Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 8, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-24822 Validating International Classification of Disease 10th Revision algorithms for identifying influenza and respiratory syncytial virus hospitalizations PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hamilton, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 26 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: "SM is supported by a Tier 2 Canada Research Chair in Mathematical Modeling and Program Science. JCK is supported by a Clinician-Scientist Award from the University of Toronto Department of Family and Community Medicine. This study was supported by ICES, which is funded by an annual grant from the Ontario Ministry of Health and Long-Term Care (MOHLTC)." [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an important study addressing limitations in the existing literature about the validity of ICD-10 coded administrative data for influenza and RSV case ascertainment. I have a few comments for the authors to address: 1. The algorithms do not take into account likely differences between hospitals. In a study with similar objectives for a different disease (reference below for your information), we found that inter-hospital differences were important in predicting the validity of case ascertainment through ICD-10 codes, because of implicit differences in de facto coding practices between hospitals and over time (i.e. ultimately medical coders). While there are coding guidelines, there is likely still some variability in how individual coders apply these rules in practice. At a minimum this hypothesis should be evaluated as part of algorithm development. In our study, we used hospital random effects to capture facility-specific differences, but other approaches are possible. 2. You state that the algorithms using all diagnosis positions were more accurate. Could you comment on the differences in accuracy between algorithms using all diagnosis positions and algorithms using "most responsible diagnosis" only? I think, the finding that algorithms should use all diagnosis positions is an interesting finding in itself and should be supported with the evidence that it is based on. 3. A large number of persons were excluded from the cohorts due to hospital acquired disease. I agree with the importance to exclude records for these episodes of disease to identify community acquired disease, but I am unsure of the need to exclude the persons' records entirely. Were all records for a person who ever had hospital acquired influenza excluded and if so, why did you make this choice? Intuitively, the records for these persons should be used, at a minimum for other seasons, especially since this cohort might be systematically different (possibly more comorbidities, older, overall more susceptible etc.) from people who never had hospital-acquired influenza. Regarding data availability, the authors have specified why their data is not fully publicly available. References: Bond-Smith D, Seth R, de Klerk N, Nedkoff L, Anderson M, Hung J, Cannon J, Griffiths K, Katzenellenbogen JM. Development and Evaluation of a Prediction Model for Ascertaining Rheumatic Heart Disease Status in Administrative Data. Clin Epidemiol. 2020;12:717-730 https://doi.org/10.2147/CLEP.S241588 Reviewer #2: The aim of the study was to identify valid algorithms for identifying influenza and RSV associated infections resulting in hospitalisation. This is a noble and important goal, since often times, population-based researchers do not have access to laboratory data. The algorithms developed as part of this study will be useful for future research. I have just a few points where I though additional consideration or clarification would be helpful: 1. Because the reference cohort was selected based on laboratory data, by nature, untested individuals are excluded. This is a major limitation of the study, since those who are tested vs. not can be very different. For example, tested individuals could have presented with much more severe infection or may represent certain population groups of interest. I appreciate the authors mention this (in brief) on page 15, but I feel this point requires more attention. It is not just residents of long-term care facilities who may be less likely to be tested, testing varies by a number of other factors. I think this should be discussed in more detail - particularly with regard to how this may influence the study results and generalizability. 2. Line 288: I didn’t quite follow the statement: “Differences in reference cohort definitions directly influence the resulting algorithm validity” – while this is certainly true, I didn’t understand how the authors linked this statement to the justification for inclusion of PCR-only results. Based on a positive immunofluorescence or culture results, we could still confidently say that an individual had influenza. While it makes sense to exclude serology, the absence of non-PCR testing for virus detection could introduce some selection bias. Is this what the authors meant? Please confirm (Also note that Western Australia (data published by Moore et al.) mostly performs testing by PCR, similar to Ontario.) 3. Could the authors provide more detail on the definition of influenza and RSV seasons? These were selected independently, which is appropriate, but I wasn’t sure whether RSV season typically extended months after influenza season – or if in some winters, RSV activity started before influenza season. Some further information here would be helpful, since as the authors point out – seasonality can strongly influence the validity of diagnostic coding. 4. It makes sense to me that the best performing algorithm are the codes where virus is identified, as the laboratory data and the coding are not necessarily independent. Medical coding is performed at discharge, when testing results may already be available. I think this is worth mentioning in the interpretation of findings. Reviewer #3: This manuscript evaluates the validity of ICD10 codes associated with influenza- and RSV-related hospital admissions and has identified algorithms (of ICD-10 codes) that best identify patients associated with these two infections. Although there have been several publications about the use of ICD codes to identify specific respiratory infection-related hospitalisation across the world, this paper uses the best data source and provides evidence for the Ontario region. I don’t have any concerns with regards to the data used or the analysis. However, as the authors have right pointed out in the manuscript, due to differences in coding (and even laboratory testing) practices between hospitals/jurisdictions/regions/countries, the generalisability of the identified algorithms to non-Ontario based cohorts is limited. I just have one very minor comment: The authors have looked at four respiratory virus seasons 2014-2015, 2015-12016, 2016-2017 and 207-2018. However, reading the abstract and the methods/results gives the impression that only two seasons (2014-2015 and 2017-2018) were used or compared. The authors might want to make this clear. ********** 6. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My comments have been adequately addressed. The paper lays out a methodological approach for developing a prediction algorithm, with its findings being highly specific to the data that it was developed for. It provides a useful contribution for others who may wish to develop a similar algorithm, but the its findings may not generalize beyond the original data. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No |
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