Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 7, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-31563 Complete mitogenome of endemic Plum-headed parakeet Psittacula cyanocephala – characterization and phylogenetic analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. SINGH, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The most important results obtained by the authors of the manuscript: “Complete mitogenome of endemic Plum-headed parakeet Psittacula cyanocephala – characterization and phylogenetic analysis” concern the following aspects: 1. Amplification and sequencing of the first Psittacula cyanocephala mitogenome. 2. Its comparison with other mitogenomes representative for avian order Psittaciformes. For this purpose, the authors performed a phylogenetic analysis, determined the pairwise genetic divergence and calculated dN/dS ratios for PCGs. The impact of the obtained results on the understanding of the taxonomy of the genus Psittacula and Tanygnathus was summarized by the authors in the section conclusion: “Furthermore, phylogenetic results provided concrete evidence of multiple phyla clustering within the Psittacula genus supporting the call for a taxonomic reconsideration of the Psittacula genus.” My comments: I fully agree with the authors of the manuscript that Psittacula cyanocephala mitogenome will be very useful in future phylogenetic and phylogeographic studies, which will allow to understand the evolution of Tanygnathus and Psittacula genera. But actually …. Phylogenetic analysis presented in this manuscript did not bring anything new. The placement of Psittacula cyanocephala in the clade of roseata/cyanocephala/himlayana/finschi species is commonly known (Kundu et al., 2012; Podsiadłowski et al., 2017; Braun et al., 2019). Moreover, the same publications showed relations between Psittacula groups and Tanygnathus species, which are identical with those presented in the manuscript. Additionally, Braun et al., proposed many taxonomical changes based on obtained results. In general, anything new from the phylogenetic and taxonomic view is presented in this manuscript. Of course, I fully understand the intention of the authors who wanted to check whether the results obtained from the complete mitochondrial genomes will be consistent with the Braun`s results obtained with the use of only two quite short sequences: mitochondrial cytb and nuclear RAG-1 genes. However, it is impossible to obtain an irrefutable conclusion with the use of one Tanygnathus and six Psittacula mitogenomes, which even do not represent all “taxonomical” clades being considered by Braun. The fact, that Psittacula genus should be taxonomical revised is indisputable but commonly known. The answer for the question “if taxonomical revision proposed by Braun et al., 2019 is proper” should be the real scientific novelty of this manuscript. Unfortunately, results presented in this manuscript are only the information about new Psittacula mitogenome and its analysis. These results should be published in journals dedicated to such preliminary analyses. In my opinion, their scientific novelty is not sufficient to be published in PLOS ONE Journal. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors aim to describe the complete sequence of the mitochondrial genome of Psittacula cyanocephala. They report general and comparative statistics about the mitochondrial DNA of this species as compared to other related species. Lastly, they estimate a phylogenetic tree based on the protein coding genes and suggest a taxonomic revision of the Psittacula genus based on it. The authors need to address some issues, which are described below, before the paper is suitable for publication. Major issue - Phylogenetic results. The claim that the genus needs a taxonomic revision based on their findings is weak. First, the placement of Tanygnathus together with the Psittacula species may be due to other causes that were not discussed (such as introgression and ILS) by the authors. This should be explicitly addressed (and discussed) in the text. Second, it is not clear in the text what would be the four clusters inside the genus and why they are relevant (the authors use this argument to justify the taxonomic reconsideration). It is mentioned in the abstract that “Phylogenetic analyses revealed the Psittacula genus as paraphyletic nature, containing at least 4 groups of species within the same genus, suggesting its taxonomic reconsideration”. I do not see why this is an argument for taxonomic revision. Please expand the discussion about the phylogenetic results addressing the possible causes for the recovered phylogenetic relationships and provide stronger arguments for a taxonomic revision. Minor issues: - English: I recommend that authors seek a scientific editing service to improve the quality of the English. - Figures: I suggest increasing the font size of the figures. - Lines 72-74: Braun and coworkers did not use “differences in nucleotide sequences” to reconstruct a phylogenetic tree for Psittacula. They used a ML approach based on a substitution model, which was HKY. Please correct. - Lines 77-78: Please provide arguments that justify your claim. Why does complete mitochondrial genome data is the best option instead of large amounts of nuclear data? - Lines 87-89: The work cited is about mammals. Please include a citation for birds, or explicitly state “…provide consistent results compared to nuclear genes for mammals” and justify why the same would be expected for birds. - Line 148: The select protein coding sequences that were used to verify the