R1 Revised Injury Severity Classification II (RISC II) is a strong predictor of mortality in REBOA-managed severe trauma patients PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abu-Zidan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 13 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thanks and well done for thoroughly and timely addressing all comments and concerns. While the revised manuscript tones down the findings to adequately reflect results, it would be beneficial to avoid misinterpretation for a less experienced readership to highlight further the limited clinical value of the RISC II score for REBOA patients. In fact, while this concept is adequately addressed by the authors in the discussion (P11, L 218-224) , it could also be reiterated in page 12 L 248, "is therefore needed" ....for? and ideally also at the very end of the conclusion in the main mansucript and in the abstract "[...] needed." ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Mr Joseph Dawson Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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