mitogenome should me mentioned at this point. - Lines 194-198: Please provide more details about the ML approach used to estimate dN/dS (parameters, method…). - Line 203: “The number of base substitutions per site can provide…”. I suggest the use of the “pairwise base substitutions” terminology. - Lines 205-206: “Both the genome-based and genus-based divergence analysis was performed”. I suggest changing “genome-based” and “genus-based” to “species-level” and “genus-level”, respectively. Additionally, it is advisable to explain why these two distinct approaches were considered. - Line 207: “members of the same genus were considered as one group”. Explain how this was done (average?). - Line 208: I suggest rephrasing the sentence to something similar to “Thus all considered organisms were clustered into 28 different groups, which corresponds to the 28 genera”. - Line 212: Please explain what “emphasis” mean. State the criteria to choose the sequences/genus to keep along the phylogenetic analyses. - Line 214: Please state if the sequences were aligned independently by gene and based on the amino acid sequence, which is desirable. - Lines 219-220: Please state what “effective GTR+I+G” means (I am assuming this is somehow different from the regular GTR+I+G, otherwise the word “effective” would not be necessary). - Lines 220-221: Please provide what statistics were used to check the convergence and mixing of the Bayesian chains. - Lines 228-229: How did the authors deal with the similarity between the sequences generated by Sanger sequencing and NGS? It seems like 99% of similarity was considered enough, but it should be explicitly mentioned. - Line 245: Please change “lower” to “upper”. - Lines 283-285: This sentence is confusing. What does “in nature” mean? - Lines 304-305: Please explain and discuss why Fig 2E provide evidence for selection pressure. - Lines 321-322: Please say the meaning of the black squares in Fig 3B. - Lines 380-381: You can only say that if you assume that the hypothesis of duplicated CRs is correct. - Line 387: Here, by “single-gene” you mean mitochondrial gene or any gene (nuclear and mitochondrial)? - Line 389: This sentence is confusing. How can whole mitochondrial genomes be used along with concatenated PCGs? The PCGs are part of the mitogenome. - Line 398: I suggest rephrasing this sentence to “The mitogenome-based divergence analysis suggest that…” - Lines 402-404: I did not understand what topology was presented before. - Lines 408-409: It would be reasonable to mention what kind of data the cited works were based on. - Lines 409-411: This indicates that the mitochondrial DNA of this species have common ancestry. This pattern does not necessarily imply a paraphyletic genus. It may be caused by populational level phenomena such as introgression. - Lines 415-419: All these statements are assuming that the mitogenome is always identical to the species phylogeny, which is not true. Also, this part of the text is very confusing. I was not able to understand why there are non-monophiletic clustering os 4 groups. - Lines 424-433: This analysis is pointless, unless the results are discussed and compared to other birds/vertebrates. Besides that, are the dN/dS values statistically significant? - Lines 441-443: Change “least” to “lower”. - Line 444: Change “multiple phyla” to “multiple clades/groups”. - Line 446: Change “phylogeography” to “phylogeographic”. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-31563R1 Complete mitogenome of endemic Plum-headed parakeet Psittacula cyanocephala – characterization and phylogenetic analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. SINGH, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have incorporated most suggestions and I can say that they addressed my main concerns in the last review satisfactorily. However, I have a few minor comments that the authors may want to consider. - Lines 197-198: “Evolutionary constraints… were…” - Line 205: “The codons used … and were …” - Lines 197-207: to my knowledge, PAL2NAL is not a software from PAML package, but CODEML is. The authors should revise this. - Lines 234-235: I insist that the authors should report at least one statistic that they used to check the convergence of the Bayesian chains (average standard deviation of the split frequencies…) and one statistic to check the mixing of the Bayesian chains (ESS…). - Line 415: “The evolutionary rate…” - The alignment data as well as the phylogenetic trees (nwk/nexus) should be made available (at the supporting material or a public repository) Reviewer #3: The autors did a really good job improving the manuscript by addressing all the previous reviewers’ concerns. The manuscript is mainly focused on the building and characterization of the genome of Psittacula cyanocephala, and this is the main strenght of it. Phylogenetic analyses, however, as mentioned by one of the previous reviewers, did not provide any new insights on Psittacula parakeets phylogenetic relationships, even thought show support to previous claims on Psittacula paraphyly. The sampling scheme of the includes a limited number of taxa because of the few available mitogenomes (6 of the 16 Psittacula species and only 1 of the 4 Tanygnathus species) and because of this, it only shows the potential applications of the use of mitogenomes for phylogenetic analyses. Phylogenetic analyses also include data from 44 parrot species but these do not provide new information on the relationships within Psittaciformes. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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